[口语小组]eassay作业贴（1117）

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多多指教的哇

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10.28题目
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which do you think makes the biggest contribution to the society? Teachers,farmers, or doctors.
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following question: In order to stay happy, you must have a job that you love doing.  
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录了几遍才成现在的版本……还是shi……

10.29题目
Task 1 If you want to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why? 1. A place close to school or workplace. 2. A place close to your home. 3. A place close to a transportation hub (airport or bus terminal, etc.).
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Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is attend a lecture. Others think that it's better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?
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1、楼主发音给赞。不过两点理由其实就一句话，就是we can not survive without the farmers，其他就没什么了。
我也没什么好的理由供你参考，尽量想想例子吧。
2、第二个要么练过很多次要么就是真事，流利又顺畅，例子也到位。没啥问题！

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10.30题目
Task 1 Your university is planning to provide another type of food to attract more students. which kind of food would you like to suggest the university cafeteria to add? Explain the reasons with examples and details.
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Task 2 Should people be encouraged to visit science, art, or history museums?
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10月29
t1 语音语调超赞0 0这题说的 很流利！
t2 例子很恰当 better和problem的语调有些许奇怪。。。
t3 -t6我是来学习楼主来的。。。和我一样都不如第一题第二题流利。。。不过楼主说的比我好太多了- -我连时间都控制不住！ 第四题说的超好的，就是少了一句 reading和example之间的关系 第五题 理由说的不错 第六题 excitement  发音

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eassay 发表于 2013-10-30 13:30
10.30题目
Task 1 Your university is planning to provide another type of food to attract more studen ...

Task1
salad 发音有点问题，而且在表达主题的时候可以accent，我一开始听不出fruit salad（也有可能是我的听力不好）。
两个理由都不错，发音也不错，但全文读下来有些平，可以尝试去改变下音调。

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1. 中间的连续性不好，断断续续，给人感觉不好
2. 还是task1的问题，可以尝试改变下发音平的问题
3. 声音给人的感觉不是很自信，甚至有些无奈，其实这个也会影响到考官的心情：可以尝试在读的时候让自己微笑，你再重听自己声音的时候会觉得不一样，你可以试一下。
4. 理由没有问题，但是可以删减一点，或者前面的停顿少一些，尝试多说一个理由（大概10s的那种）

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chssian 发表于 2013-10-31 19:34
Task1
salad 发音有点问题，而且在表达主题的时候可以accent，我一开始听不出fruit salad（也有可能是我 ...

发音平一直都是我的大问题最近也愁怎么改呢
亲有什么好的建议么？

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eassay 发表于 2013-11-1 12:25
发音平一直都是我的大问题最近也愁怎么改呢
亲有什么好的建议么？

个人感觉跟读是个很好的方法~
而且让自己读的时候微笑 自然而然音调也会改变~可以一试

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11.1题目
Task 1 What the advantages and disadvantages of allowing students to eat in class? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
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Task 2 Some people like audible books, some like paper books. Which one do you like and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
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11.2题目
Task 1 Many students do volunteer work in schools or communities. If you are a volunteer, what kind of volunteering work are you interested in? Gardening in a community, doing activities with children, or cleaning a place in the city. Explain reasons and using examples to support your response.
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Task 2 Some people like to collect old things, others throw things away after use. What's your preference?
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T1:lz的语调我觉得很好，最好用个example, 来讲讲什么，就像你说的一样，细节一点。其次就是读者的语速很匀称啊...我个人感觉你可以这样说，clean a place, 比如park之类，完了提供很多amusements, plearsurements, because they can dance in the cleaning park ...blabla的这样会和谐点。
T2：语速快，稳啊....例子不错......但是有点问题，old books是你收集的吗...最好说明一下。
最后谢谢你对我的修改。