PS里面一句话，自己感觉有语法错误，请各位指教~

shuaimanUID: 3262649

有一个教授（文中的“His”）正在研究A，我自己的研究经历是B

我想表达：“教授和我自己以前的研究基于类似的原理，所以我和教授很match”

有如下两种写法，区别仅仅是多了一个“is”

本人英语语法极差，有些拿不准，恳请各位指教如下两句话，哪一个正确？


（1）
His research, which is based on the similar rationales as B, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly.

（2）
His research, which is based on the similar rationales as B is, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly.

我个人偏向（2），不知道对不对，请指点

谢谢~~~

EnolateUID: 3283311

His research, which is based on the similar rationales as that B based, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly. 第二个逗号后面不发表评论……

shuaimanUID: 3262649

Enolate 发表于 2013-11-25 20:45
His research, which is based on the similar rationales as that B based, matches my interests and pre ...

“第二个逗号后面不发表评论……”————是不是这半句话写得太空泛？？

跪求指点~~

crazyrobinUID: 2368627

第一句改成， which is based on xxxxx as that of B
沙发写法太啰嗦。出现了base重复

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crazyrobin 发表于 2013-11-25 21:06
第一句改成， which is based on xxxxx as that of B
沙发写法太啰嗦。出现了base重复

谢谢robin莅临指导！

“which is based on the similar rationales as B is” 这样写是错的吗？？

crazyrobinUID: 2368627

另外推荐把based提前， Based on the similar whatever as that of B, A's research matches my whatever thing.

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shuaiman 发表于 2013-11-25 21:08
谢谢robin莅临指导！

“which is based on the similar rationales as B is” 这样写是错的吗？？

是错误的。你这种写法需要补全,否则比较的是research和B这个人

Shelton.DUID: 3227276

没有is，因为和B similar的是which

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crazyrobin 发表于 2013-11-25 21:10
是错误的。你这种写法需要补全,否则比较的是research和B这个人

我首先同意并感谢你6楼的回复


我说明一下：“B”指的是“我自己的研究方向”，不是指“某个人”
“His research”指的是“教授的研究方向”

His research, which is based on the similar rationales as B is, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly.

这样，这句话还错吗？

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shuaiman 发表于 2013-11-25 21:17
我首先同意并感谢你6楼的回复

你可以写全吗？把你的B换成实际的东西。

Shelton.DUID: 3227276

还有，求助shuaiman：我截的这张图是civil的学费吗？我们算我高亮的那一行吗？上面的数字是一年的，还是一个session四个月的？不要笑我笨。。。。

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crazyrobin 发表于 2013-11-25 21:06
第一句改成， which is based on xxxxx as that of B
沙发写法太啰嗦。出现了base重复

我觉得也是

shuaimanUID: 3262649

crazyrobin 发表于 2013-11-25 21:26
你可以写全吗？把你的B换成实际的东西。

好的，如下：
His research 指的是教授的研究：Retaining Wall 和 Slope Stability
the construction of tunnels in rock/soil 指的是我自己的研究（在岩石/土层中修建隧道）


Professor Louis is currently conducting research concerning Retaining Wall and Slope Stability.


His research, which is based on the similar rationales as the construction of tunnels in rock/soil, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly.

His research, which is based on the similar rationales as the construction of tunnels in rock/soil is, matches my interests and previous experiences perfectly.


划下划线的句子，是这两句的前一句，请robin指点

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shuaiman 发表于 2013-11-25 21:31
好的，如下：
His research 指的是教授的研究
the construction of tunnels in rock/soil 指的是我自 ...

你这句话看不出来和你的类似。

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Shelton.D 发表于 2013-11-25 21:27
还有，求助shuaiman：我截的这张图是civil的学费吗？我们算我高亮的那一行吗？上面的数字是一年的，还是一个 ...

我也说不清，你在加版发帖问一下吧，因为我申PhD全奖，暂时没有关注过fee的问题

不过安省国际生学费贵是出了名的，比AB省贵出2-3倍


UA的学费是10000/年 左右，UC是12000/年

根据表头的信息，结合“经验” $16886应该只是一个session的