12.8
t1:直接说my manager is very profound有点不太恰当, 可以说成my manager is a man of profound learning
t2:观点跟一般人不一样哎,不过说的挺有道理。不过将have classes 等同于study貌似不太恰当,直接说have classes就好
t3:挺好的
t4:例子那边说得有点点乱
t5:挺好的
t6:没有把两个特点和例子点明。比如你可以先说第一个特点,然后说教授举了一个叫albatross的鸟的例子,然后再说细节;接着说第二个例子,然后说教授举了一个叫fulmer的鸟的例子,然后再说细节。
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task12 both are good, but I wonder who from us choose the uncorrect topic...
3 no problem, perfect
4 exceed the time, but fluency, structure, logic is still good.
5 very good except you should point out student should teach the younger kids in one option.
6 all points are included, good enough.