[口语小组]派大星作业帖（4.19）

派大星EmmaUID: 3496977

byumi 发表于 2014-2-4 21:24
2.3号
T1 parents的发音需要注意，26s到29s之间没有听清楚是什么，easily的发音也需要注意一下，and wifi  ...

唉，我的发音问题我真的很汗颜，一直不知道怎么矫正，还准备上学去上口语培训呢。。。平时如果不是因为这在网上，我根本不敢开口，L,N 我连中文都分不清楚，而且我家这边所有人都一样。。。我郁闷死了，这个改不过来啊我去。一定试试跟读，谢谢你的意见。。。

byumiUID: 3005024

派大星Emma 发表于 2014-2-4 23:05
唉，我的发音问题我真的很汗颜，一直不知道怎么矫正，还准备上学去上口语培训呢。。。平时如果不是因为这 ...

别灰心，一定会成功的！！！我也不是一次就录成的，你觉得流利的都是我说了好几遍才录好的，其实大家都一样，我一遍说下来也是很磕绊的。加油，我一直想跟读，但是没有多少时间，唉。

hj1313UID: 3476105

来帮忙评一个~

0204
1
ask FOR sb.'s help
直接说to write more or to practice writing more就行了，do exercise about writing 不太合适
注意发音：idea check effective
这题不觉得说的有点绕？对于学习进步提出的建议是去找老师要建议？不如说一两个具体的建议，比如make review plans before exams, 比较好展开，容易说得实际一点。
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no idea about it 注意连读，不然读起来听起来都很费劲
少用cook food, cook it 这类的搭配，直接说i wanted to cook for my friend's birthday, i couldn't cook就行

从这道题听出你尾音t发起来有点刺耳，不太顺。很多发音不够到位。再多跟读练练吧。回头有空帮你听听3-6。加油~

lxixi0815UID: 3407912

hj1313 发表于 2014-2-5 22:27
来帮忙评一个~

0204

二。。月。。四。。号。。。是我的评论任务嘛-0- 版主我错了 我乖乖回来评了~
辛苦你了！
我给她评1-6

hj1313UID: 3476105

lxixi0815 发表于 2014-2-6 10:17
二。。月。。四。。号。。。是我的评论任务嘛-0- 版主我错了 我乖乖回来评了~
辛苦你了！
我给她评1-6

不怪你呀 我就是随机评的
有空也去评你 嗯

派大星EmmaUID: 3496977

hj1313 发表于 2014-2-5 22:27
来帮忙评一个~

0204

啊，谢谢版主帮我评口语，好感动，口语渣一定会努力的！

lxixi0815UID: 3407912

0204
T1
1）额 我是觉着这个TASK里面的例子没有太具体~可以多展开一个来说！

T2
1）6''是想说difficulties吗-0- 发音没发完。。

T3
1）10''用的but是什么意思-0- 在转折什么。。。
2）第二个原因是提高学校的reputation吧。。我一会儿再去听一下。。然后才会吸引更多的学生来合唱团 。。好像是这样。。

T4
1）25''speech->speed是想说速度吧。。？
2）感觉说的不完整，就是说原来有lion捕食的时候，horn跑得很快，现在没有了，依然跑得很快，所以才是relic 感觉后面那个变化没说出来

T5
没什么问题~

T6
there are two reasons why is it感觉这句话有点奇怪，而且第一个理由没说清楚- - 我没听到age 啊。。。。难道是又漏了。。。

LZ加油~跟读很重要~

zyd8100UID: 3475286

Hello, I am your IBT partner to comment your tasks.
task1:
In general, your task is fluent, but the accent I believe is a important problem, such as "Chinese" and "dumpling". So, I recommand a website to you, which I found accidentally.http://www.tudou.com/programs/vi ... 70349_06_02_99?fr=2
In this video, it will teach you to how to correct accent and how to make pauses while speaking, because I can hear the obvious stops between every two words.
Besides, the reasons are not enough, which cannot support your opinion, such as learning Chinese culture. You can use just one example that students can make dumpling by themselves to support this opinion. It will be better.
task2: actually, I cannot understand the meaning of your example. Sorry!
task3: one point that the meeting room is not good for discussing could be added. The others are very good, that you catch every point.
task4: I think your listening skills are very good. You hold all the points
task5: there is a little grammar mistake, such as  "to he" "the first suggestions". And your listening is really good.
task6: also your listening is great. But maybe, the last point should be shorter, because it is not a big part in the listening passage
In conclusion, your listening is very good, but you have to strength your speaking to be clear. If you have any questions, please contact me. You can also use the software "Aboboo"(it is really good) to practice your voice.:D

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

2.2 派大星，I am sorry, I have some problems to login in the website, I would to comment on the task in 2.2 tomorrow. Please forgive me

派大星EmmaUID: 3496977

zyd8100 发表于 2014-2-6 21:49
Hello, I am your IBT partner to comment your tasks.
task1:
In general, your task is fluent, but th ...

谢谢你给的视频，我会学的 ！口语太烂了!唉！！！thanks for your opinion!

派大星EmmaUID: 3496977

caicaifish2013 发表于 2014-2-6 22:14
2.2 派大星，I am sorry, I have some problems to login in the website, I would to comment on the task ...

没事拉！ that is ok!

派大星EmmaUID: 3496977

lxixi0815 发表于 2014-2-6 20:51
0204
T1
1）额 我是觉着这个TASK里面的例子没有太具体~可以多展开一个来说！

谢谢你的批改！唉，每次练口语就有种舌头打结的感觉，经常吐词不完整，而且说的时候一紧张，句子就完全是汉语的样子了。。。

syda00UID: 3474615

2.10
task 1:第一句的I would like的would读的好像是woulds...a person 应该是the person...a bad scores多了s...upset[ʌpˈsɛt]的[ʌ], again[əˈɡɛn]的[ɛ]的读音注意下。。
task 2:I will not too worry那句中是not么，not[nɑt]...But compare with it这句应该是comparing,
例子都可以，发音也比较清楚~
有的音标的读音感觉压着了，比如[ʌ]会读成梅花音或[e]，，[ɛ]会读的像[ei]这样的。。多听听练练就好了~

syda00UID: 3474615

T^T我好桑心。。你10号的口语没改我的。。之前4号的作文也木有改我的。。

adrian小豆UID: 3395053

13号的作业在哪里