[独立写作]nixgnay作业贴

nixgnayUID: 2874331

开帖了, 5/25号考试,加油!


4.21 第一次参加活动, 希望大家轻拍, 好紧张啊.

4.21 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The purpose of television is to educate, not to entertain.
Disagree
1.        The content of TV shows decides that the main purpose of TV is to entertain people.
2.        The background of audience decides that TV is used as a channel to entertain more people.
3.        Compare with other methods, TV is not efficient enough to be used as education purpose.

4.22 综合写作
阅读 American wood companies will not get ecocertification.
1.        American customer will not value or even pay much attention to ecocertification label
2.        ecocertification will increase the price of wood, customers tend strongly motivated by price.
3.        American wood companies only have business at local region, no need to get ecocertification.
听力 反对.
1.        Customers actually treat advertising labels differently.
2.        Price is not a main concern if within 5%, else will choose products from other perspective.
3.        American Companies should still need to get ecocertification in the sense of competition.

nixgnayUID: 2874331

貌似不可以在上面上传附件,再开一楼.

whuphUID: 3503458

改好啦。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGfvnQA
楼主记得我们是互改的哈，记得顺便帮我改一下哦。。。
我的在这里
【独立作文】whuph作业贴（5.17）
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3503458

nixgnayUID: 2874331

whuph 发表于 2014-4-22 18:19
改好啦。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGfvnQA
楼主记得我们是互改的哈，记得顺便帮我改一下哦。。。

多谢,改的很好.那些主谓一致,冠词什么的确是是我比较容易忽略的(语法渣渣,汗颜.), 一旦限时的话更容易出错.我第一段的写的太长了,最后都收不回来了,非常同意例子比较干瘪.一起加油

nixgnayUID: 2874331

不知道为啥不能在旧帖子里上传附件. 只好再开一楼.

whuphUID: 3503458

今天又是我。。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnAHGPT

nixgnayUID: 2874331

4.23 作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.
反对
1.        New technology makes life more efficient, life is simpler.
2.        New technology makes traveling easier, people could interact with other easier.
3.        New technology solves life problem, life becomes easier.
4.        Although there are some problems of new technology development, people will try to solve these issues, lifer will become better.

tkt111UID: 3453443

改完了，LZ看一下，如果有什么说的不对的地方一起讨论好了

yummywangUID: 3477855

楼主的思路很清晰，论据很到位，我修改了一些细节。我的帖子https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1712949-1-1.html

lszllcy535UID: 3485562

4.23nixgnay reviewed by lsz.docx (18.12 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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请互改https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1719879-1-1.html

lszllcy535UID: 3485562

lszllcy535 发表于 2014-4-24 22:52
请互改https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1719879-1-1.html

分组是每一行一组么？？

nixgnayUID: 2874331

lszllcy535 发表于 2014-4-24 23:23
分组是每一行一组么？？

对啊.最多三个人一组.

nixgnayUID: 2874331

4.25 独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should support scientific researches which do not have practical uses.
Agree.
1.        Some of scientific researches will bring long term benefit to human, gene decoding.
2.        Some of scientific projects on humanity study will have a deeper sense benefit to maintain the source of this diversity world.
3.        Some of the scientific projects provide source for next generation. Use Universal Space exploiting as an example.
4.        Summary, even If high cost still need for a better world

清林UID: 3412004

nixgnay 发表于 2014-4-25 23:07
4.25 独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should support scie ...

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楼主你把文章放在这层楼真的很难发现，你造吗？

清林UID: 3412004

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1714938-1-1.html
请及时互改