Issue221 仍然脱不了跑题的干系ing

xqmelissaUID: 140370

看了大家对我文章思路上的评论,好象有些地方是我没有说明白,先把我的提纲COPY过来,大家看一下吧:

221.通过历史的研究得出的结论是不同时期的人有很多相似之处。

总论点：否定，不同时期的人的确是不同的。
分论点：
1、不同时期的人社会背景、文化理念都有所不同差别，引致人的情况有所不同，所以不能说不同时期的人是相同。（社会状况上讲）
2、不同时期在人生观、对世界的看法上都是有所差异的，所以人是不同的。（从人的本质上讲）例如：文艺复兴，之前以神为本，之后以人为本。
3、历史研究不一定准确，历史的研究中搀杂了许多研究者的主观意愿，论据的真实性问题，无法真实的去对比。

先下去做个项目了,老板催着交活,一点没弄呢,再不干死定了  :(
晚上上来仔细改一下吧!

这个题目个人感觉不好写,大家讨论一下思路吧,如何?

imongUID: 140258

总论点上面就没给说清楚

总论点不是“否定”两个字那么简单！如果我的理解没错的话，你的前两段肯定这个东西的确是“illusion”，然后第三段否定illusion和什么study of history的关系！

thesis就没说清楚的话，当然看不明白。

coolwitsUID: 149150

1、不同时期的人社会背景、文化理念都有所不同差别，引致人的情况有所不同，所以不能说不同时期的人是相同。（社会状况上讲）

People living in different societies and periods have different social conditions, which is one cause that they could not be similar. As we know, the living conditions have changed immensely comparing ancient times with nowadays. People, living in remote antiquities, wore spins of animals, fed on wild animals and plants, and lived in caverns. At that time, people can never imagine the life in modern times, when people wear various textures of clothes, feed on foods from farms, and live in buildings. Since attentions that people paid transmit from how to live to how to live better, it is not reasonable to say people in different periods are same. Industrial Revolutionary, for instance, an important milestone in the history, brought on immense changes in people’s daily life by more and more advanced technologies. The invention of the spinning machine let people have the capability to produce high quality and various styles of clothes, bringing more satisfaction for ordinary lives. The invention of the electric light let people come into a bright world even in the night, bringing more complex lives. The invention of the steam engine let people replace burdensome handworks by using machines, bringing more leisure time. As a consequence, people living in the times before and after Industry Revolutionary changed a lot.

抛开语言不谈，对照起来看，这个body比较失败，偏得有点远

song123456UID: 133578

body3 跑题了
不过这题不好写