推荐信 求大家帮忙看看 有什么需要修改的地方

何处是终点UID: 3545977

请大家看一下推荐信。提下内容或语法的意见。。。因为马上要找老师签字了。。
我已经找人修改了一遍。但是因为担心内容结构问题。。所以还是发上来让大家批评一下。。

To Whom It May Concern:

I am delighted to write this letter of recommendation to support Mr. xx Wu’s application for your program.

I am an associate professor of School of Computer Science of Wuhan University,and my research laboratory has been focusing on research of vehicular multi-sensor integration system, computer vision, and laser radar data processing. Since 2010,my team has collaborated with research centers in Germany(KIT) and Japan (Toyota) on self-driving vehicle projects.

Mr. Wu joined my research team in July 2014 as a research assistant and group leader. As the leader of computer vision group, he was responsible to develop the traffic sign detection and recognition system, which is a key part of self-driving car.

I was impressed by how quick he gained understanding of the research project and made a good progress in a very short time.This efficiency was built on his previous experience with another research project on intelligent parking lot video monitoring system in professor Luo’s laboratory at Central China Normal University. He has great team spirit and leadership skills. This lies in the fact that he usually accompanied with his group members to shoot samples, even when the temperature in Wuhan was almost 40 ℃.In order to collect samples more easily, he used C++ to write a program which allows our webcams to save every picture in the video automatically without manual operation.Mr. Wu is one of best undergraduate students I have ever supervised. He is a creative, self-motivated and energetic person. Graduate education will help him to success in his engineering and research career.

I strongly believe Mr. Wu will be an excellent addition to your graduate program, and I recommend Mr. Wu to your program without reservation. Should you need any further information about him, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely yours,

shuaimanUID: 3262649

比较大众，还挺好的。。。（一看就像学生自己写的。。。）

其实也没关系，大多数推荐信都这样，，

何处是终点UID: 3545977

shuaiman 发表于 2014-8-5 11:41
比较大众，还挺好的。。。（一看就像学生自己写的。。。）

其实也没关系，大多数推荐信都这样，，

谢谢版主。。如果还过得去的话 我就找老师签字了。

shuaimanUID: 3262649

何处是终点 发表于 2014-8-5 14:04
谢谢版主。。如果还过得去的话 我就找老师签字了。

如果时间充裕的话，可以让老师改改叙述的口吻，，，

koalaemonUID: 3548053

lz申请几月的啊，这么早就搞定推荐信了，我好捉急。。。

summersnow1993UID: 3467659

实话是说，我建议你找你们学校外语学院的老师帮忙改下语法句法错误，至少叫他们帮你过一下。

何处是终点UID: 3545977

shuaiman 发表于 2014-8-5 19:48
如果时间充裕的话，可以让老师改改叙述的口吻，，，

好的 谢谢你的建议

何处是终点UID: 3545977

koalaemon 发表于 2014-8-5 20:13
lz申请几月的啊，这么早就搞定推荐信了，我好捉急。。。

因为这个老师开学以后要去国外交流 所以想早点让他签了。。。其实也不算早啊，这个时候其他人应该都找好中介了，中介帮忙写材料了

何处是终点UID: 3545977

summersnow1993 发表于 2014-8-5 20:20
实话是说，我建议你找你们学校外语学院的老师帮忙改下语法句法错误，至少叫他们帮你过一下。

嗯 谢谢 我看能不能找到以前的英语老师帮我改改

Parachute-goneUID: 3464911

校友顶一个~

hellsjoUID: 3521876

何处是终点 发表于 2014-8-5 23:28
因为这个老师开学以后要去国外交流 所以想早点让他签了。。。其实也不算早啊，这个时候其他人应该都找好中 ...

中介这么早要求是因为他们真的很拖很拖
一个流程一定要走到最后才开始做，真的非常拿人钱财不替人消灾的典型