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发表于 2014-8-14 21:02:45 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

不会表达，句式简单，满篇错误，字数根本不够，大神求指教求帮助，我这样的是不是考试就基本扑街了
Technology has changed people's life in the whole development of human's history.It sure provides convienience to everyone,telephone,Internet,TV all bring so much fun to us.But,peolpe rely more and more on technology is  not a good thing that can make our basic qualities deteriorated.
  For me,Technology brought me so much that I can't count.The computer which can help me study English and know everything happened in other countries.It gave me enthusiastic and power to endeavor for my dream ,which is studying and fighting abroad all by myself. And in classroom,my teachers didn't have to write knowledges in the board,they just made their PPT before the class which involes all the knoledges. And for the nation,technology has changed everything,we can go to anywhere without any trouble,we can take planes or tranes even driving a car by ourselves.

For the other side,technology repel people's development.Students may constructed by mobile phone or computer game so that they can't focus on their study.What's more,my mother's colleage once made a terrible mistake during his work time.They always let the computer help them do everything,and one day,his computer broke,and he didn't finish his job that day.Technology make everyone become idle and lazy. For the nation,a criminals can easily take  planes go to other area even outher country,and the police can't track thme because of the conveinience that technologyy brought us.

  So everything has two sides,technoloy is helpful and make our life so efficancy but we can not rely on them so much,we should keep ourself studying and making progress all the time and not impeded by the technology.