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孤城闭UID: 3544348

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Most advertisements make products seem better than they really are.


With the widely use of television,internet as well as newspapers,our daily life is awash with various kinds of advertisements,which appeal our eyes.However,too often we feel that we fall into the traps of advertisement made by some dishonest businessmen.We learn from the experiences we deceived by merchants that advertisements in bulks are untrustworthy. In my view,to distort the consumers,most advertisements exaggerate the effect to make the productions seem much better than what they really are.
  Firstly,the application of photograph and p.s technique make the merchandises in our eyes more appealing,yet most have a gap with what we purchase.Have you ever been misled by the pictures of advertisement on the internet?As for me,once I saw an attractive photo of a clothes,which I love in first sight.It is said that the clothes is made of wool and have a high-quality by the merchants.misled by the charming model wearing the clothes in the picture,I paid a lot for this production.However,depressed and regretful as I was when I received the low-quality clothes,which seems neither as the picture nor made of wool.
   Furthermore,some merchants pay movie stars or singers a lot, who are behalf of their productions .It’s apparently that we prefer to purchase what our favorite stars use or wear  for we trust that they can guarantee the quality of merchandises.Yet it’s the stars who we trust that tell a lie for the sake of profits.As we know ,there are lots of stars fall into the events deceiving and injuring the consumers by advertising the productions.
   Lastly,it’s easy to find plenty of advertisements with discounts everywhere,which seems a wide method to attract consumers.Although we know there may be some traps waiting for us,we are willing to make panic purchase.When you are absorbed by the advertisement of fruits at a discount in the afternoon,do you take the quality into account?If these fruits are fresh and conducive to your health?These problems are what the advertisements help you remove from your mind.
    The facts in bulks confirm that the most advertisement prettify the productions and mislead the consumers.To decrease the possibility of being deceived and protect the consumers’ rights,the government should regulate the merchants to provide objective and factual accounts of productions in advertisement.

DoucelineUID: 3560928

加油!

孤城闭UID: 3544348

Douceline 发表于 2014-9-28 11:55
加油!

万分感谢

whuphUID: 3503458

你要去互改小组呀！