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1) Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a 'Palean' basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

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Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

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发表于 2014-12-18 11:58:00 |只看该作者

The speaker argues that the so-call Palean baskets were not an unique product made by the Paleans, citing the evidence that their product has been found in Lithos. In order to better evaluate the argument, we need more specific evidence about the points made by the speaker.

1.       其他人有能力生產Baskets
2.       河床是否很深, 河水是否很急 (對比以前)
3.       有其他方法可以走過河河

王老師的comment
1.       Boat不見了的原因可以是木頭被用作其他用處
2.       當時的科技可能造了bridge
3.       當時的河流流速和深度是不一樣