[习作点评] 6月25日 issue 快速练习 [复制链接]

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本练习的目的是训练大家在拿到题目后迅速的构思并用英语写出有层次的主旨句和三个主题句。因此，在开始练习前，请为自己找一个安静的环境，打开手机计时器。点击回复看到题目，要争取在2-3分钟内想出基本的思路，并在5-8分钟内完成第一段及中间三段的主题句的写作。完成后，记下所花时间。然后用汉语补充说明中间段打算用什么例子如何展开。

同时请花时间描述一下自己构思的过程，遇到了什么问题或困难。整个练习包括汉语的讨论应该可以在20分钟内完成。这个练习虽然所花时间不长，但是我在反馈的时候还是会同时关注内容与语言表达两个层面的问题。

所有的练习还是回复到自己的练习帖，并在这里回复楼层的链接。本周开始恢复同学之间的互评，每位同学请点评楼上的练习。

快速练习相对于全文写作节省的时间将用作对5月25日练习的总结。具体指引点击这里。

题目已涂成白色准备好后可以自行查看  其实这里有好几道题可以选一道来写提纲
过去4周参加了练习的同学请利用本周的时间准备作品集
中途加入的可以回头完成5月25日开始的练习
有意加入的同学请考虑清楚其实随便弄一下混个3分也挺好的多花时间搞科研更划算确实重视作文的请加我微信 tesolchina 注明寄托ID

57) The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

74) Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

133) Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

134) Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

其实57和74、133、134是完全不同的题目，我分别写了范文和提纲。57的范文和74的思路都是我的得意之作，希望大家能有所受益。

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