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The statement recommends that modern development outweighs over the preservation of historical buildings that locate on modern regions. | 题目观点 | | outweighs over the preservation选词搭配问题
that locate 动词用法 |
I think whether giving priority to modern development over historical building protection depends on the value of historical buildings. | 我的观点 | | |
For those buildings with great historical significance and architectural heritages, we need to preserve them and make modern urban construction harmonize with them. | 有价值的历史建筑 | | buildings with architectural heritages 搭配 |
While some duplicated old buildings that even have security problems are worthless to preserve, which otherwise would decrease the quality of modern life. | 没有价值的历史建筑 | | while后面不能跟完整句子
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After all, protecting historical buildings is to memorize valuable history and create better future; if only preserving historical buildings yet impact the quality of life, modern society would hardly progress. | 保护历史建筑的目的 | | (the purpose of) protecting historical buildings is to
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memorize history 搭配
if only 句子结构
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To begin with, we should preserve historical buildings with great significance and architectural heritages, at the same time make modern urban construction harmonize with them. | 主题句 | | 选词(用词重复)
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We need experts to make judgment on whether a historical building is worth to preserve by considering various factors such as historical significance, characteristic culture and so forth. | 判断价值 | | worth to preserve 搭配
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Once the historical building is determined to be preserved, modern planners should focus on how to make surrounding modern construction harmonize with the historical building. | 回应主题句 | | |
For example, Forbidden City in Beijing is an apropos symbol of traditional Chinese philosophy, which illustrates its value to be protected. Modern architecture around Forbidden City is designed to keep united style. | 举例 | | keep - follow the style ... 搭配 |
Even the nearby outlet of Starbucks, an extremely modern brand, is decorated like a Chinese historical building viewed from the outside, which not only preserves historical heritage but also facilitates modern people’s life. | 举例 | | |
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However, I don't deny that some duplicated old buildings that even have security problems are worthless to preserve, which otherwise would decrease the quality of modern life. | 主题句 | | are worthless to preserve 汉英直译
which otherwise选词 |
Some historical buildings are repetitive and superfluous-too many old houses, too many old bridges-and even some among them have security problems because of too long history. | 判断没有价值的历史建筑 | 例子不合适或没有例子 | |
Therefore, we also need experts to identify these historical buildings and remove them in order to turn into the place more suitable for modern development, which can improve living standard of local residents. | 回应主题句 | | |
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The purpose of protecting historical buildings is to memorize valuable history and create better future; if only preserving historical buildings yet impact the quality of life, modern society would hardly progress. | 主题句 | | 句子结构
make progress 选词 |
For this purpose, historical buildings are first need to be classified by authority experts, such as buildings reflecting local characteristic culture, significant celebrities’ residences, buildings with scientific research value and so forth. | 判断价值 | | are need 动词用法
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Through learning from those valuable historical buildings, we will appreciate our cultural heritage, understand our historical development, and achieve our better future. | 回应主题句 | | 这里的learning是指什么 选词 |
On the contrary, if the goal of preservation was only to preserve all historical buildings, the action would waste resources that could have been used for modern development, which could be harmful to the advancement of modern society. | 回应主题句 | 和前面的过渡有问题 不太懂你的意思 | |
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In conclusion, I agree to preserve buildings with great historical significance and architectural heritages, and disagree to preserve duplicated old buildings that even have security problems. After all, the final objective of preservation is for better development of modern society. | 结论 | | |