【515特训】cismen ：ballackxjj

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谢谢imong的深刻剖析先。

再：什么是7+2的理论？

另：我也觉得现在听力问题多多，但有一个重要问题：离考试只有不到10天了，我不敢将时间都花在听力上，因为我怀疑其投入产出比，而且我的语法阅读状态也很不稳定，所以觉得要持续进行，怕一停下来状态全无，反而得不偿失。我现在是每天完成语法和阅读的作体和复习任务后剩下的时间用在听力上，而且每天还要拿一些时间看作文，这样下来再听力的时间很有限。

关于听抄：我前一段时间听抄了大概10多篇短对话，感觉是有一定效果。段子题没听抄，因为是真地听不懂。但现在已没有时间进行听抄练习了。不知我这样的感觉是否正确。各位觉得我应该如何分配剩余的几天宝贵时间？

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虽然知道很丢人，但要脸也没啥用了。贴两篇昨天和前天的作文。有什么尽管扔，照单全收。

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27. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

At this time, pursuing the individual personality is encouraged, so some people think that we should only do what we like to do. However, I prefer to insist that people should sometimes do some things that they do not enjoying doing. My argument for my view goes as follows.

The most important advantage of doing what we do not enjoying doing is through that we can enhance our ability of adaptability to this society. Everyone is one number of this society but not absolutely isolated. The numerous changes are occurring in every minute. If we only do what we enjoy, it is more than likely that we would not adapt the requirement of the job and the living, even would be eliminated through selection or contest. A simple example can give some light to this point. If you are only fascinate to literature but not interested in the advanced technology such as computer technique so that you reject to learn how to use computer, you would no chance to touch many excellent compositions and creative views which spread through internet. What’s more in the future maybe you cannot sustain your living without using computers. Consequently doing what you do not enjoy is the requirement of the exterior circumstance.

Another obvious advantage of doing what we do not like is that this experience can make us more patient and persevering. As we all know, the process of doing well one thing that you have no interest is very laborious, which needs courage and determination because many obstacles would hinder your forward steps. Nevertheless when you reach your goal you not only learn much knowledge and technique that you do not grasp before, but also gain the precious ability of patience and perseverance which will make you reach more great success.

Of course, I do not think that we should always do things that we do not enjoy doing, but sometimes facing some situation we should not say “NO”.

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38. Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Our society has been advancing in every day, nowadays our world and living, no doubt, have been far from the imagination of our ancestors. So there is the statement that learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. In my opinion, however, this view is absolutely absurd. On the contrary, I think that we must learn intensively about the past before we do every important thing. My argument for my view goes as follows.

First of all, we must accept that every step of our societal progress is based on the past foundation. No one can say that our society reaches the level in the present in one night. The development of the society is a gradual process, is the result of accumulating the past knowledge and experience. A simple example can give some light to this point. The electric equipment that now are used in our normal living were not invented by any one in one time, but the numerous inventors developed on the success or failure of preceding them. Therefore, learning about the past is pretty essential to our societal continuous development.

What’s more, the past is like a mirror, we could acquire many valuable experiences and lessons through learning about it. Just like a person who stands in front of a mirror can find where is not neat on himself, learning about the past can provide the direction to us and make us avoid the past failure.

Form what has been discussed above, it is obvious that learning about the past has great value not only for those of us living in the present, but also for the future of the society.

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呵呵，我也收获不少
当断不断，反被其乱。我做题也经常因为一到题影响到下面几题。。。

除去作文：
先做完整的一套题，分析这套题
然后总结语法阅读错题，每一道题都要走的很仔细（其实时间不会太长，但一定要做，注意力要集中）
练习听力，尤其段子。还是要听抄，能写多少写多少

建议优先权是这个顺序。保证语法阅读，这里为你听力争取错误空间，然后再设法提高听力

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At this time, pursuing the individual personality is encouraged, so some people think that we should only do what we like to do（这里没有因果关系，如果说人们被鼓励行事自由的权利都能成立）. However, I prefer to insist that people should sometimes do some things that they do not enjoying doing. My argument for my view goes as follows.

The most important advantage of doing what we do not enjoying doing is through that we can enhance our ability of adaptability to this society. Everyone is one number of（这个表达最好改一改，像be related to，要不然就用个比喻，比如说社会是盘棋，人就是棋子，棋子是关联于社会rather than孤立的）this society but not absolutely isolated. The numerous changes are occurring in every minute. If we only do what we enjoy, it is more than likely that we would not adapt the requirement of the job and the living, even would be eliminated through selection or contest（这里要表的什么？）. A simple example can give some light to this point. If you（people） are only fascinate（fascinated） to literature but not interested in the advanced technology such as computer technique so that（这里要用连词，比如and） you reject（resist更贴切） to learn how to use computer, you would no chance to touch many excellent compositions and creative views which spread（要用被动） through internet. What’s more in the future maybe you cannot sustain your living without using computers. Consequently doing what you do not enjoy is the requirement of the exterior circumstance.

Another obvious advantage of doing what we do not like is that this experience can make us more patient and persevering. As we all know, the process of doing well one thing that you have no interest is very laborious, which needs courage and determination because many obstacles would hinder your forward steps. Nevertheless（不应该是转折） when you reach your goal you not only learn much knowledge and technique that you do not grasp before, but also gain the precious ability of patience and perseverance which will make you reach more great（习惯上都说make greater success） success.
要是我，第二段会套个例子（周围的一个人，因为做了并不感兴趣的事，经历了挫折，最后mentally stronger）上去论述，边讲例子边说理

Of course, I do not think that we should always do things that we do not enjoy doing, but sometimes facing some situation we should not say “NO”.

对托福作文，总的来说还可以，但一些小地方还要注意。如果要求是四分，力求准确，文采是锦上添花的事

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7+2，简单的说：

一个人一次接受的信息量不能超过9个单元（range=7加减2）

例如beautifully
这个词让只认识字母的人来打死他也记不住，因为按照字母来记，11个单元，overflow了。
如果让学过一阵子的人来记，简单，beau-ti-ful-ly，四个音节，立刻搞定。

你做听力的时候也许每个单元都还能对应，但是东西一多了就乱套。所以说“字母单元”的思路是浪费的，要尽量把单元模块弄大一些，这样子信息量就多了。

只是理论上的东西，practice的时候还要自己琢磨一下，会有一些指导作用的。

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很有道理，再练习的时候可以注意一下。

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感谢ballackxjj，批改如此细致。

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今天早上做了01.10何02.01，听力特别是段子题超级之差，但也不是前所未有的。实在不好意思在这说了，怕给两位丢人呀。短信告诉两位吧。

语法分别为0和4个，阅读分别为3和4个。

还有经常会出现这样一个情况：有时候感觉做得还不错，结果狂错，有时候感觉很不好，很多拿不准，结果还不错。这种情况在做三个部分时都会有。而且感觉怎么样有时很影响做后面题的心情和状态。

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有时候感觉做得还不错，结果狂错，有时候感觉很不好，很多拿不准，结果还不错。

我做听力也是如此。既然都发现存在这个现象了就更不应该再让感觉影响自己。

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最重要的莫过于听不懂就当作压根儿没听过。傻子原则。认认真真装傻是最好的策略。

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No.23
一天两套题有点搞不定。
今天作了01.8，听力9个，语法1个，阅读很惨，8个。
阅读的25题不明白得说，
(15) Nevertheless, by the middle of the nineteenth century, the rapid expansion of scientific
knowledge and of public awareness-if not understanding-of it had created a belief that the
advance of science would in some unspecified manner automatically generate economic
benefits.

25. The word "it" in line 16 refers to
(A) understanding
(B) public awareness
(C) scientific knowledge
(D) expansion

40题我觉得选D。

这个还请老兄指点一下！

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上来没有看到老兄的留言，还有些不习惯了，呵呵。

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今天作02.5
听力17，前9后8，语法1个，阅读0个，运气呀！