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<error_type>sorrry, I have no idea.</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend</correction>
<correction.s2>I got a very happy childhood. Because my friend, my parents are very good.
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<error_type>不知道</error_type>

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<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.
<correction.s2> I had a very happy childhood. Because my friend and my parents are very good.

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I have no idea.
句子 1 There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.

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<error_type>不知道（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend.I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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<correction.s1>I don't want to follow the public,I just try my best.</correction>
<correction.s2>My parents are really good to me,so I have a brilliant chilhood.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend, and I just want to be my self</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood since my friends and parents are very nice .</correction>

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<句子成分残缺 s1><关联词残缺 s2>
<correction.s1>As there is no need to follow the trend, I just want to be myself</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:11:37 |只看该作者

<error_type>1.缺少谓语, 连词 2.宾语不对:应该用is</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. thus I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>My childhood is very happy. Because, my friend and my parents are very good</correction>

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<error_type>主谓不一致</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood. Because, my friend and my parents are very good.</correction>

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<error_type>缺少主语</error_type>
<correction.s1>it is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood， because my friend and my parents are very good</correction>