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<error_type>缺主语</error_type>
<correction.s1>Nothing need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself. </correction>
<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood. Because my friend, parents are very good.</correction>

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<error_type>成分残缺</error_type>
<correction.s1>With no need to follow the trend, I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood,because my friend and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:06:56 |只看该作者

<error_type>主语错误？</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood. Because my friend and my parents are very good.</correction>

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<error_type>无主语；主谓不一致；复合句拆开</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:07:10 |只看该作者

句子 1
No need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.
错误类型:本来是个分句,分开后状语部分不完整.
There is no need to follow the trend.I just want to be myself.

句子 2
I have a very happy childhood. Because, my friend, my parents are very good.
错误类型:第二句子结构不完整.
I have a very happy childhood.My friend,my parents are very good.

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<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>It is not needed to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have very happy childhood. Because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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<error_type>主语混乱</error_type>
<correction.s1>I have no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself. 子</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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There is no need to follow the trend, as I just want to be myself.
I had a very happy childhood, because my parents and friends were very nice.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:08:20 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>There's no need to drift with current. I just want be the real me.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood thanks to my beloved parents and friends.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:08:22 |只看该作者

<error_type></error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend, so I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2> Since my friend and parents are very good, I have a very happy childhood.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:08:25 |只看该作者

<error_type> </error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>The reason why I have a very happy childhood is that my friend and my parents are very good .</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:08:35 |只看该作者

<error_type>标点符号使用错误</error_type>
<correction.s1>No need to follow the trend,I just want to be myself</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood, because, my friend, my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:08:47 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 mxhk 于 2016-1-20 20:11 编辑

<error_type>句子成分不完整</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood. This is because my friend and my parents are very good.
</correction>

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本帖最后由 tibetswan 于 2016-1-20 20:11 编辑

句子 1
No need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.
<error_type>中式英语</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend because I just want to be myself</correction>

句子 2
I have a very happy childhood. Because, my friend, my parents are very good.
<error_type>动词时态,标点</error_type>
<correction.s2>I had a very happy childhood Because my friends and my parents were very good.</correction>