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本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2016-1-20 20:16 编辑

请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复，谢谢。

句子 1
No need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.

句子 2
I have a very happy childhood. Because, my friend, my parents are very good.

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回帖格式：（回帖时请保留<error_type></error_type> <correction.s1></correction>等机读代码）

<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:02:11 |只看该作者

谢谢老师！！！！

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本帖最后由 PRICH 于 2016-1-20 20:07 编辑

1. There is no need to follow the trend.

2. I have a very happy childhood because my friends and my parents are very good.

那代码是什么？？

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:03:28 来自手机 |只看该作者

句子一应该缺少there is no need,句子二应该是
my friend and my parents.

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本帖最后由 shuliang123 于 2016-1-20 20:06 编辑

成分残缺，句号改为逗号，
时态问题，中间加and，改为过去时

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:04:26 |只看该作者

There is no need to follow the trend, I just want to be myself.[第一个不是完整的句子。]

I have a very happy childhood because my friend and my parents are very good.[because引导原因状语从句]

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:04:38 |只看该作者

真不会

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:05:20 |只看该作者

<error_type>标点符号错误，不该断句</error_type>
<correction.s1>No need to follow the trend, I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood because my friend and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:05:20 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>No need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood. Because my friend and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:05:41 |只看该作者

本帖最后由天天羊言于 2016-1-20 20:07 编辑

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is no need to follow the trend; I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood; because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:05:41 |只看该作者

<error_type>成分残缺，标点使用不当</error_type>
<correction.s1>I don't need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.</correction>
<correction.s2>I have a very happy childhood, because my friends and my parents are very good.</correction>

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本帖最后由 kasy 于 2016-1-20 23:21 编辑

<error_type></error_type>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:06:00 |只看该作者

<error_type>连次错误，逻辑没有连贯</error_type>
<correction.s1>There is No need to follow the trend So I just want to be myself. </correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:06:16 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 huaping 于 2016-1-20 20:12 编辑

<error_type>句子1：缺主语;句子2 :两个名词成分并列用and , my friend 不止一个改为 my friends</error_type>
<correction.s1> No one needs to follow the trend, and I just want to be myself.
</correction>
<correction.s2>. I have a very happy childhood, because my friends and my parents are very good. </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:06:24 |只看该作者

句子 1
No need to follow the trend. I just want to be myself.

no need to do sth 是主动形式表示被动，这里却是想表达主动的意思，因此要改成There is no need to follow the trend.

句子 2
I have a very happy childhood. Because, my friend, my parents are very good.
第一，Because是连词，要连接两个完整的句子；其次，my friend和my parents时两个主语，要用and连接。
I have a very happy childhood because my friend and my parents are very good.