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发表于 2016-1-20 20:35:20 |只看该作者
<error_type>1.不知道 2.缺少从句</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as  jobs, chances and salaries in big city, which are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>凌乱了,不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, after rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot of factors that my cause higher proportion, such as job, chance and salary, in big city much more than that in small town. </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:38:27 |只看该作者
<error_type>少引导词</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions which, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city that are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:39:32 |只看该作者
<error_type>一句话有两个谓语动词</error_type>
<correction.s1> However, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, that might compromise the cogency of this argument  in rendering this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子Whereas, there are a lot more factors may causing this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city that are much more than  in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:44:57 |只看该作者
从句错误
1、However, in rendering this argument, several implicit assumptions, if unwarrented, might compromise the cogency of this argument.
2、...

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:53:41 |只看该作者
<error_type>英语主语缺失</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit unwarranted assumption  which might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>

<error_type>句子短语,从句混乱</error_type>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are lots of factors which may cause thish high proportion such as 。。。。 </correction>

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<error_type>缺少主语</error_type>
<correction.s1>1 However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, the assumptions might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>2 Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion. One factor is that jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-21 19:48:38 |只看该作者
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions. If these assumptions are unwarranted, the cogency of this argument might be compromised.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause the phenomenon that higher proportion of  jobs, chances and salaries in big city is much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-2-18 12:41:30 |只看该作者
<error_type>两个谓语</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, which might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city which are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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