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发表于 2016-1-20 20:24:38 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, as rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher porpotion such as jobs, chances and salaries, which are much more in big cities than in small towns.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:24:46 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道；句子串在一起</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors which may cause this higher proportion, such as jobs, chances and salaries,which are much more in big city than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>There are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as more jobs, more abundant chances and higher salaries in big city </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:25:31 来自手机 |只看该作者

However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions.If unwarranted, it might compromise the cogency of this argument.
Whereas, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city which are much more than that in small town.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:27:06 |只看该作者

<error_type>动词重复了</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.
</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:27:24 来自手机 |只看该作者

第二个句子应该使用定语从句which

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:27:57 |只看该作者

<error_type>成分不完整（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>However,inrendering this argument, there are several inplicit assumptions which,if warranted,might compromise the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors which may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:28:16 |只看该作者

<correction.s1>I don't know</correction>
<correction.s1> which are much more than in small town</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:28:55 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot of factors may cause this higher proportion in big city much more than that in small town such as jobs, chances and salaries.
</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:29:08 |只看该作者

句子 1 However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.
句子 2 Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.
<宾语补足语不能再添加从句>
<correction.s1>不清楚
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:30:12 |只看该作者

<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
However,in order to render this argument,there are several implicit assumptions which are need to be illuminated,and if not,it might compromise the cogency of this arguement.

<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
Whereas,there are a lot of more factors that may cause this proportion in big city is much more than in small town,such as jobs,chances,and salaries.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:31:11 |只看该作者

<error_type>一个句子有多个谓语</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, there are several implicit assumptions in rendering this argument. If they are unwarranted, it might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries, which in big city are much more than in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:31:55 |只看该作者

定语从句缺先行词
句子 1 However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, which might compromise the cogency of this argument.

句子 2 Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city which are much more than those in small town.

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