请教几句话的翻译，救命啊

dannylUID: 121665

这两个意思我用英文文表达不清：
1.婚姻只能建立在互相信任的基础上。
2.尽管男人常说男女平等，但他们觉得自己放纵理所当然的，却不允许妻子的背叛。（也许这一句该拆成好几句来写才能表达清楚意思吧。）

第二句我写的是：Although some men often say the equality of the genders,they think them indulge naturally,actually do not permit wives' betrayal.

但老师给的评语看得我都想收拾包袱回中国了：
Your thesis statemnet is so ungrammatical, I can barely make sense of it. Please try again, putting your idea into idiomatic English.




这学期刚拿了一门english literature course（第一次拿这种正经英文课，慌~~~~~~~~~~以前都是上过家家一样的ESLl课）,老师叫我们读I.B. SINGER的短篇小说The Third One,有哪位好心人读过了，可以给点好建议啊？有关thesis statement 的，或者别的什么都行。先谢谢了

chicagochenUID: 116575

1.婚姻只能建立在互相信任的基础上。
marriage can only be founded upon belief in each other.( 用那个表相互的前缀更好 我一时忘记了 ）
2.尽管男人常说男女平等，但他们觉得自己放纵理所当然的，却不允许妻子的背叛。（也许这一句该拆成好几句来写才能表达清楚意思吧。）

第二句我写的是：Although some men often say the equality of the genders,they think them indulge naturally,actually do not permit wives' betrayal.

你的句子后面两个独立句要连接词 不然有语病
Though man usually say he backups equality between genders, yet he
easilly let his own indulege go while not permitting the betrayal of his wife.

丧心UID: 133337

mutual trust form the base of marriage merely.

under the name of equality of gender, the unfaith of women is so much lothed, comparing with the nature of man's wideness

at least this is my way of writing english