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发表于 2004-8-2 14:32:54 |显示全部楼层
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The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines.
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The author asserts that to examine the characters of the heroes/heroines is the best way to understand the characters of that society. Based on personal experience and empirical observation of society, I fundamentally agree with the assertion that the heroes/heroines' characters are represent of their society's and it is the best way to study their society.

To begin with, heroes or heroines are outstanding represents of their society; to study their characters means understanding the whole society's characters. An apt illustration of this point involves the America former president --Abraham Lincoln, who successfully leaded the civil war and emancipated the black slave's rights. If we want to understand the character of American of that time, it is a good means to study the character of Abraham Lincoln, which is the mirror of the civil war in America. We may find that the most America Black people were courage and laborious, and the destiny of America was in chaos at that time. Similarly, to study the characters of sports' heroes and heroines, we may learn that their societies were replete with harmony and competition. In a word, the characters of heroes/heroines reflect the characters of their society.

Further more, after the study of history, we may find that the history main record the accomplishments of their heroes or heroines. We cannot find some materials about the common people because the masses are too many to be recorded. I also use the civil war to defend my viewpoint. We can not learn the matter of Jack--a black slave who supported the Abraham Lincoln to emancipate his rights--from the civil war’s history. Only through understanding the characters of Lincoln can we find the traces of the civil war, and further understand the character of American society. It is the same when it comes to understand the characters of ancient Greek; only through studying the characters of heroes or heroines such as Aristotle, Plato, and the like, we can fully understand their society.

Admittedly, we must concede that to examine the characters of heroes or heroines is not the only means to understand the characters of their society. To study the historic architectures, for example, also helps us to understand the character of that society. If we want to understand the characters of ancient China, for instance, we not only examine the character of its heroes or its heroines, but also study the miracle, the great architecture such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace which greatly reveal both the civility of architecture and the virtue of populace in the ancient China. In short, we should strike a balance between studying the characters of heroes or heroines and other facts.

In sum, I hope it has been shown that to examine the characters of heroes or heroines is the best way to understand the characters of their society, but is not the only. Only we carefully examine the characters of heroes or heroines and at the same time put our eyes on other facts such as the architecture, can we understand the characters of that society more thoroughly and accurately.

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:03:30 |显示全部楼层
The author asserts that to examine the characters of the heroes/heroines is是用复数吧 the best way to understand the characters of that society. Based on personal experience and empirical observation of society, I fundamentally agree with the assertion that the heroes/heroines' characters are represent of their society's and it is the best way to study their society.

To begin with, heroes or heroines are outstanding represents of their society; to study their characters means mean understanding the whole society's characters. An apt illustration of this point involves the America former president --Abraham Lincoln, who successfully leaded the civil war and emancipated the black slave's rights. If we want to understand the character of American of that time, it is a good means前面有a,怎么这里是复数呢 to study the character of Abraham Lincoln, which is the mirror of the civil war in America. We may find that the most America Black people were courage and laborious, and the destiny of America was in chaos at that time. Similarly, to study the characters of sports' heroes and heroines, we may learn that their societies were replete with harmony and competition. In a word, the characters of heroes/heroines reflect the characters of their society.个人觉得没感觉出林肯怎么反映了社会特征,觉得他怎么会反映黑人的特征呢?

Further more, after the study of history, we may find that the history main record the accomplishments of their heroes or heroines. We cannot find some materials about the common people because the masses are too many to be recorded. I also use the civil war to defend my viewpoint. We can not learn the matter of Jack--a black slave who supported the Abraham Lincoln to emancipate his rights(emancipate his rights是什么意思呢,解放权力?不对劲吧)--from the civil war’s history. Only through understanding the characters of Lincoln can we find the traces of the civil war, and further understand the character of American society. It is the same when it comes to understand the characters of ancient Greek; only through studying the characters of heroes or heroines such as Aristotle, Plato, and the like, we can fully understand their society.还是觉得论证无力,不过叫我也举不出什么好例子来

Admittedly, we must concede that to examine the characters of heroes or heroines is not the only means to understand the characters of their society. To study the historic architectures, for example, also helps us to understand the character of that society. If we want to understand the characters of ancient China, for instance, we not only examine the character of its heroes or its heroines, but also study the miracle, the great architecture such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace which greatly reveal both the civility of architecture and the virtue of populace in the ancient China. 我的疑问是,长城等是很伟大,但他反映了什么社会特征?In short, we should strike a balance between studying the characters of heroes or heroines and other facts.

In sum, I hope it has been shown that to examine the characters of heroes or heroines isare the best way to understand the characters of their society, but is not the only. Only we carefully examine the characters of heroes or heroines and at the same time put our eyes on other facts such as the architecture, can we understand the characters of that society more thoroughly and accurately.
这篇文章不好些,个人觉得举例不容易,希望能讨论一下例子
笑?人们什么时候关心过笑?我喜欢的是真正的笑,高于玩笑、嘲笑和可笑的笑.笑,无边的快感,美妙的快感,完全的快感.....
当然,假装的笑,可笑的笑,可笑的笑.笑得如此可笑,让我们都笑了起来.这时候,它来了,真正的笑,完全的笑,如滔滔江水,把我们裹挟进去.笑得迸发、反复、冲撞、放肆,笑得气派、奢侈、疯狂......我们为自己的笑中之笑而笑得死去活来......啊,笑!快感之笑,笑之快感;笑着,就是如此深切的活着.

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:19:56 |显示全部楼层
[B]引用needle JJ曾在一篇贴子的内容(感觉很有道理):

[QUOTE]林肯的例子不错,但是说了这么详细的例子之后夜没有分析清楚林肯的性格怎么就代表社会的性格了。林肯所关注的是当时的社会焦点并不能说明主题“性格”。应该好好理解一下character。一点思路:林肯是那时代的英雄,他所代表的时代精神是民主和平等;以及他对南方战犯的宽恕代表了时代的宽容;他挑起对战后重建工作的重担代表了那个时代人们战胜困难的决心。]

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:22:07 |显示全部楼层
多谢fyy2001的修改^_^写的特滥,改天重写!我现在觉得写反对的观点到时好些点^_^欢迎讨论!
[B]to examine the characters of the heroes/heroines is是用复数吧[/B]
我觉得就是用单数,因为是短语作主语,不知道对不对?欢迎讨论^_^
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发表于 2004-8-2 22:23:09 |显示全部楼层
我觉得反面好写些,老外280的论证很不错,可以参考
热爱生命,爱她近乎无限的可能性

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:24:01 |显示全部楼层
多谢ritchiepan提供好的思路,回去好好思考,改天重写^_^
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发表于 2004-8-2 22:29:01 |显示全部楼层
我觉得ritchiepan说得很不错,像他那样分析林肯的话就差不多,看来还是人多力量大呀.
好象用短语是应该用单数的,我错了吧.嘿嘿^_^
我学ritchiepan的分析的话,那长城是不是代表了中国古代人抵御外敌追求和平的精神呢?
但第三段的例子不就不知道怎么说才好了.
笑?人们什么时候关心过笑?我喜欢的是真正的笑,高于玩笑、嘲笑和可笑的笑.笑,无边的快感,美妙的快感,完全的快感.....
当然,假装的笑,可笑的笑,可笑的笑.笑得如此可笑,让我们都笑了起来.这时候,它来了,真正的笑,完全的笑,如滔滔江水,把我们裹挟进去.笑得迸发、反复、冲撞、放肆,笑得气派、奢侈、疯狂......我们为自己的笑中之笑而笑得死去活来......啊,笑!快感之笑,笑之快感;笑着,就是如此深切的活着.

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:35:10 |显示全部楼层
注明一下啊!我是引用 needle JJ 的一段描述,不是我的独创哦!
那个变色工具还不太会用:p
fyy2001关于长城反映的character我赞同!
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issue48http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=211496
argument51http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=212963
issue10http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=213204
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我要一步一步往上爬
等待阳光静静看着它的脸
小小的天有大大的梦想
重重的壳挂着轻轻的仰望
我要一步一步往上爬
在最高点撑着夜往前飞
让风吹干流过的泪痕
总有一天我有属于我的天

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:40:16 |显示全部楼层
有一个关于这个题目的讨论,觉得不错
http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthre ... ;highlight=issue203
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issue48http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=211496
argument51http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=212963
issue10http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=213204
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我要一步一步往上爬
等待阳光静静看着它的脸
小小的天有大大的梦想
重重的壳挂着轻轻的仰望
我要一步一步往上爬
在最高点撑着夜往前飞
让风吹干流过的泪痕
总有一天我有属于我的天

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:44:08 |显示全部楼层
变色工具不难用的,先把文章要改的地方加上方括号[....],然后复制到变色工具上面的框里面, 再点击中间想要变的颜色,然后把下面的框里的文章复制到论坛上就行了.
笑?人们什么时候关心过笑?我喜欢的是真正的笑,高于玩笑、嘲笑和可笑的笑.笑,无边的快感,美妙的快感,完全的快感.....
当然,假装的笑,可笑的笑,可笑的笑.笑得如此可笑,让我们都笑了起来.这时候,它来了,真正的笑,完全的笑,如滔滔江水,把我们裹挟进去.笑得迸发、反复、冲撞、放肆,笑得气派、奢侈、疯狂......我们为自己的笑中之笑而笑得死去活来......啊,笑!快感之笑,笑之快感;笑着,就是如此深切的活着.

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发表于 2004-8-2 22:47:12 |显示全部楼层
谢谢楼上的xdjm的讨论呀^_^大家注意休息^_^
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发表于 2004-8-2 22:47:16 |显示全部楼层
呵呵,ritchiepan,以后希望能多多讨论哟.

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发表于 2004-8-2 23:05:36 |显示全部楼层
是是,我文章现写的不够多,自己好多思路不成熟,较多情况下先借鉴别人,以后多讨论
谢谢fyy2001!
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issue48http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=211496
argument51http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=212963
issue10http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=213204
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我要一步一步往上爬
等待阳光静静看着它的脸
小小的天有大大的梦想
重重的壳挂着轻轻的仰望
我要一步一步往上爬
在最高点撑着夜往前飞
让风吹干流过的泪痕
总有一天我有属于我的天

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发表于 2004-8-2 23:14:45 |显示全部楼层
本人语言功底不好,对细节就不讨论了。个人觉得这篇文章是不是可以从两个方面来写,利用常用的辩证观点:
(1)人们对英雄的评价标准代表了社会上大多数人真善美的标准,而只有这样才能清楚地了解一个社会的价值取向,进而了解大多数人的character;同时考虑到普通人提供的信息量太大;
(2)但是在研究某些方面的时候光研究英雄是远远不够的,比如了解人们一定时期的社会习俗;研究少数族裔的character;而且是不是可以这样说,英雄的所作所为往往都高于普通人
综合起来看,可以认为题目中的方法虽然是一种有效的方法,但不一定是最好的方法。

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发表于 2004-8-2 23:36:25 |显示全部楼层
关于fenglinsheng中的the Summer Palace,反映的character 是否可以是--当时人们对皇权与神权至高无尚地崇拜?

另外,觉得renwei2的不错!学习!
“英雄们的行为与character可能仅仅是人们的向往,并不一定表示当时社会总体的character就达到英雄们的高度“可以吗?
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issue48http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=211496
argument51http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=212963
issue10http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=213204
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我要一步一步往上爬
等待阳光静静看着它的脸
小小的天有大大的梦想
重重的壳挂着轻轻的仰望
我要一步一步往上爬
在最高点撑着夜往前飞
让风吹干流过的泪痕
总有一天我有属于我的天

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RE: issue203 写了挺长时间,请大家拍砖^_^多谢了^_^ [修改]

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