我用这个模版给很多教授发信，可以2个多周发了10封只回了两封reject，请大家帮忙看看

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请大家帮忙鉴定一下是陶瓷信的原因吗，或者是我应该用EDU的邮箱而不是GMAIL邮箱发


下面是我的陶瓷信


Dear Prof. xxx


It is sorry to bother you at such a busy time. My name is xxx, a B.S. candidate in Polymer Material and Engineering at Sichuan University. I look forward to joining your research group as a master student in the field of polymeric material of the English-taught program in Sep, 2018.



I am interested in polymer blends and I looked through your website and your publications. Your subject about improving the properties of polymers by changing their structure using CO2-foaming and CNFs and other processing conditions is what I am interested in. Especially your publication Open-cell foams of polyethylene terephthalate/bisphenol a polycarbonate blend Plating has attracted me a lot. I have been working on the relative field about polymer blends during my study at Sichuan University and Chinese Academy of Sciences. I have done several high quality research projects. And I have one paper published in polymers. Since I looked through your study, I think that your study is better for me to do in my graduate period. I hope to get supervision from you and learn more by joining your team.  



Prof.xxxx, do your team have any openings in the Sep, 2018? If you are interested, please find my CV in the attachment. I am looking forward to your reply

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我觉得陶瓷信不给力是主要原因，我估计大部分prof读完前两句就不再看了。用我老板的话来讲就是 "I am not going to be his/her research supervisor and his/her English tutor".


Dear Prof. xxx


I am sorry to bother you at such a busy time. My name is xxx, a B.S. candidate in Polymer Material and Engineering at Sichuan University. I look forward to joining your research group as a master student in the field of polymeric material of the English-taught program in Sep, 2018. （只有在事情已经确定的情况下才会look forward, “i want to have a date with you = 约吗” and "look forward to our dates = 炮已经约好了，很期待啊”，所以你一上来就自我邀请进了组，不懂中式英文的prof会觉得你非常arrogant）



I am interested in polymer blends and I had browsed through your website and your publications. I am interested in your research on improving the properties of polymers by changing their structure using CO2-foaming and CNFs and other processing conditions (在formal writing中， 应该尽量避免句子以preposition结尾）. Particularly, I was amazed by your 2014publication on "Open-cell foams of polyethylene terephthalate/bisphenol a polycarbonate blend plating"（Especially...不能作为单独句). I had acquired some experiences from conducting research projects related to polymer blends during my study at Sichuan University and Chinese Academy of Sciences. As a result of those research projects,
I published an article on XXXX journal as first/second/third author. From what I have read on your website, I believe my research interests are similar to yours and I would like to join your research team and pursue my graduate studies under your supervision.



Will you be looking for graduate students next year? If so, please find my CV in the attachment..

I am looking forward to your reply,
XXX
SCHOOL




陶瓷信有语法错和没有语法错的差别是很大的，建议淘宝买个proof-read吧。 我当初申master 5封陶瓷信发出去，2个不招，1个聊了一下就没下文了，2个给了interview。

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vancouvernick 发表于 2017-9-16 17:24
我觉得陶瓷信不给力是主要原因，我估计大部分prof读完前两句就不再看了。用我老板的话来讲就是 "I am not g ...

非常感谢您的帮助，太细心了，我这就改改

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哎，我发了四篇 都没回复 加拿大match 的太少了  尤其是我这种较冷门的animal science 。 就很慌。。。

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拉拉杂杂谈了一大堆个人信息，最重要的东西没说
research match，research match，research match。。。。。

在我看来这个陶瓷信唯一有用的只有这句话
I have been working on the relative field about polymer blends
这恰好是最重要的地方，可惜只用了一句话带过。。。

建议第二段全部删掉，重写为以下两点
1. prof的research是XXX（一句话）
2. 我的research背景是XXX，我的背景如何跟prof research match
（重点！！从多个角度挖掘：实验方法，未来应用等等）

第一段可以直接精简为： I am XX. MY undergraduate study is about Polymer Material and Engineering. I am looking forward to working your group as a master student。。
教授对你个人信息没兴趣，不要再这里浪费篇幅，还是那句话重点放在research match

邮件要短小精悍，教授都很忙，没人想看长篇大论。。。

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wilsoj 发表于 2017-9-18 03:16
拉拉杂杂谈了一大堆个人信息，最重要的东西没说
research match，research match，research match。。。。 ...

谢谢大神的指点，我这就改改

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Dairy-Jerry 发表于 2017-9-17 20:33
哎，我发了四篇 都没回复 加拿大match 的太少了  尤其是我这种较冷门的animal science 。 就很慌。。。

我发了很多教授都不回，在想要不要找中介

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sdwhjzh 发表于 2017-09-19 11:13


我发了很多教授都不回，在想要不要找中介

中介的模版信更加惨不忍睹。一定程度上，现在的prof陶瓷信回复率低就是因为这些中介模版陶瓷信海发导致的，当申请人木有诚意时，老板凭什么花时间去回复陶瓷信？