10月21日托福作文直播课互动帖

蓝南难UID：3842723

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Essay topic: 4
A lot of high school students now cheat in homework assignments, by asking other students for answers. Which of the following do you think is the most efficient way to stop?
-asking parents to help stop the students from cheating
-penalty or punishment to the students
-asking teacher to create homework assignment that cannot be easily cheated

Thesis statement: Asking Teachers create homework assignment that cannot be easily cheated, which can be most efficient way to stop cheating in homework.

Middle paragraph 1 (adopt the PIE model to plan your middle paragraph)  
Point:
Creating the assignments that can make students realized that there is no any shortcut, like plagiarizing other’s works, to finish their job. (state the main point in response to the essay topic)
Information (examples):
When the work is easy to cheat, students tend to  procrastinate, and when the deadline coming, the only way they can finish is to cheat.
Elaboration: To have some deeper reasoning and use some small examples.

Middle paragraph 2
Point: Create assignment that can raise their interests, therefore help them active learning.
Information (examples):
Homework assignments can be too laborious to students.
Students’ cheating is because they unwilling to meditate the assignments by themselves, in this case, they are always passive learning.
Interest is the best teacher.

whycsuUID：3508902

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PtisenbonandrabbitUID：3666884

Topic 4
A lot of high school students now cheat in homework assignments, by asking other students for answers. Which of the following do you think is the most efficient way to stop?
-asking parents to help stop the students from cheating
-penalty or punishment to the students
-asking teacher to create homework assignment that cannot be easily cheated

choice: asking teacher to create homework assignment that cannot be easily cheated

Reason1：One of the major causes of the problem is that teachers can hardly figure out whether students have cheated or not.
问题的主要原因之一是作弊难以被老师识别。
Support1:客观题的答案都是一样的。像作文之类的作业通常不会有人抄。

Reason2：Some students cheat because they do not attach great importance to that kind of homework assignment, which is dreary and repetitive.
一些学生抄作业是因为他们不认为这些重复性的枯燥作业很重要。
Support2：学生很难意识到重复的练习是为了加深他们的记忆。比如计算题，大部分学生认为既然他们知道公式，为什么要重复地做本质相同的题目。然而实际上，重复训练是重要的，只是教师应该采取更有趣的方式，并且在学生意识到重复训练的重要性前，阻止他们偷懒。

让步：Admittedly, the other solutions can also help, to certain extent. But as what is mentioned above, teachers and parents ought to figure out cheating first, which remains a problem.
其他两种解决方法理论上也有用，但是如何发现作弊是第一步的难题。

唔123UID：3810170

写了前两篇的提纲：  「总觉得自己缺少实际的例子，只是在空说道理，望王老师指点」
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A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
Which plan do you think is better?

If I were the decision maker to choose a way for local high school teachers to improve their teaching, I will choose to gather a small group of extraordinary teachers to attend a class first, instead of all the teachers taking online class individually.

Admittedly, it is our obligation to offer every teacher the equal rights and opportunities to improve their teaching. No matter how long they have been a teacher, no matter how talent they are in teaching students, no matter how negligible they are in their social circles, they have the identical chances to get the access to become better entities.

Additionally, we need to realize the difference of the study abilities of local teachers to process our project more effectively. 上网课就像是开了一个大班，学的慢的老师会不好意思向周围寻求帮助，个体学习进度会差异很大，有的老师以为自己学会了，但是一和其他人讨论，就发现自己对问题理解得不深。所以开一个小班，大家面对面相互交流会更有利于有效的消化问题，也能对问题理解得很深入。

What’s more, if we collect our teachers from a lot of different schools, those teachers themselves may be wonderful resources for improving teaching to each other. Believe that there would come many innovative ideas.

In conclusion, I suggest that we should choose to cultivate a group of teachers from different schools, then those teachers come back to their own school to spread out what they learn in that temporary class.


Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As a university student, I would like a university that requires students to take courses in many subjects instead of that require students to specialize in one subject.

Admittedly, the more courses we take in a specialize area, the more knowledge we will acquire in the area, which would contribute to a number of students becoming experts in the area.

However, it seems impractical for most of students to keep a constant interest in a specialize area, so, if any, students should be given to the right to take courses different from the most of courses that they learned before. 学生们在大学里会接触到很多以前没有遇到的新事物，新鲜事，新的领域。他们的想法，兴趣爱好，特长会与以前有很大不同。他们也许会遇到他们更加擅长的事情，更加感兴趣的事情，更愿意花时间去了解的新事物。也许有的并不会对以后的career有帮助，但是他们想去做。Then they should be allowed to make what they desire into reality.

What’s more, not everyone is luck enough to meet with or know their favorite subjects or research directions in the very first beginning. This lesson works for university students, not only in studying professional courses in their majors, but also in studying optional courses involving with entertainment, sports and so on.当我们选了许多不同的课程以后，我们会在其中进行比较，这些比较能帮助我们去更好的了解自己，advantages and disadvantages.同时我们也能拥有更多的兴趣爱好。当我们根据自己的兴趣去选择不同的课程时，我们的课堂是由不同年级不同专业的人组成的，with different professional backgrounds. Similarly, after we graduate from universities and step into the society, our social circle would be filled with different people from different professional background, from different cultures, from different ages. It will benefit us for the future career and research.

WWiUID：3644899

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Essay topic:
Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Thesis statement:
Students should be allowed to invloved in all kinds of subjects as it will provide an all-round education and better picture for their understanding in the future.

Middle paragraph 1 (adopt the PIE model to plan your middle paragraph)  
Point: (state the main point in response to the essay topic)
Students should be required to attend courses enrolled in different fields to develop their professional skills and specific learning.

Information (examples): (describe the example(s) you plan to use as information to support the point)  
Students who majored in applied science may take a literary course to learn linguistic technique and basic literary attainment.

Elaboration: (state the value principle you would refer to for elaborating the point and the information)  
It is crucial to cultivate student’s ability through taking cross-discilinary learning and getting some knowledge and experience.

exvotoUID：2465755

Point: Teachers could use some punishment to get students to pay for their mistakes and to turn over a new leaf.

Example: students would be recorded about all their punishments in their file which would accompany with them all life.

Elaboration: It is desirable for students to learn from their mistakes and alway be a person of integrity no matter in school or society.

RejayUID：3823780

Topic2
Some universities require students to study many subjects while some other universities only require students to major in one subject.From my perspective, I agree to the former one. Universities always provide a platform for students to learn general knowledge instead of limit students’s mind by only one subject.

I have to admit that, major in only one subject not only release some students’s pressure for learning too much but also help students specialize their majors in a deeper understanding. For example, students major in computer science have to lean only one subject “Programming Design and Realize” which can help them with a more familiar operation in programming than those have to learn more subjects.••••

But if universities do that, students can only insist their speciality all the time and they will never have chance to learn about other fields, one of which may be the true enjoyment for students. For example,a student who major in computer science because he/she didn’t know whether he/she would enjoy his/her speciality during college time, but if he/she meet the chance for learning music,he/she would fall in love music and enjoy studying music,finally he/she becomes a famous musician. In a word, universities should provide more chances for students like requiring students to take course in many subjects, ••••

mazent0shUID：3556015

Essay topic: #3
At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus, such as how many hours that the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some universities, experts are hired to make this decision, students almost never involved. Which approach do you prefer and why?

Thesis statement:
As students play the role of learners as well as users, in order to make decisions more effectively and democratically, I favor the approach that students engage in the decision making of the issues that affect everyone's daily life on campus.

Middle paragraph 1
Point:
Students are the users on campus, so it's better for them to decide how to deal with the issues that affect their daily life with teachers and experts.
Information (examples):
Consider there is a plan to renovate the pavilion for students activities, it's apparently better that students participate in the renovation plan with teachers than teachers decide how to renovate it alone.
Elaboration:
Because during the process that students working with teachers together to make the plan, they will gain a precious experience of learning citizenship skills. As it might arise controversies between students and teachers over some specific needs, such as how to maximize the utility value of the pavilion under the minimum cost of the budget, students will figure out the way to deal with it properly when they engage in the decision making by making public opinion surveys on campus and then presenting the needs of surveys which are reasonable and even inevident to teachers and managers at the university.

NFLLWTGUID：3794390

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三工搬砖中UID：3467406

Essay topic:
A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
Which plan do you think is better?

Thesis statement:
Providing additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers by online material that every teacher would have chance to study is the better plan to improve the high school teachers.

Middle paragraph 1
Point: Teaching by online material in order to help every teacher directly would make it possible that all the teachers could get direct training and more opportunities to study
Information (examples): Direct training is more informative compared with second-hand transformation.
Elaboration: Every teacher deserves the opportunity of direct studying.

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天地1沙鸥UID：3654706

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正伊合黛UID：3844046

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福尔马林UID：3816825

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Essay topic:
A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
Which plan do you think is better?
Thesis statement: Related to select a small group of excellent teachers, after that, and provide their trained experience to other teachers in school, It's most efficiaous way to imrpove each teacher in high school by providing addtional effective training to each teacher through online material.

Point: closest to original knowlede without second-handed knowledge, this way is convenient and cost less investment, that's flexible and be used to review at any time to help teacher to master skills deeply
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我有一只噜噜噜UID：3693394

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Essay topic
Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Thesis statement: From my point of view, studying courses in many subjects will be beneficial to students' development.

Middle paragraph 1
Point: Learning a variety of subjects' courses can broaden students' scope.
Information:
Elaboration:

Middle paragraph 2
Point: In addition, it will be helpful when they need to finish some work about interdisciplinary cooperation.
Information:
Elaboration:

Middle paragraph 3
Point: While, a group of people may argue, studying so many subject is wasting time. But I believe though it is time-consuming at the beginning, it would save a lot of time and energy later.
Information: