Issue71 一个结论性论证题目（有中文提纲）---恳请帮忙批改

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Spending time alone makes one a better companion to others.
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1，一个不愿意单独花时间进行自我提高和自我反省的人是很难成为他人很好的伙伴的。
2，由于任何人都有着自己的私人空间，因此，那些不知道独处而整天缠着对方的伙伴都是不受欢迎的。
譬如在爱情，在婚姻，在友谊中，都是如此。
3，让步，对于一些有性格缺陷的人，譬如内向孤僻的人，花太多时间独处只会加重他们的心理疾病，可能导致严重后果。


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As the great ancient Greek philosopher Aristotle said: "Whosoever is delighted to be solitude, is either a wild beast, or a god." Indeed,spending time alone improving ourselves is beneifical to better companions to others but too much time alone would result in an isolated and abnormal disposition.

Obvisously, an ignorant person who had not spent time alone studying something is not popular among his companions. Generally speaking,one likes to get along with wit and erudite people who know a lot of things and can seek common things between them. This can be proved from my personal experience:In my first year as a college student, I found diffcult to get along well with some of my classmates who discussed a lot related to computer and internet.At that time,I was nearly illiterated in this aspect because there was no computer couses set in our high school.In order to be a good companion of them, I spent a lot of time alone in studying computer knowledges in our library eagerly.Consequently, i found that i became more and more pouplar among my classmates as I could discuss more common topics about computer and internet with them. Thus, if one doesn't know the common knowledges but which have been mastered by his companions, he cann't participate in his companions' activities.

Furthermore, few ones like a person who always make them get involved with him day and night in that everyone has his private space and time. In friendship, no matter how intimate a person and his friend's relationship is, they can't spend all the time together and share everything bewteen them. An independent and capable person is apt to deal with everything by himself and unwilling to accept his friend's help easily by which ususally make him inferior and dwarfed. Even if in marriage life, there should be also some private time and space left for husband or wife. We often see this phenomenon: the relationship bewteen husband and wife tends to more solidate and harmonious in the reunion after a short departure of one spouse. Maybe to spend a certain amount of time alone can keep a mysterious and fresh sense to one's spouse. Therefore, spending some time alone is consequential to maintain a good relationship between people as everyone wants to keep parts of his pirvacy not disturbed.

However, to someone whose diposition is introverted and closed,spending too much time alone will lead him to suffer from some mental and psychological illness. As human beings are social animals who can't isolate and separate themselves from the external community they live in, or human will become wild beasts just like Aristotle said. Two weeks ago,i read a news that a college student killed all his dormmates with rat poison for no reasons. After investigation by some experts, they concluded it was because that student spending almost all the time alone and even never speaking a word to his classmates made for his inferiority complex which finally jeopardized others. Actually, it is really worth people's time to communicate with others by which can relieve some pressure from work or daily life, especially for those who find difficult to get along well with others due to their defections of temperament.

All in all, whether people should spend time alone to make them better companions is a complex issue. To different people we get different answers just like docotors prescribe different medicine to different patients. It is necessary for normal people to allocate a certain amount of time alone to maintain a harmonious relationship with his companions. However,to those whose disposition are introverted and isolated, to spend more time living and commuciating with others is essential for them to become better companions.

abjureUID: 169591

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abjureUID: 169591

呵呵，作文版的都是战友拉。
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你自己修改先，我在帮你看看吧。

fhxyweiUID: 157384

谢谢，我自己先改改！！！