issue处女作哦——issue4，请帮我看看哈

spritneyUID: 177238

我才开始写issue哦，感觉上思考不是很难，就是经常一时找不到合适的词来表达，等想出来用什么表达的时候就又觉得原来这么简单，还有就是速度慢。各位ggjj，是不是一开始都是这样呢？怎么能改进一下咧？
下面是我的issue，请多多指教：）先谢谢了

Bring other fields’ knowledge to our studies

Is there only one kind of knowledge in one field of study? Will the subjects get great advances if they do not absorb others' knowledge and methods? We always ask these kinds of questions. Some people say that there should be clear lines between the different fields of study, while others hold the view that the subjects can syncretize together to make themselves get much greater progress. But which one is better to our knowledge system's development?

There is no doubt that different disciplines are interrelated and that the knowledge of one field can cast light on the studies of other fields. In fact, in every filed, there are lots of research methods, knowledge and thinking ways that from other disciplines. They absorb each other while they are on their own road of development.

First, let's take a look at the use of mathematics. Mathematics is really being used a very broad scope, from physics to chemistry, from statistics to biology. When it is introduced into the field of economics, mathematics really makes great contributions. The economic theories, even the simplest rules, have used mathematical methods. In the microeconomics, we use mathematical methods to explain the demand and supply laws. How do consumers make consumption decisions? How do the producers decide what and how much to produce? And what determines the price of a kind of product? Such questions are answered with mathematical models and thinking methods. In the field of macro-economics, in our analysis of problems such as what policies should the government take to deal with the inflation and in what way will the change of interests influence the of the economy, we cannot be without mathematical ways of analysis and tools. In other economics study of fields, especially the fields such as econometrics and mathematical economics, we use mathematics to solve economic problems and analyze the economic phenomena. And it is the introduction and use of mathematics that give the filed of economics study and research a great opportunity and drive to develop and mature.

Second, in the more social fields, they absorb other fields' knowledge and experience much more and they relate to each other more inherent and tightly. Let's take literacy as an example. Literacy critics borrowed ideas formulated by philosophers to further their studies. When they make research or publish critics, they need to bring forward their views, prove them by strong evidence and rigorous demonstration, and make their own points of views reasonable and rational. The philosophers' thinking ways and knowledge really help them build analysis systems and constructs, and the critics can benefit from the philosophy in the aspect of thinking and expression. The ideas in philosophy can make literacy critics to think from different angles and more in-depth. When they do studies, they can consider from the angles of culture, values, politics, and economics. And their point of view can more incisive with the help of philosophy ideas.

Also, there are lots of intersectional fields that we pay great attentions to study now. For instance, when biology and chemistry met, biochemistry came into being. In this field of study, the content of biology and chemistry are both contained. We use methods and tools of chemistry to learn biology problems, and we have found much that we did not find and know before, which are of great importance to us human beings and to our understanding of the nature and the world. And it provides us with a whole new way to cognize ourselves. Besides, there are lots of other fields like biochemistry, such as euthenics which focus on how to improve human biological construct through the study of environment, and physical chemistry in which we study chemistry with physic’s help. And I believe that more fields like biochemistry will appear.

In the matter of fact, different disciplines have interrelations to each other. We can use other fields' analysis ways and methods, borrow others' ideas, and employ others' tools and models when we do research in a certain field of study. We don not have to localize our attention to only this field's tools, techniques and ways if thinking; what we need to do is that we should realize the need and possibility to bring other fields' knowledge and experience to our studies and research in certain fields, and that we should take actions to bring the realization into reality. Only in this way, our understanding of the world and ourselves can progress.

pastryyangUID: 185913

我也是刚开始写issue,又是第一次给别人提意见，不对的地方大家共同讨论哦
我觉得你的开头段是应该明确地提出自己的观点的，虽然你首段提出问题可以引起向下阅读的兴趣，但是你在第二段也好像没有明确的观点啊，我反而觉得你的末端比较鲜明的提出了自己的观点，这种写法对考试来说是比较冒险的吧，不知道这种理解对不对。
在由我觉得你的论述和原命题是有一定的偏差的，我的理解是原命题着重于必要性-- 也就是是不是别的学科的知识的引入是推动某一学科发展的必要条件，而感觉你是讨论学科交叉的好处啊，好处可能是必然的，但是你没有突出是必要的。
嗬嗬，一点粗浅的个人意见

spritneyUID: 177238

恩
收到了：）
谢谢指点哦
这是我的思路，当然还需要多多修改哦：）不过我觉得原题并非讨论必要性的问题，而是讨论需要性的问题，所以我认为可能说明学科交叉的好处更切题阿

spritneyUID: 177238

请大家多多指教阿

spritneyUID: 177238

欢迎拍砖阿

glassfrogUID: 170569

spritney，请注意你发帖的格式哦。不然别人怎么搜索你的文章呢？格式扫盲在精华区有。很多人就曾经很恼火的发誓不给那些格式不对的人改文章，说是不能再纵容错误。
呵呵，以后注意哈。

glassfrogUID: 170569

There is no doubt that different disciplines are interrelated and that the knowledge of one field can cast light on the studies of other fields. In fact, in every filed, there are lots of research methods, knowledge and thinking ways(C: are they parallel to each other?) that from other disciplines. They absorb each other while they are on their own road of development.

First, let's take a look at the use of mathematics. Mathematics is really being used (A: in) a very broad scope, from physics to chemistry, from statistics to biology. When it is introduced into the field of economics, mathematics really makes great contributions. The economic theories (A: nowadays), even the simplest rules, have used (R: been using) mathematical methods. In the microeconomics, we use mathematical methods to explain the demand and supply laws. How do consumers make consumption decisions? How do the producers decide what and how much to produce? And what determines the price of a kind of product? Such questions are answered with mathematical models and thinking methods. In the field of macro-economics, in(D) our analysis of problems such as what policies should(D) the government should take to deal with the inflation and in what way will(D) the change of interests (A: would) influence the of the(D) economy, we cannot be(R: go) without mathematical ways of analysis and tools. In other economics study of fields(D), especially the fields such as econometrics and mathematical economics, we use mathematics to solve economic problems and analyze the economic phenomena. And(D) it is the introduction and use of mathematics that give the filed of economics study and research a great opportunity and drive to develop and mature.

Second, in the more social fields, they absorb other fields' knowledge and experience much more and they relate to each other more inherent(R: inherently) and tightly. Let's take literacy as an example. Literacy critics borrowed ideas formulated by philosophers to further their studies. When they make research or publish critics, they need to bring forward their views, prove them by strong evidence and rigorous demonstration, and make their own points of views reasonable and rational. The philosophers' thinking ways and knowledge really help them build analysis systems and constructs, and the critics can benefit from the philosophy in the aspect of thinking and expression. The ideas in philosophy can make literacy critics to think from different angles and more in-depth. When they do studies, they can consider from the angles of culture, values, politics, and economics. And their point of view can (A: be) more incisive with the help of philosophy ideas.

Also, there are lots of intersectional fields that we pay great attentions to study now. For instance, when biology and chemistry met, biochemistry came into being(C: good). In this field of study, the content of biology and chemistry are both contained. We use methods and tools of chemistry to learn biology problems, and we have found much that we did not find and know before, which are of great importance to us human beings and to our understanding of the nature and the world. And it provides us with a whole new way to cognize ourselves. Besides, there are lots of other fields like biochemistry, such as euthenics which focus on how to improve human biological construct through the study of environment, and physical chemistry in which we study chemistry with physic’s help. And I believe that more fields like biochemistry will appear.

In the matter of fact, different disciplines have interrelations to each other. We can use other fields' analysis ways and methods, borrow others' ideas, and employ others' tools and models when we do research in a certain field of study. We do not have to localize our attention to only this field's tools, techniques and ways if thinking; what we need to do is that we should realize the need and possibility to bring other fields' knowledge and experience to our studies and research in certain fields, and that we should take actions to bring the realization into reality(C: good). Only in this way, our understanding of the world and ourselves can progress.

glassfrogUID: 170569

spritney，高手阿。
不管怎么说，就算是修改一两小时写到这个程度，我也只剩下羡慕的份了。
到后来我简直不是在修改，简直是在欣赏了。
我今天也是刚发了拙作，希望你也能提出修改意见。：）

点点滴滴走过UID: 195083

文章一气呵成。wonderful