issue150 电视和旅游，求砖头，西红柿也可以

不怕开水烫的猪UID: 187893

Issue150    昨天写的，今天改完了贴出来
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1 真实的旅游和在电视或网上看到的东西差别很大
2 电视和网络的发展使人们的旅游更加方便
3 一些景点正是由于电视和网络的发展而繁荣起来的。

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Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
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With the development of television and computer connections, people now can easily get the information about many places that they have never visited. However, it does not suggest that tourism will soon become obsolete as the speaker claims.  

First of all, what we get from a personal journey is much more than the information obtained from television programs or internet. A real tour provides us vivid 3-dimensional feelings from all the sense organs rather than a small picture limited by the size of the screen. For example, the pleasure of snow skiing in the Swiss Alps or breathing in Scottish Highland cannot be enjoyed just by sitting in front of a television. Only after climbing the Great Wall with sweat all over the body can a tourist really understand the meaning of an old Chinese saying "Conquering the Great Wall makes a man a hero". Also, a heart-to-heart conversation with folk people during a trip will give tourists cherished memory about the native culture. I had read a lot of articles about Huang Mountain before I visited it this summer. When I stood at the top of the Lotus Peak seeing all the cloud below, smelling the air and listening to the wind, I found that the Huang Mountain which I have seen on television is not the live one before my eyes then. In addition, the information on television or Internet is limited by the opinions of the photographers and editors, while in a real tour people can make their own decisions according to their wish and enjoy the journey with a free mind.

Secondly, information about great places on television or internet makes tourists easier and more convenient to plan and enjoy the tour. It can be proven by the increasing number of tourists around us. In the past, a reason why fewer people go for tour is the limitation of the information. Thus people do not know whether a place is worth visiting and hesitate in spending money on the trip. Now, much information about nearly all the places can be found on television or internet.  According to the information people can choose the most suitable places based on their hobbies, economic condition and so on. Also, no one would like to start a tour on a storming day, so people could check the weather on the television before they move out. And tourists can book hotels or buy train tickets through internets and get rid of lot of unnecessary troubles. In addition, people can read some relative information before they go to some great places. If they visit some historical places, enough preparation will make the trip more meaningful.

Furthermore, television and internet play a vital role in the development of some tourism places. One example is the development of the tourism of Huaxi village, a small and unknown village in Jangsu Province of China twenty years ago. After the significant economic development was reported in television programs, Huaxi village had become the focus of people’s interests and attract tourists all over the nation every year.

To sum up, although people can easily get information about great places from television and worldwide computer connections, the difference between visiting a place personally and watching it from television or internet determining that tourism will not be obsolete. On the contrary, the convenience of television and worldwide computer connections accelerate the booming of tourism.

RikkuUID: 170558

写得很好

本来我想给你改的，但看完后觉得在不足之处实在没什么可说的了

但还是有一点意见要提出来：b3写得很一般，没有展开论证，例子也举得一般
我觉得举丽江的例子就比较好一些，毕竟那里就是近几年吹出来的
而且老外对那里应该了解比较多一些

这个b3给我虎头蛇尾的感觉

不知道我的意见对不对，欢迎讨论

不怕开水烫的猪UID: 187893

多谢！第三段再举个例子就好了。如果考试碰上，时间不够我就只举丽江的例子了，一会儿查一查。