issue1 我的第一篇作文

zhivagoUID: 192018

1. While there is good reason to argue for a required national curriculum for all schools,
   national government should refrain from violating the cultural rights of ethnic groups.

  Education is one of the key words in the current society, and the curriculum for students
is uniquely desired consideration. China is a multi-national country, so it is not properly
to take simply a same national curriculum for the students under college. Special attention
should be paid to the problem about the cultural and education of ethnic groups.

  First and foremost, a national curriculum for all schools in all areas contributes to
preserving a unified national culture and national cohesion. China is an independent country,
and has a long and glorious history, both majority and minority share and benefit a lot from
it, so it is the responsibility for the nation to pass our history and culture on to our
children, no matter what ethnic groups he/she is. This is an important and effective way to
unify our country and enhance our national confidence. Second a unified curriculum would
give an equal opportunity to every student who enter the college entrance examination. It is
of particular importance not only for the students themselves, but also for their parents
and the whole nation. Because our children would have a chance to determine their destiny by
their own ability and efforts they paid, but for those unjust factors such as which
ethnic they are or where they been born. Still a unified national curriculum will assure the
students to have the necessary education what one should need to get on in the current
society.  

  Though the same national course has it's significance, special attention should be paid to
different ethnic groups. In a multi-cultural society, like China, different ethnic community
should be given the opportunity to preserve and promote their traditional cultures. This
opportunity is fatal for their survival, what more significant, it is the base of the
stabilization of our society . Without a stable circumstance, the development of the society
and humanity is impossible to be achieved. A same national curriculum, will deprived the
best opportunity the schools in the ethnic areas have for them to pass their peculiar
culture and languages on to their children. As a result, the minority will gradually lose
their individualities and customs, in the end, be assimilated by the majority culture. No
one wants to see this phenomenon, to see a society with just the same culture. So the
minority must have some courses of their own.

  In summary, as we discussed above, the best way out of this dilemma is a required national
core curriculum with additional ethnic courses. In this way, we can benefit from both and
keep the culture diversity.

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zhivagoUID: 192018

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