issue144 艺术类lasting value

so猫UID: 148633

一个想法
非常强悍的例子~~~
学习~

G猫UID: 192988

有个问题，这样引例子会不会太多？不知道从那本书上瞟来的，举例每段不要超过三句话。

nightsky2004UID: 155946

144 "It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value."

Do artists or critics give society something of lasting value?感觉有点奇怪，后面既然说了的观点（agree with the assertion），不妨直接说Do critics.. Although critics are helpful, more often than not, to interpret感觉这个词用得不太好，可以考虑改为analysis or appreciate and evaluate the art, I fundamentally agree with the assertion that the lasting value for society exists in art itself other than in the是不是不用定冠词呢？我有点记不清楚了 critique.
开头很简洁，属于开门见山的那一种，挺好。只不过首句话感觉有些问题。
Admittedly, I concede that critics help laymen（laymen虽然是事实，但是感觉像是一个贬义词（可能仅仅是个人感觉），是不是用average person更好些） understand the art work well since they are familiar with its background, author and meaning to the author's contemporaries.background是不是就包括了后面的两项了？我语文不好，不太清楚 I also concede that the constructive critique, which is critics’ feedback to certain art works, gives artists more idea to improve works and may even inspire artists to create new genre and style.
一般来说，我看到Admittedly，就会想当然的认为后面回加有一番解释，但是你这一段说得不是太清楚，缺乏力度，仅仅两句I concede是不行的，需要一些略微深入的话或者是例子，因为你毕竟是承认了critics的作用
However, any用any吗？记得很早就听说any仅仅在疑问句和否定句中用（可能应该换个位置），这里好像不是这两种情况呀，是不是用each更好些 persons who have studied arts when and where will agree that the true art is a product of artists’ authentic passion,如果不是true art会是如何呢？ a manifestation of the artist's unique creative impulses and a creativity of the artists' spirit. Thus, referring to the lasting value, the artists, who create art, play a profound role to give society more thoughts and ideas. Appreciating an art work is like having a talk with artists so that we are conveyed more information from arts. If we prefer to gain critics' talk content with artists other than to participating positively in the communication, the lasting value of the art for society may be ignored or filtrated by critic's narrow and subjective evaluation conforming to the established and out-dated standard. Examples from painting, music and literature support the point.
后面的一部分没有看明白，结合后面的例子，知道了是评论家的眼光和当时的社会的关系可能会埋没一些好作品，道理没错，但是感觉表述得挺奇怪，尤其是那个prefer to gain critics，本段力图在用最少的语言来说明自己的观点，具体的例子在后面，写法挺新颖的，原来没见过
In the realm of painting, when Monet's "Impression, Sunrise" first displaced in one Salon in Paris, it didn't win any praise but all critique from the critics. They excluded this type of painting since there was no genre had put so much emphasis on the usage of sunlight before impressionism. However, it was Impressionism that has epochal meaning to Western Arts. Monet introduced sunlight outside as an element to describe the nature. What’s more, by his painting, Monet, as an artist, gave the society new concept of beauty and gave birth to many genre afterwards. On the contrary, critics attempted to judge Impressionism according to the former principle and might be surprised ultimately that what they regarded as nonsense became the new leaf in history of art.
个人感觉例子用得挺好，语言表述得也不错，反正都比我说得好，只能称赞
In the realm of music, the esteemed critics, who were accustomed to the predictable harmonious and melodious length of Haydn, dismissed Beethoven's music as literally causing their ear to hurt. In fact, Beethoven, as an artist, converted the sorrow and frustration in our life into enthusiasm and infuriation to overcome the obstacle by the symphony. From his music world, the society obtains courage and strength continuously. Therefore, if we follow such critique, we may miss the greatest music and a collision with the heart of a greatest musician.

In the realm of literature, there also existed a significant writer whose works were criticized as barbaric. He was Shakespeare. Voltaire, who was immersed in the spirit to discover a way of reconciling new ideas with old classic faith, condemned Shakespeare's literature because he didn’t conform to the neo-classical principle of unity. Nonetheless, his critique didn't interrupt society to gain the lasting value from Shakespeare’s works. Shakespeare endowed his work the roman and optimism accord with the movie "Shakespeare in Love" as well as the realism and profundity like the prince's word "To be or Not To Be". His thoughts influenced the era of Renaissance and gave persons more lasting value.

In sum up, the essence of art, which are conveyed to the society as lasting value is thoughts of artists not the critique of critics. Without critics, art is still art. Whereas without artists, art is nothing.
搂主写得还是可以的，这样的题目写成这样的情况（还是限时的）已经很好了，中间说理的地方需要再改进一下，因为有些话显得空了些。再有就是评论家也不是一无是处的，因为最终艺术品的承认还是需要有些有眼光的critics，所以不好一概而论。啊，这个是观点的问题，说得有些远了。对于这种艺术类的题目，好像真的不好说清楚（我感觉），所以搂主写得可以（至少比起区区在下要强），加油呀

nightsky2004UID: 155946

不好意思，我早就接了，只是最近事多，一直没去看，幸亏没有占座，否则笑死了。
比起搂主，我太懒了。

haiyaUID: 187989

这几天都没用动笔，因为感觉看题要来不及了。所以就没有写。 没想到自己的帖子还有人在帮我顶。

谢谢了：）

老题快扫好了。扫完了认真改：）