issue41 nonmainstream areas 的有益性（当然反对啦）

haiyaUID: 187989

41"Such non-mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

Do nonmainstream areas of inquiry satisfy human needs in some realms in stead of mainstream science so that it is vital for the whole society? The author claims so. However, for my part, the claim is far less dear and seems to veil the ugly truth of these nonmainstream areas--that is to push the people and society into abyss.

To support the contention, the author perhaps points out three reasons about the irreplaceable advantage of nonmainstream areas. Learning about the knowledge, people are temporarily satisfied the explanation of some secrets which mainstream science hasn’t answered or formed a uniform and convincible answer. Learning about our own fate connotated by the fortune-telling and astrology, people can escape from the adversities and grasp the opportunities. Learning about the so-called “supreme world” in terms of psychic and paranormal pursuits, we level up the life value and are beneficial to the society as saviors. Nevertheless, the reasons which buttress the claim at the first glance are exactly the evidence to justify how fallacious and dangerous they themselves are.

Notwithstanding many phenomenons, such as the source of life and the aftermath of death, are still not clear in the angle of mainstream science, to believe the explanation of nonmainstream areas equals to deny the truth forever. In the nonmainstream areas, people are taught to ascribe the unexplainable phenomenon to the power of the God, who maybe emperor, leader or some fictive identity. These explanations are regarded as the relief of people's fear and worry from the unknown world. Actually, this is other way around. Common sense tells us that to establish a brand new concept is easier than to break the existing fixed concept and re-establish a concept on the original location. That is, people's eyes are blinded by these false explanations so that they are unable to see the sunshine and escape from the black evening of ignorance. Once the scientific sound from the mainstream about these elusive problems comes to the world, their view and understanding about the world will collapse so that they will live at sea.

Referring to the healthy life attitudes, although nonmainstream areas seem owning the marvelous power to foresee the fate of individual as well as the world, it leads to pessimist and negative attitudes. They are worried about encountering the “fated” adversities all the times and be unable to experience and cherish the happiness. Consider the "centuries", which was written by Notradamus. In the book, it foretells several catastrophes in the course of human's history. The recent so-called "evitable catastrophe" is the year of 2000, which was described as the doomsday. Many people are so obsessed with the foretelling that they had been frightened even committed suicide before the year of 2000 came. Nonetheless, now is the year of 2005 and the world does exist even become more beautiful. Thus, the future is hold by people’s own hands not determined by the ridiculous prediction of nonmainstream areas.

Additionally, to pursue the psyche and paranormality is deleterious for human and the stability of a society. Advocating the psychic and paranormal pursuit, many heresies attempt to control people's mind and reach their confidential goals through the so-called psychic and paranormal pursuits. Many giaours are sacrificed for the name of kindness, beauty and truth. Nevertheless, the deceptive kindness, beauty and truth are the trick of the heresy leader. In their eyes, the sacrificed people are merely instruments which they take advantage of for the aim of money, fame or status. Additionally, the heresies threaten the stability of the society. Accompanying with the death of the innocent people, how many families suffer from the breaking up? How many couples suffer from losing the husbands or wives? Also, how many children lose their parents? Disguising the symbol of kindness, truth and beauty, these nonmainstream areas, in fact, embody the hangman.

As the evil with a mask of angel, such nonmainstream areas of inquiry have no good to the human. Instead, they destroy the harmonious society by trap, trick and lie. In fact, although mainstream science is impossible to expel all muddle now, human are available to acquire satisfaction from various positive and healthy entertainments. For my belief, only holding the scientific view about the world, we will enjoy the kindness, truth and beauty!


写得长了点还超时了（谁能帮它瘦瘦身？），结尾是后来补上的。还有一些邪邪事后改了一遍。

haiyaUID: 187989

捞一下，大家写得都很勤快呢~~各位晚安：）

victoriazhizhiUID: 163135

嗯？占一个。学习学习，明日回

鬼谷子UID: 159645

经常看到haiya发贴，帮别人改文章也很积极呢
来给你献一个：（现在有事，晚上给你改）

haiyaUID: 187989

等你们的意见喔。

然后可以帮它减肥。:P

louchen1984UID: 172975

Do nonmainstream areas of inquiry satisfy human needs in some realms in stead of mainstream science so that it is vital for the whole society? The author claims so. However, for my part, the claim is far less dear and seems to veil the ugly truth of these nonmainstream areas--that is to push the people and society into abyss.【abyss?会不会太严重，astrology还是有科学性的】

To support the contention, the author perhaps points out three reasons about the irreplaceable advantage of nonmainstream areas. Learning about the knowledge, people are temporarily satisfied 【with】the explanation of some secrets which mainstream science hasn’t answered or formed a uniform and convincible answer【改成answered yet会不会简洁一些？】. Learning about our own fate connotated by the fortune-telling and astrology, people can escape from the adversities and grasp the opportunities. Learning about the so-called “supreme world” in terms of psychic and paranormal pursuits, we level up the life value and are beneficial to the society as saviors. Nevertheless, the reasons which buttress the claim at the first glance are exactly the evidence to justify how fallacious and dangerous they themselves are. 【这句有点绕】

Notwithstanding many phenomenons, such as the source of life and the aftermath of death, are still not clear in the angle of mainstream science, 【however,】to believe the explanation of nonmainstream areas equals to deny the truth forever. In the nonmainstream areas, people are taught to ascribe the unexplainable phenomenon to the power of the God, who maybe emperor, leader or some fictive identity. These explanations are regarded as the relief of people's fear and worry from the unknown world. Actually, this is other way around. Common sense tells us that to establish a brand new concept is easier than to break the existing fixed concept and re-establish a concept on the original location. That is, people's eyes are blinded by these false explanations so that they are unable to see the sunshine and escape from the black evening of ignorance.【这句是指黎明前的黑暗人们没有坚持下去吗？不太明白】 Once the scientific sound from the mainstream about these elusive problems comes to the world, their view and understanding about the world will collapse so that they will live at sea.

Referring to the healthy life attitudes, although nonmainstream areas seem owning the marvelous power to foresee the fate of individual as well as the world, it leads to pessimist and negative attitudes. They are worried about encountering the “fated” adversities all the times and be unable to experience and cherish the happiness. Consider the "centuries", which was written by Notradamus. In the book, it foretells several catastrophes in the course of human's history. The recent so-called "evitable catastrophe" is the year of 2000, which was described as the doomsday. Many people are so obsessed with the foretelling that they had been frightened even committed suicide before the year of 2000 came. Nonetheless, now is the year of 2005 and the world does exist even become more beautiful. Thus, the future is hold by people’s own hands not determined by the ridiculous prediction of nonmainstream areas.【这个例子不错就是写的长了些】

Additionally, to pursue the psyche and paranormality is deleterious for human and the stability of a society. Advocating the psychic and paranormal pursuit, many heresies attempt to control people's mind and reach their confidential goals through the so-called psychic and paranormal pursuits. Many giaours are sacrificed for the name of kindness, beauty and truth. Nevertheless, the deceptive kindness, beauty and truth【前后重复，建议把前面的改成一个统称】 are the trick of the heresy leader. In their eyes, the sacrificed people are merely instruments which they take advantage of for the aim of money, fame or status. Additionally, the heresies threaten the stability of the society. Accompanying with the death of the innocent people, how many families suffer from the breaking up? How many couples suffer from losing the husbands or wives? Also, how many children lose their parents? Disguising the symbol of kindness, truth and beauty, these nonmainstream areas, in fact, embody the hangman.【可以说说法轮功和日本的奥姆真理教，不过psychic and paranormal 不都是邪恶的吧？】

As the evil with a mask of angel, 【还是觉得有些极端】such nonmainstream areas of inquiry have no good to the human. Instead, they destroy the harmonious society by trap, trick and lie. In fact, although mainstream science is impossible to expel all muddle 【mysteries/puzzles】now, human are available to acquire satisfaction from various positive and healthy entertainments. For my belief, only holding the scientific view about the world, we will enjoy the kindness, truth and beauty!【呵呵好可爱】

louchen1984UID: 172975

这种结构很好，清晰啊，不知道45分钟来不来的及写1，2，3大段

鬼谷子UID: 159645

No.1 issue41 nonmainstream areas 的有益性（当然反对啦）
41"Such non-mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
Do nonmainstream areas of inquiry satisfy human needs in some realms in stead of mainstream science so that it is vital for the whole society? The author claims so. 【用问句restate了一下，首先要说，restate的写法我不支持的，而且，问句开头现在也是被用的太多了】 However, for my part, the claim is far less dear and seems to veil the ugly truth of these nonmainstream areas--that is to push the people and society into abyss. 【说的很吓人哦:D 】

To support the contention, the author perhaps【是你要猜想题目结论的前提吗？不如肯定一点，你可以说持这种观点的人一定是立足于这样的前提：ABC】 points out three reasons about the irreplaceable advantage of nonmainstream areas. Learning about the knowledge, people are temporarily satisfied the explanation of some secrets which mainstream science hasn’t answered or formed a uniform and convincible answer. Learning about our own fate connotated by the fortune-telling and astrology, people can escape from the adversities and grasp the opportunities. Learning about the so-called “supreme world” in terms of psychic and paranormal pursuits, we level up the life value and are beneficial to the society as saviors. 【我们是救世主？】 Nevertheless, the reasons which buttress the claim at the first glance are exactly the evidence to justify how fallacious and dangerous they themselves are. 【用argument的语言作出反驳】

【否定了题目观点的前提，论述的不错，总领下文，分三点展开，不过第三点我觉得不是很好】

Notwithstanding many phenomenons, 【这个已经是复数了】 such as the source 【origin好点】 of life and the aftermath of death【感觉aftermath用在这里不是很合适】, are still not clear in the angle of mainstream science, to believe the explanation of nonmainstream areas equals to deny the truth forever. 【太绝对了啊，应该避免用绝对性的语言】 In the nonmainstream areas, people are taught to ascribe the unexplainable phenomenon to the power of the God, who maybe emperor, leader or some fictive identity【该用复数】. These explanations are regarded as the relief of people's fear and worry from the unknown world. Actually, this is other way around. 【新概念patterns of culture里面的句子，不过应该是it is the other way around】 Common sense tells us that to establish a brand new concept is easier than to break the existing fixed concept and re-establish a concept on the original location. That is, people's eyes are blinded by these false explanations so that they are unable to see the sunshine and escape from the black【dark ，gloomy，murky会好一点】 evening of ignorance. Once the scientific sound from the mainstream about these elusive problems comes to the world, their view and understanding about the world will collapse so that they will live at sea 【你指的是什么啊？】
【说理还不错，但是，没有例子，所以让人感觉生硬枯燥了点】

Referring to the healthy life attitudes, although nonmainstream areas seem owning the marvelous power to foresee the fate of individual as well as the world, it leads to pessimist【你想说pessimism？】 and negative attitudes. They【who？】 are worried about encountering the “fated” adversities all the times and be unable to experience and cherish the happiness. Consider the "centuries", which was written by Notradamus. 【诸世纪我看过，嘿嘿，不过诺查丹玛斯的名字你拼错了，是Nostradamus，好像这个名字是一个单词，或者说引申成了一个单词】 In the book, it 【这里说he感觉比较好】 foretells several catastrophes in the course of human's history. The recent so-called "evitable【你想说inevitable？】  catastrophe" is the year of 2000, 【应该是1999年7月，Century X 72—《诸世纪》第十章第72篇】 which was described as the doomsday. Many people are so obsessed with the foretelling that they had been frightened even committed suicide before the year of 2000 came. Nonetheless, now is the year of 2005 and the world does exist even become 【去掉】 more beautiful. 【这里应该说safe，secure之类的吧】 Thus, the future is hold by people’s own hands not【but not】 determined by the ridiculous prediction of nonmainstream areas.

【这段的例子很好，不过，引用的时候注意准确，尤其是人名一定要写对】

Additionally, to pursue the psyche 【题目的psychic我觉得不是取其精神的意思而是超自然的意思，所以不应该用psyche做为其名词形式，应该用psychic，它本身就是名词，表示“psychic phenomena”】 and paranormality【没查到这个词，用paranormal phenomena表达好一点吧】 is deleterious for human and the stability of a society. Advocating the psychic and paranormal pursuit, many heresies attempt to control people's mind and reach their confidential 【surreptitious 好一点吧】 goals through the so-called psychic and paranormal pursuits. Many giaours 【这个词是伊斯兰教指基督教徒的用语，不太合适】 are sacrificed for the name of kindness, beauty and truth. Nevertheless, the deceptive kindness, beauty and truth are the trick of the heresy leader. In their eyes, the sacrificed people are merely instruments which they take advantage of for the aim of money, fame or status. Additionally, 【前面用过了，换一下，furthermore，moreover等等】 the heresies threaten the stability of the society. Accompanying with the death of the innocent people, how many families suffer from the breaking up? How many couples suffer from losing the husbands or wives? Also, how many children lose their parents? Disguising the symbol of kindness, truth and beauty, these nonmainstream areas, in fact, embody the hangman.
【第一个问题是你一再的用heresy，你的意思是要说邪教，但是，这个不是很准确的。第二个问题是，邪教的问题似乎不是psychic and paranormal的典型，而你到后面有点偷换概念的嫌疑，把反驳psychic and paranormal变成反驳邪教了，这里再斟酌一下】

As the evil with a mask of angel, such nonmainstream areas of inquiry have no good to the human. Instead, they destroy the harmonious society by trap, trick and lie【through trapping tricking/cheating and lying会不会好点】. In fact, although mainstream science is impossible to expel all muddle now, human are available to acquire satisfaction from various positive and healthy entertainments. 【这句说的不好，这些困惑其实是对于一些未知世界的困惑不解，我觉得这种困惑不是entertainments可以解决的】 For my belief, only holding the scientific view about the world, we will enjoy the kindness, truth and beauty!

【结构清楚，语言流畅，有一些小错误，而且B1的第三点和B4有点问题。不过，文章给我的感觉是写成了一篇argument，一直在反驳反驳反驳，issue应该是立论文的，你这样写的风险很大，很可能会被认为对于issue写法理解不清而低分的。加油！】

victoriazhizhiUID: 163135

先佩服一下下，限时可以700字以上，越来越猛了J
Do nonmainstream areas of inquiry satisfy human needs in some realms in stead instead of mainstream science so that it is vital for the whole society? The author claims so. However, for my part, the claim is far less dear and seems to veil the ugly truth of these nonmainstream areas--that is to push the people and society into abyss.严重了吧，push people and society into abyss？毕竟存在了几千年而且在科技不发达时候还是很有作用滴

To support the contention, the author perhaps points out three reasons about the irreplaceable advantage of nonmainstream nonmaintream前是应该有限制的 areas. Learning about the knowledge, people are temporarily satisfied 加with the explanation of some secrets which mainstream science hasn’t answered or formed a uniform and convincible answer. Learning about our own fate connotated by the fortune-telling and astrology, people can escape from the adversities and grasp the opportunities. Learning about the so-called “supreme world” in terms of psychic and paranormal pursuits, we level up the life value and are beneficial to the society as saviors. Nevertheless, the reasons which buttress the claim at the first glance are exactly the evidence to justify how fallacious and dangerous they themselves are. 这段思路8错，语言流畅，结尾也很启下

Notwithstanding many phenomenons,在word里这个词划红线让改单数，我也记得貌似没有加s的形式 such as the source of life and the aftermath  是要说死了之后的去向么？ of death, are still not clear in the angle of mainstream science, to believe the explanation of nonmainstream areas equals to deny the truth forever. In the nonmainstream areas, people are taught to ascribe the unexplainable phenomenon to the power of the God, who maybe emperor, leader or some fictive identity. These explanations are regarded as the relief of people's fear and worry from the unknown world. Actually, this is other way around. Common sense tells us that to establish a brand new concept is easier than to break the existing fixed concept and re-establish a concept on the original location. That is, people's eyes are blinded by these false explanations so that they are unable to see the sunshine and escape from the black evening of ignorance. Once the scientific sound from the mainstream about these elusive problems comes to the world, their view and understanding about the world will collapse so that they will live at sea.？没明白最后，最好说说什么样的sea嘿嘿。这段论述的很清晰，也比较透，读起来很悟，赞

Referring to the healthy life attitudes, although nonmainstream areas seem owning the marvelous power to foresee the fate of individual as well as the world, it leads to pessimist and negative attitudes. They they指虾米？ are worried about encountering the “fated” adversities all the times and be are unable to experience and cherish the happiness. Consider the "centuries", which was written by Notradamus. In the book, it foretells several catastrophes in the course of human's history. The recent so-called "evitable catastrophe" is the year of 2000, 好像97年，呵呵，偶8记得了 which was described as the doomsday. Many people are so obsessed with the foretelling that they had been frightened even committed suicide before the year of 2000 came. Nonetheless, now is the year of 2005 and the world does exist and even becomes more beautiful. Thus, the future is hold by people’s own hands not determined by the ridiculous prediction of nonmainstream areas.例子也8错，羡慕ing。界个说了会给人心里蒙上阴影，有的呢还会让人过分欢喜然后不思进取，整天白日梦，感觉稍微带一下会完整点

Additionally, to pursue the psyche and paranormality is deleterious for human and the stability of a society. Advocating the psychic and paranormal pursuit, many heresies attempt to control people's mind and reach their confidential goals through the so-called psychic and paranormal pursuits. Many giaours 不认得这个词，查了一下，怎么伊斯兰教词？还说是不相信伊斯兰教的人们，奇怪ing。还有个问题，上次有个同学用了巫婆骗人的例子，我一直觉得这些和邪教了，蹩脚江湖郎中溜达云云属于诈骗和犯罪，貌似不是题目说的那个nonmainstream了，再斟酌一下。个人看法 are sacrificed for the name of kindness, beauty and truth. Nevertheless, the deceptive kindness, beauty and truth are the trick of the heresy leader. In their eyes, the sacrificed people are merely instruments which they take advantage of for the aim of money, fame or status.看这里还是说了为了一些不正当的利益，觉得题目的那些不太对的上 Additionally, the heresies threaten the stability of the society. Accompanying with the death of the innocent people, how many families suffer from the breaking up? How many couples suffer from losing the husbands or wives? Also, how many children lose their parents? Disguising the symbol of kindness, truth and beauty, these nonmainstream areas, in fact, embody the hangman.语言都很流畅还比较有气势^ ^

As the evil with a mask of angel, such nonmainstream areas of inquiry have no 绝对咧 good to the human. Instead, they destroy the harmonious society by trap, trick and lie. In fact, although mainstream science is impossible to expel all muddle now, human are available to acquire satisfaction from various positive and healthy entertainments. For my belief, only holding the scientific view about the world, we will enjoy the kindness, truth and beauty!结尾很好
1.语言很流畅，思路很清晰，很佩服的说，赞一赞
2． 有一个我自己的看法，我在改你文章过程中一直没有提到，现在说一下：我觉得题目的意思是说这些东西“是不是”vital的，“有没有”解决了那些科技不能解决的问题。而你B2一直反驳的目的是它们“不应该”vital。就是常说的那个is 和should的问题。B1虽然也有一点这样的感觉，但是整体还好。B2感觉稍微有些歪了点。
3．照我上面的理解呢，B2有些歪了。如果你想减肥这个作文的话，就在B2删减一些东西，和B1进行适当的分配。
4．限时写这么好已经很赞了，这样考试一定没问题的，继续加油！
5．快到考试了，注意身体，保持状态！

haiyaUID: 187989

收文章啦~~~困困。

谢谢大家的批改。我看看，明天回答。：）

haiyaUID: 187989

那么晚才回复。。。因为后来对于psychis 和paranormal自己也没主意了。所以今天才回复。
首先回答 喜爱艾弗森的victoriazhizhi
1。申明喔，凡是看到字数在650以上都是限时失败的。必然。再也打不快了，再快就都是错字了。：p
2。phenomenon, 其实我印象中是复数了。我的2000版的word居然老找它的碴，所以我就加s。到底要不要加呢？
3。the aftermath==>afterlife 改
4。at sea是茫然的，不过后来改掉了，好象造成了大家不必要的误解。
5。我觉得我的论述再于非主流的这些学科不能满足人们在科学上满足不了的要求。是个is论断啊。所以它是不是vital就不言自明了。

还有鬼鬼~~
1。nostradamus,估计再也忘不了这个词了。
2。关于不断反驳一说，是不是指各个段落里也在反驳呢？
我挺喜欢用这个先把可能性摆出来，再一一对照着批评同时陈述自己的观点。因为印象很深的是一篇280的范文，当时给我的印象是在是太强烈了，把题目反驳的是体无完肤。所以自己一有机会就想用一把。如果是指段内反驳，上次也不小心看到一篇范文，段内就是让步+反驳+让步+反驳。一步步的。我不是特别可以去那么多，但我觉得只要说的有条理，问题也不大。
argu和issue的区别---？是不是issue要有自己的观点而argu只要找错误？
那我觉得我的在这篇的主题很明确是反驳，认识非主流不能满足人们在主流科学上无法满足的需要。

haiyaUID: 187989

还有澄清一下，自己查了一下。paranormal和邪教的关系不大。：）

不要误导大家了。

LSDUID: 157855

呵呵，hai ya的文章还是这么受欢迎，今天刚回学校，占座喽！

LSDUID: 157855

41"Such non-mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

Do nonmainstream areas of inquiry satisfy human needs in some realms in stead of mainstream science so that it is vital for the whole society? The author claims so. However, for my part, the claim is far less dear and seems to veil the ugly truth of these nonmainstream areas--that is to push the people and society into abyss.[开头还可以]

To support the contention, the author perhaps points out three reasons about the irreplaceable advantage of nonmainstream areas. [FIRST] Learning about the knowledge, people are temporarily satisfied the explanation of some secrets which mainstream science hasn’t answered or formed a uniform and convincible answer. [SECOND] Learning about our own fate connotated[？？] by the fortune-telling and astrology, people can escape from the adversities and grasp the opportunities. [THIRD] Learning about the so-called “supreme world” in terms of psychic and paranormal pursuits, we level up the life value and are beneficial to the society as saviors. Nevertheless, the reasons which buttress the claim at the first glance are exactly the evidence to justify how fallacious and dangerous they themselves are. [这段用排比句从反面论述，不过个人认为论述过于单薄，不是很有说服力]

[Notwithstanding many phenomenons, such as the source of life and the aftermath of death, are still not clear in the angle of mainstream science, to believe the explanation of nonmainstream areas equals to deny the truth forever.] In the nonmainstream areas, people are taught to ascribe the unexplainable phenomenon to the power of the God, who maybe emperor, leader or some fictive identity. These explanations are regarded as the relief of people's fear and worry from the unknown world. Actually, this is other way around. Common sense tells us that to establish a brand new concept is easier than to break the existing fixed concept and re-establish a concept on the original location. That is, people's eyes are blinded by these false explanations so that they are unable to see the sunshine and escape from the black evening of ignorance. Once the scientific sound from the mainstream about these elusive problems comes to the world, their view and understanding about the world will collapse so that they will live at sea.[这段其实可以多写写现象]

[Referring to the healthy life attitudes, although nonmainstream areas seem owning the marvelous power to foresee the fate of individual as well as the world, it leads to pessimist and negative attitudes. ] They are worried about encountering the “fated” adversities all the times and be [are]unable to experience and cherish the happiness. Consider the "centuries", which was written by Notradamus. In the book, it foretells several catastrophes in the course of human's history. The recent so-called "evitable catastrophe" is the year of 2000, which was described as the doomsday. Many people are so obsessed with the foretelling that they had been frightened even committed suicide before the year of 2000 came. Nonetheless, now is the year of 2005 and the world does exist even become more beautiful. Thus, the future is hold by people’s own hands not determined by the ridiculous prediction of nonmainstream areas.[这段不错啊]

Additionally,[ to pursue the psyche and paranormality is deleterious for human and the stability of a society.] Advocating the psychic and paranormal pursuit, many heresies attempt to control people's mind and reach their confidential goals through the so-called psychic and paranormal pursuits. Many giaours are sacrificed for the name of kindness, beauty and truth. Nevertheless, the deceptive kindness, beauty and truth are the trick of the heresy leader. In their eyes, the sacrificed people are merely instruments which they take advantage of for the aim of money, fame or status. Additionally,[重复了] the heresies threaten the stability of the society. Accompanying with the death of the innocent people, how many families suffer from the breaking up? How many couples suffer from losing the husbands or wives? Also, how many children lose their parents? Disguising the symbol of kindness, truth and beauty, these nonmainstream areas, in fact, embody the hangman.

As the evil with a mask of angel, such nonmainstream areas of inquiry have no good to the human. Instead, they destroy the harmonious society by trap, trick and lie. In fact, although mainstream science is impossible to expel all muddle now, human are available to acquire satisfaction from various positive and healthy entertainments. For my belief, only holding the scientific view about the world, we will enjoy the kindness, truth and beauty!

[唉，好多天没碰作文了，我已经很菜了，简单看了看，楼主快考了吧，很不错了，add oil！！]

haiyaUID: 187989

亲亲~~看到LSDmm了。

对的，我快要熬出头了！