issue157 里面不但有G文，还有心得，大家来看啊，看完再拍，不拍没关系，看看也欢

fengboallanUID: 157405

在作文论坛里从第一天泡到现在也有20多天了，现在临考了，写一些心得，回馈一下Gter，当然，也是给马上要考得G友。3月1号考完了会详细写一篇心得的，毕竟拿走了那么多。
这篇文章，限时完成，但是，写完了，又用了好多时间改了好多。说实话，要不真的不敢拿上来。错字，病句全是，问题来了。考试的时候可没有时间再让你改了阿。
限时的问题大家都知道
我来浅浅的分析一下，首先是argument限时的问题。其实这个比较好解决。因为他非常的模块化。原因在于，一个错误一个错误的分析。然后一个一个的攻击，句子都很模块，什么it is posssible that,什么，perhaps 。这个解决的办法很简单，一定把开头结尾你的句子背熟了，然后里面这种分析的句子背熟那么五六个，考的时候按时就应该没有问题了。

对于issue，说实话，我还没有什么特别好的解决方案/每个题目千差万别，很难应用模块。时间紧的可能你都忘了模块式什么了。限时很痛苦，思维根本没时间打开，对于多数人。能写到500字以上，针对他们的打字速度，上来就应该写，不允许一点犹豫。
强烈建议以下几点： 牛牛除外

1考试的时候或者模拟的时候，在计时之前就把能想起来的开头套路想好，经典的例子和人命在纸上写上，然后再开始。考试的时候type的时间不长，但是思维一旦停止，从新恢复，会浪费很多的时间。
2千千万万别忘记留五分钟去检查一下文章，千万别再自信自己的type的能力，里面错误相当多。甚至，过多的拼写错误已经无法使读者读下全文了。
3考试以前尽可能多的把老题，机经的题目的分论点想好并记住。
4说实话，第三条我觉得非常难，其实很多人到考场上，紧张的分论点早都忘了，还什么例子阿，都是现想。我说了牛人除外，别把我的话当ARGUMENT.所以，强烈建议：
多记住例子的人名和例子，从现在开始，每天在GTER上看1个小时的例子。并记住。说实话，真的要是碰见我说的，没见过的题，忘记了准备的例子和提纲。那么你积累的这些例子就是你的救命的稻草。很多时候，有了例子，论证的时候你就更有信心了
5在type以前，必须把全文的逻辑关系，思路都想好在开始。边想边打无疑最慢，而且思维混乱。逻辑更是自己把自己说到云里雾里了。
6限时和不限时就像篮球打半场和全厂一样。根本就是两回事。打得好半场的，全场未必好使。所以，着重训练限时的能力。最后你能遇到一个题目，思考，加type都在45分钟内。说明你上层次了。但是这样好像挺难。
7开头结尾，在考试以前一定找到自己的套路，会为你节省宝贵的检查时间。而且，准备好的开头结尾对于不是牛牛的人来说，永远都比你现场想的好。




我说了，所有的话都不是对牛牛说的。大家自己对号入座吧。我觉得我就不是牛牛，所以，此文不用当argument攻击。有用的用上，没有用就当没看过好了。很实际的话。



最后一句：写再好的文章，不是限时写的，基本等于白写！
为了证明你的能力，限时出来遛遛。非常重要
谢谢大家！
衷心的


这篇文章帮我看看

拍我的一定回拍，且非常认真地拍你：谢谢



157."There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires."
没有哪件事情是客观观察的结果。所有的观察都是主观的；它们在很大程度上决定于观察者的期望和偏好。


In this world, every view grows from human brain. To one truth, there are many kinds of observation. Of course, all came from various kinds of person's expectations and desires. Indeed, I agree with the statement above. In this issue, I would like to show more evidences to prove my view.

Experience tells us various people distinguish one fact by different themselves’ views. As we know, some thing happens, the reason was confirmed, and the result had been showed. But the influence and review are observed in different way. As a point of my view, there are possibly no mistake with different views and observation. People come from different backgrounds and education. How can they face to one thing with one sound? For example, the end of Soviet Union is a distinct instance. Even all over the world believe it was a progress to world peace because it ended the Cold War. From then on, Russia went also from autarchy to democracy. However in North Korea, an arbitrary government, they don't think it is a good news to them because they lose a 'friend' in some circumstance. Of course, easy to answer this question, because North Korea has already been isolated from the world, it only has connection with some countries. For their benefit, they of course do not like to lose a ‘friend’ which can help them. As I have said everything is object. The Soviet Union ended is a truth, but the sounds from all over the world are different, even opposite.

Although, sounds is different even opposite, world needs it. In the realm of science like many other realm, observation which had guided by the observer's expectations or desires help the world develop. As an educator’ words: professor’s view is not always right! For example, if Copernicus was a churchman, possibly, the truth that earth has revolution with sun maybe proved later. Even a college student, now in study period, I also need to observe things in my opinion. It trains my own personality and views.
   
At the same time, we should own ability to observe fact in a right and scientific way. To modern society, people should respect science but not believe anything as they expected. Or the result is a nightmare. Last year in China, SARS was coming unfortunately. At first, Beijing government didn’t reveal the truth to citizens because some leaders believed it would go later in error. Then, the influence is so bad that citizens did not know to protect themselves, because they did know the circumstance is so bad. The infection went on expanding without any prohibition. After that, according to medicinal professional person's idea: The infection information should be showed openly. Everyone should know the information like which bus or train had ever take infectors. In this way, we beat the SARS at last.

In sum, object observation is always expressed differently by our emotion, background, mood and desire. Since we can stop our brain express in this way, we should use scientific and technological tool to equip our mind. Try to observe every fact objectively, truly, and accurately.


很多例子可能偏激了，反正，对待政治的观点多向老美的方向倾斜吧。说真的，当是想不到别的例子了。

鬼谷子UID: 159645

总结的很好，加个精
文章我明天改

haiyaUID: 187989

yi? pp3模拟，时间从proceed开始看到题目时动起来的。。。注意喔。

ivyshoulUID: 195537

诶?
思考的时间是不计时的么?
要开始type了才计时啊?

chrisssssssUID: 176321

审题，是计时的。从看到供选择的两个题目起，计时就开始了。

eberlinUID: 194746

对啊，看题目选题目的时间算在45分钟内了

hjhjhj1984UID: 160270

审题时间计在内的说

staralwaysUID: 193479

恩恩，说的不错，期待考试结束后的那篇详细感想：）

龙非UID: 193190

In this world, every view grows from human brain. To one truth, there are many kinds of observation. Of course, all came from various kinds of person's expectations and desires. Indeed, I agree with the statement above. In this issue, I would like to show more evidences to prove my view. 起始段好，简洁有力，除了最后一句话是在凑字数，没必要

Experience tells us various people distinguish one fact by different themselves’ views. As we know, some thing happens, the reason was confirmed, and the result had been showed. But the influence and review are observed in different way. As a point of my view, there are possibly no mistake with different views and observation. People come from different backgrounds and education. How can they face to one thing with one sound? For example, the end of Soviet Union is a distinct instance. Even all over the world believe it was a progress to world peace because it ended the Cold War. From then on, Russia went also from autarchy to democracy. However in North Korea, an arbitrary government, they don't think it is a good news to them because they lose a 'friend' in some circumstance. Of course, easy to answer this question, because North Korea has already been isolated from the world, it only has connection with some countries. For their benefit, they of course do not like to lose a ‘friend’ which can help them. As I have said everything is object. The Soviet Union ended is a truth, but the sounds from all over the world are different, even opposite.

Although, sounds is different even opposite, world needs it. In the realm of science like many other realm, observation which had guided by the observer's expectations or desires help the world develop. As an educator’ words: professor’s view is not always right! For example, if Copernicus was a churchman, possibly, the truth that earth has revolution with sun maybe proved later. Even a college student, now in study period, I also need to observe things in my opinion. It trains my own personality and views. 这一段对论证主题没有太大的用处，主题是不存在完全客观的观察，而这一段讲needs different sound，离得比较远。既然B1论述了每个人观察问题角度不同，也就是主观性的存在，那么B2应该进一步论述观察的主体是主要是人，必然带来了主观性。即使观察的主体是机器，但机器也是人造的，必然也带来了主观性


At the same time, we should own ability to observe fact in a right and scientific way. To modern society, people should respect science but not believe anything as they expected. Or the result is a nightmare. Last year in China, SARS was coming unfortunately. At first, Beijing government didn’t reveal the truth to citizens because some leaders believed it would go later in error. Then, the influence is so bad that citizens did not know to protect themselves, because they did know the circumstance is so bad. The infection went on expanding without any prohibition. After that, according to medicinal professional person's idea: The infection information should be showed openly. Everyone should know the information like which bus or train had ever take infectors. In this way, we beat the SARS at last. 这一段让步让得也不好，讲人们应该以正确的、科学的方法来观察事实，言下之意是存在客观的方法来观察事物，那不是自己打自己嘴巴啦：）。让步应该是说虽然观察是主观的，但是我们可以通过一些方法来获取客观的结果


In sum, object observation is always expressed differently by our emotion, background, mood and desire. Since we can stop our brain express in this way, we should use scientific and technological tool to equip our mind. Try to observe every fact objectively, truly, and accurately. . 总结也不好，根本没有呼应自己的观点，还在讲可以客观地观察事物，那前面不就瞎忙活了，能有说服力吗

一家之言，欢迎指正，共勉之
说得有点狠 :D ，见谅，一贯风格。

龙非UID: 193190

忘了谢谢你那不错的总结，补上:D

冥界星灿UID: 184746

先占座，下午四点前

kkytUID: 188814

太有同感了

tottiUID: 184291

感谢楼主的经验
不过有一点要特别提醒:
在你看到2选1题目的一刹那就开始45min倒计时了
所以大家在练习时往往先看题目再想提纲再想例子
才开始按45min计时写的话是超时的呀!

nickaaronleeUID: 183378

In this world, every view grows from human brain. To one truth, there are many kinds of observation. Of course, all came from various kinds of person's expectations and desires. Indeed, I agree with the statement above. In this issue, I would like to show more evidences to prove my view.（我不知道这样引起下文的方式是否合适，我个人不是很喜欢）

Experience tells us various people distinguish one fact by different themselves’ views. As we know, some thing happens, the reason was confirmed, and the result had been showed. But the influence and review are observed in different way. As a point of my view, there are possibly no mistake with different views and observation. People come from different backgrounds and education. How can they face to one thing with one sound? For example, the end of Soviet Union is a distinct instance. Even all over the world believe it was a progress to world peace because it ended the Cold War. From then on, Russia went also from autarchy to democracy. However in North Korea, an arbitrary government, they don't think it is a good news to them because they lose a 'friend' in some circumstance. Of course, easy to answer this question, because North Korea has already been isolated from the world, it only has connection with some countries. For their benefit, they of course do not like to lose a ‘friend’ which can help them. As I have said everything is object. The Soviet Union ended is a truth, but the sounds from all over the world are different, even opposite.（你把observation放大了，从一个view的角度来说明这段，我不知道这样是否可以，从广义的理解observation应该是可以接受的吧，对于苏联的例子，分析得还不够）

Although, sounds is different even opposite, world needs it. In the realm of science like many other realm, observation which had guided by the observer's expectations or desires help the world develop. As an educator’ words: professor’s view is not always right! For example, if Copernicus was a churchman, possibly, the truth that earth has revolution with sun maybe proved later. Even a college student, now in study period, I also need to observe things in my opinion. It trains my own personality and views.（我觉得哥白尼的例子不支持本段TS，他的观察是来源于客观，并不是他先有了期望然后发现了事实）

At the same time, we should own ability to observe fact in a right and scientific way. To modern society, people should respect science but not believe anything as they expected. Or the result is a nightmare. Last year in China, SARS was coming unfortunately. At first, Beijing government didn’t reveal the truth to citizens because some leaders believed it would go later in error. Then, the influence is so bad that citizens did not know to protect themselves, because they did know the circumstance is so bad. The infection went on expanding without any prohibition. After that, according to medicinal professional person's idea: The infection information should be showed openly. Everyone should know the information like which bus or train had ever take infectors. In this way, we beat the SARS at last.（SARS的例子不错，举例后最好再分析一下。）

In sum, object observation is always expressed differently by our emotion, background, mood and desire. Since we can stop our brain express in this way, we should use scientific and technological tool to equip our mind. Try to observe every fact objectively, truly, and accurately.
（总的来说还是不错的，就是body 2需要修改一下，例子问题角度不同理解不同，呵呵，加油~~~）

鬼谷子UID: 159645

157."There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires."
没有哪件事情是客观观察的结果。所有的观察都是主观的；它们在很大程度上决定于观察者的期望和偏好。


In this world, every view grows from human brain. To one truth, there are many kinds of observation. Of course, all came from various kinds of person's expectations and desires. Indeed, I agree with the statement above. In this issue, I would like to show more evidences to prove my view. 【后面这两句有点多余，因为没有说出来什么有用的内容，可以考虑去掉。而前面你的观点交代的有点太简略，有点含糊，可以考虑多加两句解释一下为什么observation会of course就是expectations or desires了】

Experience tells us various people distinguish one fact by different themselves’ 【去掉】views. As we know, some thing happens【something happens/some things happen】, the reason was confirmed, and the result had been showed. But the influence and review【？】 are observed in different way. As a point of my view, there are possibly no mistake 【复数】with different views and observation. People come from different backgrounds and education. How can they face to one thing with one sound? 【sound，face？放在一起不合适。看到这里才明白你的意思，前面几句需要修改，很不清楚，让人找不到你的思路】 For example, the end 【collapse】of Soviet Union is a distinct instance. Even all over the world believe it was a progress to world peace because it ended the Cold War. From then on, Russia went also from autarchy to democracy. However in North Korea, an arbitrary government, they don't think it is a good news to them because they lose a 'friend' in some circumstance. Of course, easy to answer this question, because North Korea has already been isolated from the world, it only has connection with some countries. For their benefit, they of course do not like to lose a ‘friend’ which can help them. As I have said everything is object. 【这个不是形容词】 The Soviet Union ended is a truth, but the sounds from all over the world are different, even opposite.
【只是谈到了different，没有证明为什么是guided by the observer's expectations or desires】

Although, sounds is 【？？are】different even opposite, world needs it【them】.【为什么不用observation呢？这个才是题目的重点啊，你用sound 想比喻的是什么？】In the realm of science like many other realm, observation which had guided by the observer's expectations or desires help the world develop. As an educator’ words: professor’s view is not always right! For example, if Copernicus was a churchman, possibly, the truth that earth has revolution with sun maybe proved later. 【首先例子本身就不一定成立，而且，不是非常符合你的论点】 Even a college student, now in study period, I also need to observe things in my opinion. It trains my own personality and views. 【不是说科学领域吗，怎么跑到自身的例子上面去了，而且，还是含糊的，如果想用这个例子就应该说清楚啊，记得你要证明的是expectations or desires】

At the same time, we should own ability to observe fact in a right and scientific way. 【这不是自相矛盾吗，这句里面你明显承认expectations or desires 是不科学的，那么你上一段的论点就不成立了啊。如果你想让步的话，这里应该说objective啊，时刻记住题目在说什么啊】To modern society, people should respect science but not believe anything as they expected. Or the result is a nightmare. Last year in China, SARS was coming unfortunately. At first, Beijing government didn’t reveal the truth to citizens because some leaders believed it would go later in error. Then, the influence is so bad that citizens did not know to protect themselves, because they did know the circumstance is so bad. The infection went on expanding without any prohibition. After that, according to medicinal professional person's idea: The infection information should be showed openly. Everyone should know the information like which bus or train had ever take infectors. In this way, we beat the SARS at last. 【感觉跟observation没有什么联系】

In sum, object observation is always expressed differently by our emotion, background, mood and desire. Since we can stop our brain express in this way, we should use scientific and technological tool to equip our mind. Try to observe every fact objectively, truly, and accurately.


【问题很多，觉得语言还不是很流畅，某些程度上面限制你的思想的表达。而论述上面的问题就是，含糊，没有说到点子上。整篇文章也没有见到你认真论述expectations or desires的问题，而且没有对准了objective开火。还有就是写的时候明显感觉没有扣住题目。继续努力啊！】