issue157 里面不但有G文，还有心得，大家来看啊，看完再拍，不拍没关系，看看也欢

fengboallanUID: 157405

我真的弄错了，我昨天晚上还真的试验过一次，不好意思，大意了！如果有说错的地方多多包涵。我要是康夫，就像机器猫借个时间静止机器，咋的GRE也4．5了。呵呵，对于自己的大意，实在不好意思。

冥界星灿UID: 184746

157."There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires."
没有哪件事情是客观观察的结果。所有的观察都是主观的；它们在很大程度上决定于观察者的期望和偏好。


In this world, every view growsderive from human brain. To one truth这个说法？, there are many kinds of observation. Of course, all需要名词做主语 came from various kinds of person's expectations and desires. Indeed, I agree with the statement above. In this issue, I would like to show more evidences to prove my view.开头乱。一大堆简单句落在一起，你要考场上这么写你第一个对不起我

Experience tells us variousdifferent 是土了一点，但是various 不该用来形容人的，实在想用就various kinds of people people distinguishdistinguish sth. from sth. one fact byaccording to different themselves’ viewstheir various views. As we know, some thingthings happens, the reason was confirmedthe reasons are likely to exist before?, and the result had been showed. But the influence and review? are observed in different way.看到这里，再强调一下，不要老写简单句^_^ As a point of my viewas my point of view, there are possibly no mistake with different views and observationAlthough people's view various from one another, it is hard to say one is correct whereas the other is not.. People come from different backgrounds and education实在想写简单句，就写：people with different education experiences usually have different ideology, 这样把修饰成分加长一点. How can they face to one thing with one soundhow can they respond to one object with the same reaction?? For example, the end of Soviet Union is a distinct instance. Even all over the world believe it was a progress to world peace because it ended the Cold War你这句话是一个even引领的从句，主句呢？. From then on, Russia went alsoalso从何而来？ from autarchy to democracy. However in North Korea, an arbitrary government, they don'tdo not是书面写法 think it is a good news to them because they lose a 'friend' in some circumstance老外280有写to the extent, 建议你换这个. Of course, it iseasy to answer this question, because North Korea has already been isolated from the world, itit=>and only has connection with someseveral countries. For their benefitbenefits, they of course do not like to lose a ‘friend’ which can help them. As I have said everything is objectobjective. The Soviet Union endedthe end of the Soviet Union is a truth, but the sounds from all over the world are different, even opposite.

Although,although 去掉 sounds isare different even opposite, world needs itthem. In the realm of science like many other realm这句话不对劲, observation which had guided by the observer's expectations or desires help the world todevelop. As an educator’ wordsas an educator recomments 要不这句话没谓语: professor’s view is not always right! For example, if Copernicus was a churchman, possibly, the truth that earth has revolution with sun maybe proved later Not possibly. Charles Darwin who is a priest also develop the theory of evolution. An individual's view may be contrast to his/her job. . EvenAs a college student, now in study period, I also need to observe things in my opinion. It trains my own personality and views.

At the same time, we should own ability to observe fact in a right and scientificrational way. ToIn modern society, people should respect science在中文，我们尊重科学。In English, it is hard to say "respect science". but not believe anything as they指带不明 expected. Or the result is a nightmare. Last year in China是03年, SARS was comingprevailing unfortunately. At first, Beijing government didn’t reveal the truth to citizens because some leaders believed it would goextinct later in errorin error放这不好，和believe差太远. Then, the influence is so bad that citizens did not knowrecognize the possibility to protect themselves, because they did know the circumstance is so bad. The infection went on expanding without any prohibition.这个例子讲的和每个人看问题的角度没什么关系 After that, according to medicinal professional person's idea: The infection information should be showed openlyto the public. Everyone should know the information like which bus or train had ever take infectors. In this way, we beatconquered thethe 去掉 SARS at last.

In sum, object observation is always expressed differently by our emotion, background, mood and desire这句问题大了，用词不准确. Since we can stop our brain express in this way, we should use scientific and technological tool to equip our mind说法怪异. Try to observe every fact objectively, truly, and accurately主语呢？.

改完了。

这是迄今为止我在寄托天下改得最细最认真的一片文章，改出一身冷汗。我平时写作文从来不限时，也没法限。issue一个半小时，argu一个小时算快的了。没想到平时写文章好如你一限时都会这样，我28号考——

还有时间，鉴于你平时文章不错，应该上升空间不小。加油！！！

还有，因为改得过细，很可能有改错的地方，你认为不对的就不要管了。你的很多表达不是错了，但我认为有更好的我也写在旁边供君参考。冥界的时间也一天紧似一天，不知以后还有没有机会帮你改的说^_^

你的简单句成问题！！

加油吧，艾伦同学一路走好^_^

poohUID: 146994

总结的好！ 看出你认真思考了，其实在吸收别人精华的同时，我们应该静下心来思考总结，这就是所谓的self-knowledge吧，我前一段时间看了James Allen的书，有些感触


Man’s essential being is inward, invisible, spiritual, and as such it derives its life, strength, from within, not from without. Outward things are channels through which its energies are expended, but for renewal it must fall back on the inward silence.

fengboallanUID: 157405

to haiya谢谢你的指正，说实话，到GTER第一个看的作文就是你的，给我羡慕坏了，就连限时还那么棒，相信你啊，一定没问题的。

to ivyshoul 呵呵，ivy这名字和我以前女朋友的名字一样，见到就亲切，谢谢您的纠正

to chrisssssss好多s，chris是你的名字，后面有六个s，呵呵，你一定能拿6分了！good luck！

to eberlin  同样谢谢你的纠正阿。呵呵

to hjhjhj1984 你也马上要考了，好运阿！

to staralways谢谢你的夸奖，考完了，我一定认真写一篇心得

to 龙非  说实话，你砸的越狠，我越高兴！真的，你文章我会马上就帮你看，谢谢你第一个拍我！

  to  冥界星灿真的好感谢你的批改，超级认真。你28号考，咱俩差一天。说实话，今天我还真有点受打击了。哥们，送给你一句话，如果你有模版，一定背熟了。倒着背能背下来才行，要不，一上去就啥都忘了。我今天模拟了，超级受打击！

to   kkyt 呵呵，有同感就一起努力啦

  to totti 非常感谢你的提醒

  to nickaaronlee 又是一个即将上战场的哥们，别的不多说了。祝你好运吧！也同样祝福我自己

to 鬼大哥 拨着小猫，架着电话线为大家改作文，辛苦你了。呵呵，你对我的帮助很大，言语难以酬谢，希望有机会坐在一起喝一杯！

  to poof JJ虽然跟我一样大，为啥总叫自己姐姐呢。呵呵，欠我的形象债还没给我还呢啊。谢谢你的鼓励，说真的，这段日子你给我的帮助真的很大。最近一定又上层次了呵呵，开始捉摸老外的书了阿。不过阿，我只是说了一些自己的想法，很简单，很本能的话。没有什么真知灼见。哦，我要是考砸了，要不咱跟你F2吧？哈哈哈开个玩笑，poof是我的偶像！

to  后来看到这个帖子回这个帖子的人
不知道为什么，不接不到回帖的email通知，也许不能一一回复了。谢谢你们看到我的帖子，希望对大家有点帮助吧。
今天又模拟了一次
最终总结出一句话：GRE作文并不可怕，一限时就怕的麻抓了！

我今天写A麻抓了！

考试以前推荐大家吃顿凤爪！吃啥补啥

今天真的麻爪。紧张，手就不会动了！

祝所有的G同人：考试Good Luck！
早日成凤爪！

龙非UID: 193190

to 龙非 说实话，你砸的越狠，我越高兴！真的，你文章我会马上就帮你看，谢谢你第一个拍我！

呵呵，态度端正，好样的！预祝你成功先