issue208 贴晚了：）

haiyaUID: 187989

208."The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."


Do the appearance and behavior of the people reveal a society's ideas and values? The arguer claims so. However, for my part, although some people's look, dress and act are radical and obvious enough to connote their ideas and values sometimes, to have a thorough and true view demands us to research further on the social culture.

Admittedly, the appearance and behavior reveal the value and idea of people to some extent. With the respect of the individuals' personality, many persons are willing to express their value and idea to the public. Consider the environmentalists. These people usually wear T-shirts with a motto like "the earth is our lovely home" and refuse using the plastic bag when they buy things in supermarket. Due to their firm value and idea, they take measure to protect the earth as much as possible so that we are able to judge them through their appearance and behavior. With the respect of the certain period, people will choose the radical style, such as parade and revolution, to show their strong demand or protest. A case in point is the Civil Right Movement. Any person who took part in the movement by nonviolence was regarded as a soldier for the justice.

Nevertheless, to judge a society’s value and idea by individual’s appearance is not always practical and true. Firstly, attempting to gain the useful information from a conservative and shy person’s behavior and appearance is in vain because they don’t express their value and idea obviously and may don’t like the topic. Secondly, some persons's behavior and appearance, such as smile, accent, skin color, are modified and rectified by trainings and operations after they are born. Their behavior and appearance which conform to the status standard but disguise their inner world mislead us a lot. Thirdly, when it comes to some nations, the distinctive appearance and behavior even disappear. Take an example of Arabic nations. As is known to all, the people in these nations wear the same dress and speak the same Arabic. Despite the fact that their forms of regime and ideal are various, scrutiny of these similar superficial details lead to a false answer that their value and idea are same.

Moreover, lacking the research on the culture further, it is impossible for us to acquire the true a thorough idea and value of a society. Compare the observation of social value and idea to the appreciation of skyscraper. If we prefer to know what the staff is doing in the skyscraper, we may conclude the type of the company from the architectural style of the skyscraper. Yet, to some similar style architectures, only if we enter and visit around them, we will have a clear idea about the function of these companies in the skyscrapers. In other word, the appearance and behavior are limited when they are taken advantage of to reveal the value and idea of a society. If we are willing to know them, it is essential to get rid of the ostensible phenomenon and explore the inner culture because the culture and value and idea in a society own the same quality of inherence.

Especially, when we research on a society that is extinct in the world, to understand the value and idea through people’s appearance and behavior seems impossible and difficult. But if we resort to the culture, such like knowledge, custom and art, there is concrete information to reveal the value and idea. For instance, the ancient Greece left apart from us thousands years ago. The records to which we are available to refer are concerning little about the appearance and behavior. However, the abundant heritage of culture plays the role to interpret the cotemporary value and idea. The most familiar literature “Odyssey” and “Iliad” display a vivid painting of a refulgent society and its value and idea.

As an adage goes, "Never judge a book by its covers." Without the appearance and behavior, we still are capable of understanding a society’s value and idea through its culture. Nonetheless, without the culture, we have little information, which perhaps even puzzles us.

foreverlovesUID: 166930

Do the appearance and behavior of the people不用the吧 reveal a society's ideas and values?这样是不是把attitudes and interests 给丢了 The arguer claims so. However, for my part, although some people's look, dress and act are radical and obvious enough to connote their ideas and values sometimes, to have a thorough and true view demands us to research further on the social culture.

Admittedly, the appearance and behavior reveal the value and idea of people to some extent. With the respect of不明白With the respect of什么意思,偷偷告诉我一下 the individuals' personality, many persons are willing to express their value and idea to the public. Consider the environmentalists. These people usually wear T-shirts with a motto这个词太神圣了,呵呵不知道用slogan合适否like "the earth is our lovely home" and refuse using the plastic bag when they buy things in supermarket. Due to their firm value and idea, they take measure to protect the earth as much as possible so that we are able to judge them through their appearance and behavior. With the respect of the certain period, people will choose the radical style, such as parade and revolution, to show their strong demand or protest. A case in point is the Civil Right Movement. Any person who took part in the movement by nonviolencenonviolence movement就可以了 was regarded as a soldier for the justice.

Nevertheless, to judge a society’s value and idea by individual’s appearance is not always practical and true. Firstly, attempting to gain the useful information from a conservative and shy person’s behavior and appearance is in vain because they don’t express their value and idea obviously and may don’tnot like the topic. Secondly, some persons's behavior and appearance, such as smile, accent, skin color, are modified and rectified by trainings and operations after they arewere born. Their behavior and appearance which conform to the status standard but disguise their inner world mislead us a lot. Thirdly, when it comes to some nations, the distinctive appearance and behavior even disappear. Take an example of Arabic nations. As is known to all, the people in these nations wear the same dress and speak the same Arabic. Despite the fact that their forms of regime and ideal are various, scrutiny of these similar superficial details lead to a false answer that their value and idea are samethe same.

Moreover, lacking the research on the culture further, it is impossible for us to acquire the true a thorough idea and value of a society. Compare the observation of social value and idea to the appreciation of skyscraper无主句. If we prefer to know what the staff is doing in the skyscraper, we may conclude the type of the company from the architectural style of the skyscraper. Yet, to some similar style architectures, only if we enter and visit around them, we will have a clear idea about the function of these companies in the skyscrapers. In other word, the appearance and behavior are limited when they are taken advantage of to reveal the value and idea of a society. If we are willing to know them, it is essential to get rid of the ostensible phenomenon and explore the inner culture because the culture and value and idea in a society own the same quality of inherence.

Especially, when we research on a society that is extinct in the world, to understand the value and idea through people’s appearance and behavior seems impossible and difficult. But if we resort to the culture, such like knowledge, custom and art, there is concrete information to reveal the value and idea. For instance, the ancient Greece left apart fromleft apart from什么意思,有点怪,解释一下 us thousands years ago. The records to which we are available to refer are concerning little about the appearance and behavior. However, the abundant heritage of culture plays the role to interpret the cotemporary value and idea. The most familiar literature “Odyssey” and “Iliad” display a vivid painting of a refulgent society and its value and idea.

As an adage goes, "Never judge a book by its covers." Without the appearance and behavior, we still are capable of understanding a society’s value and idea through its culture. Nonetheless, without the culture, we have little information, which perhaps even puzzles us.

觉得你的整体的逻辑和立意还是不错的,所以只找了些语法的错,是限时的吗,能写这么多,不错了,要向你学习啦, 有时间帮我看看好吗

龙非UID: 193190

Do the appearance and behavior of the people reveal a society's ideas and values? The arguer claims so. However, for my part, although some people's look, dress and act are radical and obvious enough to connote their ideas and values sometimes, to have a thorough and true view . 缺少定语，对谁的view？
demands us to research further on the social culture.

Admittedly, the appearance and behavior reveal the value and idea of people to some extent. With the respect of the individuals' personality, many persons are willing to express their value and idea to the public.. 这里加上是通过穿着举止去表达会更有说服力
Consider the environmentalists. These people usually wear T-shirts with a motto like "the earth is our lovely home" and refuse using the plastic bag when they buy things in supermarket. Due to their firm value and idea, they take measure to protect the earth as much as possible so that we are able to judge them through their appearance and behavior. With the respect of the certain period, people will choose the radical style, such as parade and revolution, to show their strong demand or protest. A case in point is the Civil Right Movement. Any person who took part in the movement by nonviolence was regarded as a soldier for the justice. 两个例子都挺好

Nevertheless, to judge a society’s value and idea by individual’s appearance is not always practical and true. Firstly, attempting to gain the useful information from a conservative and shy person’s behavior and appearance is in vain because they don’t express their value and idea obviously and may don’t like the topic. 这个说理不好，有点绝对，谁说保守的人就一定不会明确地表达他们的意见和价值观？起码加个“通常”吧。此外，也不是很有说服力，从他们通常不愿明确地表达自己的意见这个行为不就可以reveals出他们保守的attribute吗
Secondly, some persons's behavior and appearance, such as smile, accent, skin color, are modified and rectified by trainings and operations after they are born. Their behavior and appearance which conform to the status standard but disguise their inner world mislead us a lot. . 这一点比较好，表现出来了不一定是真的
Thirdly, when it comes to some nations, the distinctive appearance and behavior even disappear. Take an example of Arabic nations. As is known to all, the people in these nations wear the same dress and speak the same Arabic. Despite the fact that their forms of regime and ideal are various, scrutiny of these similar superficial details lead to a false answer that their value and idea are same. 这一点也不妥，没有一个人的behavior是相同的，穿同样的衣服，讲同样的话就可以说the way they look,  dress, and act is the same吗？穿同个样式的衣服也不是同样的衣服，可能有的人衣服总是很干净，有的人衣服总是很脏，那不是可以说明有的人爱干净，有的人拉遢吗？说同样的话，语速不一样，音量不一样不也可以反映出一个人的某些attributes吗？


Moreover, lacking the research on the culture further, it is impossible for us to acquire the true a thorough idea and value of a society. Compare the observation of social value and idea to the appreciation of skyscraper. If we prefer to know what the staff is doing in the skyscraper, we may conclude the type of the company from the architectural style of the skyscraper. Yet, to some similar style architectures, only if we enter and visit around them, we will have a clear idea about the function of these companies in the skyscrapers. In other word, the appearance and behavior are limited when they are taken advantage of to reveal the value and idea of a society. If we are willing to know them, it is essential to get rid of the ostensible phenomenon and explore the inner culture because the culture and value and idea in a society own the same quality of inherence.

Especially, when we research on a society that is extinct in the world, to understand the value and idea through people’s appearance and behavior seems impossible and difficult. But if we resort to the culture, such like knowledge, custom and art, there is concrete information to reveal the value and idea. For instance, the ancient Greece left apart from us thousands years ago. The records to which we are available to refer are concerning little about the appearance and behavior. However, the abundant heritage of culture plays the role to interpret the cotemporary value and idea. The most familiar literature “Odyssey” and “Iliad” display a vivid painting of a refulgent society and its value and idea.

As an adage goes, "Never judge a book by its covers." Without the appearance and behavior, we still are capable of understanding a society’s value and idea through its culture. Nonetheless, without the culture, we have little information, which perhaps even puzzles us.


抛开208这个题目来讲，这篇文章的整体结构是比较好，论据比较有力地支持了论点，呼应也作得不错。但是结合题目来看，个人觉得跟题目靠得不是很紧。题目并没有说可以通过观察人的外观举止就可以得到关于社会一些理念、价值观的完全信息，而只是说tell much。
当然，有一种观点是说：只要跟题目靠得上边就可以了，关键是自圆其说。但是也有一种观点是要找出the complexities of the issue。这个问题我也没有明确的答案，希望有大牛出来指导一下。

haiyaUID: 187989

谢谢龙非。
Arab的例子其实我也不是特别的清楚，因为是gg帮我想的。我再问问他。我当时觉得不错，也挺有道理，因为看表面化的东西其实并不能判断一些内在的attitudes和ideas。

关于题目的论证方法。我觉得这道题的much本身就是多少就很难恒定。但我认为much还是太多了，能得到little 。
对于反驳类型的题目，我习惯于反驳后再找到另一个合适的途径论证一下。因为我觉得光是反对对解决这个issue本身的意义没有再提出一个相关idea来代替要深。单单是反对太单薄了。
所以造成了这么长一篇。。。

to foreverloves,
with the respect of = when it comes to
left apart from 是自己写的chinglish了

还有申明一下，是模考限时失败，我45分钟要完成肯定不行。所以我自己还要在把它瘦身。