Issue17 第2篇 为什么我拍了别人仍然没有人用砖头拍我？？

mada7982UID: 196720

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作者：mada7982     共用时间：47分42秒     475 words
从2005年1月23日18时55分到2005年1月23日19时47分
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There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws.
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I completely agree with the statement. as one member of society, no one can avoid the influence of the law, if the law is just and serves the benefit of society as a whole, it should be respected, while every righteous individual should have the courage to disobey and resist the unfair ones.

The initial goal of the law is to encourage the good deed and punish the evil. But the fairness is the base and fundamental principle to all of laws in the world. If the law is derived concerning the benefit of society, it is the obligation for every citizen to respect it and grant it as the action guidance. If doing so, society has the possibility to progress steadily and healthy. There is never any prosperous and strong country without the protection of the laws established on the basis of fairness. It's without saying that the just and reasonable laws are the guard of healthy society and that it's nothing but useless files if citizen don't take it seriously. How can we imagine such society where murderer has the equal right with the usual person, thief escapes the punishment of the corresponding law easily, robber enjoys more colorful life using the wealth robbed and so on? If the merit could not be advocated while the evil could not be punished, people living such society will lose the ability of telling the black from the white, so society will be filled with violence and chaos. For the sake of himself and the whole society, every individual in a society must respect the just laws and plan his activity according with them.

The initial purpose that encourage the good and punish the evil is distorted, then can not be achieved if the law is unjust. if take law as medicine while take society as patient, the unjust law is exactly the medicine prescribed  by mistake occasionally or deliberately. It will deteriorate the condition of patient rather than ameliorate patient's pain. of course,The most beneficial attitude for patient is not to take it and destroy it. As refered to the unjust law, The most appropriate way for individual is to disobey and risist it, which also is the responsibility just as to obey the just law. If the unjust law is equally treated as the just law, unpleasant outcome will be resulted in.Even more importantly, people in such society can not tell what is right and what is wrong. Consequently, sometimes the innocent will encounter unexpected and unreasonable punishment. Person who has done a good thing may be punished by law. The value system is replaced adversely. How ridiculous it is! Obviously it is aberrant from the initial purpose of law.

In one word, respecting and obeying the just law needs courage and it's every individual's responsibility, while resisting and disobeying the unjust one needs more courage and it's every individual's greater responsibility.

MichaelOwenUID: 126513

首先指出一个和我一样的问题，就是名词前随便加THE，注意啦
对ISSUE把握不太好，不敢随便评

mada7982UID: 196720

谢谢MichaelOwen!你是第一个朝我拍砖的人！
我写完后看了范文，才发现绝大多数提纲所持的观点与我的不一样。

乒乓球爱上九月UID: 162925

第一,你的格式不对.
第二,改完别人的以后,留下你的连接是最直接的方式.

mada7982UID: 196720

你是指发贴格式吗？下次一定改正！
另外，谢谢你的提醒！！！

will_foreverUID: 193568

单单从逻辑方面来看，你的观点是agree。第一段TS是just law的作用，第二段是法律unjust就不能达到just law的作用。
可是issue的题目是遵守just law和反对unjus tlaw的重要性，觉得你的写法有beg the question
另外你的例子将law比作医生，society比作病人，我觉得也不是很好，看看是不是将criminal比作病人更好一些，根据犯罪轻重来“开药”！
还有许多用词感觉不大规范！
issue17是不好写，我自个也写了好久，改了许久，还是不能完全掌握！
加油！

MichaelOwenUID: 126513

观点和其他人不一样没什么，别跑题就行