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People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
同意这个观点
（1）我们可能认为现在遇到的问题比过去更复杂，这是有相对性的。我们能够解决过去所解决不了的问题，
是因为我们有了过去无数年知识的积累作为基础，才有了解决今天问题的能。
（2）而过去的解决的问题今天我们都不知道解决的方法。例如古代有好多建在岩壁上的tomb，就是利用今
天的技术也难以完成，这是一个谜secret。
（3）Admittedly，现在确实有很多复杂的问题。


With development of society leading our life more complicated than before, the problems confronted by people seem more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. However, the author asserts it is an illusion, and the illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience. I agree with the author's opinion as follows.

It is relative to consider the problems they confront are complex than before.  Technology of transportation is so advanced that we can reach another country within one day, and technology of communication is so developed that we can communicate with our friends and family in several seconds. All of technology development make people think they have contributed to the society and these problems are difficult to realize for their predecessors. As first glance, it seems reasonable to think so, however the reason that generate so huge difference between now and before is not the problems people confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors, however through thousand of knowledge deposited, people have grasped enough knowledge and experience to find the relationships among hidden something. Consequently, people have abound resource and ability to finish these development of technology. Without these knowledge and experience deposited, it is impossible to realize these objects.

These are many problems that were finished by people's predecessors cannot be understood. In past century, some tombs, which were hung in very sharp mountains, were found. Up to now, people cannot know how to finish the amazing works of their predecessors. It is a big problem even for today society. Another finding is pyramids in Egypt. These examples explain that the problems faced by people's predecessors are not easier than the problems they confront. In different periods, there are always some difficulties for other periods, however these difficulties are easy for the period. The changes of difficulty level are mostly because the development of technology.  And these difficulties will be conquered through knowledge and experience deposited.

Admittedly, there exist some new controversial problems with development of society, however these problems cannot be solved with advance of technology. For example the Clone tests on human being, which are violated from the moral standard of human. The similar problems are complicated and challenging not only for the people, but also for their predecessor.

In sum, in past century, there are some difficult problems for people in now society. On the other hand, the problems people confront cannot be deal with for people's predecessors. Therefore the illusion that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.

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People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
同意这个观点
（1）我们可能认为现在遇到的问题比过去更复杂，这是有相对性的。我们能够解决过去所解决不了的问题，
是因为我们有了过去无数年知识的积累作为基础，才有了解决今天问题的能。
（2）而过去的解决的问题今天我们都不知道解决的方法。例如古代有好多建在岩壁上的tomb，就是利用今
天的技术也难以完成，这是一个谜secret。
（3）Admittedly，现在确实有很多复杂的问题。


With development of society leading our life more complicated than before, the problems confronted by people seem more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. However, the author asserts it is an illusion, and the illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience. I agree with the author's opinion as follows.开头很好

It is relative to consider the problems they confront are complex than before. Technology of transportation is so advanced that we can reach another country within one day, and technology of communication is so developed that we can communicate with our friends and family in several seconds. All of technology (technological )development make people think they have contributed to the society and these problems （没有提到problems ）are difficult to realize for their predecessors. As first glance, it seems reasonable to think so, however the reason that generate so huge difference between now and before is not the problems people confront (confroting) are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors, however (rather than) through thousand of knowledge deposited, people have grasped enough knowledge and experience to find the relationships among hidden something. Consequently, people have abound resource and ability to finish these development of technology. Without these knowledge and experience deposited, it is impossible to realize these objects.我觉得并没有很明确的说出现代的人是因为有了更高的能力才能够解决更难得问题，比如可以说正因为我们有了关于基因的知识我们才能够解决癌症这类严重病情

These are many problems that were finished by people's predecessors cannot be understood. In past century, some tombs, which were hung in very sharp mountains, were found. Up to now, people cannot know how to finish the amazing works of their predecessors. It is a big problem even for today society. Another finding is pyramids in Egypt. These examples explain that the problems faced by people's predecessors are not easier than the problems they confront. In different periods, there are always some difficulties for other periods, however these difficulties are easy for the period. The changes of difficulty level are mostly because the development of technology. And these difficulties will be conquered through knowledge and experience deposited. 这段很清楚

Admittedly, there exist some new controversial problems with development of society, however these problems cannot be solved with advance of technology. For example the Clone tests on human being, which are violated from the moral standard of human. The similar problems are complicated and challenging not only for the people, but also for their predecessor.可以说关于moral and ethics 的问题是很难被解决的by technology and  knowledge.

In sum, in past century, there are some difficult problems for people in now society. On the other hand, the problems people confront cannot be deal with for people's predecessors. Therefore the illusion that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
除了第二段写的不是很清楚以外，我觉得写得还很流畅，不过我觉得应该在深入讨论一下这个题目，比如说关于一些moral问题的解决和看法，可以引申一下，这样让文章更有灵气。

chenxgUID: 183868

People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
同意这个观点
（1）我们可能认为现在遇到的问题比过去更复杂，这是有相对性的。我们能够解决过去所解决不了的问题，
是因为我们有了过去无数年知识的积累作为基础，才有了解决今天问题的能。
（2）而过去的解决的问题今天我们都不知道解决的方法。例如古代有好多建在岩壁上的tomb，就是利用今
天的技术也难以完成，这是一个谜secret。
（3）Admittedly，现在确实有很多复杂的问题。


With development of society leading our life more complicated than before, the problems confronted by people seem more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. However, the author asserts it is an illusion, and the illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience. I agree with the author's opinion as follows.

It is relative to consider the problems they confront are complex than before. Technology of transportation is so advanced that we can reach another country within one day, however it may cost several months to finish such a travel; and technology of communication is so developed that we can communicate with our friends and family in several seconds, however in the past it spent several days to post a letter. All development of technology make people think they have contributed to the society and these developments are difficult to realize for their predecessors. As first glance, it seems reasonable to think so, however the reason that generate so huge difference between now and before is not the problems people confronted are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors, but through thousand of knowledge deposited people have grasped enough knowledge and experience to find the relationships among hidden something. Consequently, people have abounded resource and ability to finish these development of technology. Without these knowledge and experience deposited, it is impossible to realize these objects. Without the knowledge of gene, we cannot learn about the secret of organism; without the knowledge of universe, we cannot know the center of universe is sun. If people’s predecessors have mastered these knowledge, they would do well as now.

These are many problems that were finished by people's predecessors cannot be understood by people. In past century some tombs, which were hung in very sharp mountains, were found. Up to now, people cannot know how to finish the amazing works by their predecessors. It is a big problem even for today society. Another finding is pyramids in Egypt. These examples explain that the problems faced by people's predecessors are not simpler than the problems they confront. In different periods, there are always some difficulties for other periods, however these difficulties are easy for the period. The changes of difficulty level are mostly because the development of technology. And these difficulties will be conquered through knowledge and experience deposited.

Admittedly, there exist some new controversial problems with development of society, however these problems cannot be solved by increased knowledge and experience. For example the Clone tests on human being, which are violated from the moral standard of human. Another supporting example is about war, such Iraq war. The similar problems are complicated and challenging not only for the people, but also for their predecessor. The ability of controlling these problems is beyond what most people can handle whatever for before and for now. Because moral  problems are not controlled by knowledge and experience.

In sum, in past century, there are some difficult problems for people in now society. On the other hand, the problems people confront cannot be deal with for people's predecessors. Therefore the illusion that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.

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With development of society leading our life more complicated than before 这个分句语法似乎有问题, the problems confronted by people seem more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. However, the author asserts it is an illusion, and the illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience. I agree with the author's opinion as follows 可以这样说么, 感觉这样的意思好像是说我同意作者下面的看法, I agree with the author’s opinion for the following reasons 这样比较好吧.

It is relative to consider the problems they confront are complex than before 相对性可以这么说么.. Technology of transportation is so advanced that we can reach another country within one day, and technology of communication is so developed that we can communicate with our friends and family in several seconds communicate 和in several seconds搭配不太好, 可以说the message reaches…in several seconds 或者communicate conveniently 之类的. All of technology development makes people think they have contributed to the society and these problems are difficult to realize for their predecessors 这个跟你的观点矛盾, 这些问题已经解决了, 按照你的观点, 此时illusion 已经dispel了,怎么还会认为比前人的困难呢, 根据你后面的内容, 前面的例证不应该突出技术的贡献, 应该相比前人的问题, 突出我们的困难为什么complex, 我觉得应该拿前人的例子作一下比较, 比如远古人只要有个洞避避风雨, 而我们的高楼大厦不管美观还要有功能之类的. As at first glance, it seems reasonable to think so, however the reason that generate so huge difference between now and before is not the problems people confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors 这句好长, 看的我晕呀, 最好不要用这种长度的句子, 太容易出错了, however through thousand of knowledge deposited, people have grasped enough knowledge and experience to find the relationships among hidden something 这两句没咋看懂. Consequently, people have abound abundant resource s and ability s to finishachieve these developments of technology 换成technological advancements吧, 似乎显得简洁一点. Without these knowledge and experience deposited 要确定deposit可以这样用哦, 不能确定话尽量用简单的词吧, it is impossible to realize these objects.

These are many problems that were finished by people's predecessors cannot be understood 这个似乎跟你要证明的观点似乎没有太大关系, 我们不明白先人是怎么做的能说明什么问题呢. 不明白他们怎么做的只是不知道他们在当时的情况下如何实现, 并不代表这种问题对于我们来说是complex, 用现代的工具,这种问题不是easy?. In past century past century? 感觉意思好像说last century一样, some tombs, which were hung in very sharp mountains scarps, were found. Up to now, people cannot know how to finish the amazing works of their predecessors. It is a big problem even for today’s society. Another finding finding? is pyramids in Egypt. These examples explain showthat the problems faced by people's predecessors are not easier than the problems they 指代容易让别人搞混 confront. In different periods, there are always some difficulties for other periods, however these difficulties are easy for the period这些period用的跟人似的, 还是说清楚吧, people in that period, 还有这种assumption有点ungrounded. The changes of difficulty level 应该不能这样表达are mostly because the development of technology这句属于凭空冒出来的, 跟上下都没有逻辑上的联系. And these difficulties will be conquered through knowledge and experience deposited 这句向往主题上靠, 可是你觉得你上面的内容有跟knowledge和experience增长有关的内容吗.

Admittedly, there exist some new controversial problems with development of society development是个动态的过程, 最好不要和exist这种静态的词搭配, new problems emerge with …., however these problems cannot be solved with advance of technology 出现新的问题技术解决不了,这个跟主题也没什么关系. For example the Clone tests on human being human cloning就ok了, which are violated from 为什么被动?the moral standard of human. The similar problems are complicated and challenging not only for the people, but also for their predecessor 这种问题predecessor遇不到吧.

In sum, in past century, there are some difficult problems for people in now society 这个句子问题也很大, the problems faced by our ancestors are even difficult for people today, issue里面尽量少用there be句型. On the other hand, the problems people confront cannot be deal with for people's predecessors. Therefore the illusion that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.

简单的语法错误太多, 建议以后贴上来之前至少把语法错误改一下吧
这篇文章的问题很多, 没有围绕central issue来写, 我觉得b2和b3都跑题了.
既然你赞同statement的观点, 就要证明两个问题, 1, 的确有那种情况存在. 2, 随着知识和经验的增长, illusion dispel了. 你的b1改一下就是针对1的; 接下来可以说为什么是illusion, 其实你的文章中有可利用的观点的闪现, 比如people have abound resource  and ability to finish these development of technology, 但是这个都没有作为论点来展开. 你的b2可以考虑针对这个来证, 其实也就是你所说的相对性. 资源,能力什么的,比较着具体来说可以写好多吧; b3就写随着经验什么的增长, illusion dispel吧. 当然,这些都是建议, 你可以有自己的思路.
还有就是段落内部的逻辑性也比较欠缺.
加油吧, 这些短期都可以搞定的.
不过语法要注意, 我觉得你经常会写出一些很奇怪的句子