issue 197 (国家之间联系)机经题，大家看看吧，必回拍！

chenxgUID: 183868

Issue197: 472 words 45 minutes
The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries.

With development of society, relationships among countries are becoming close. Therefore it it undoubted that the material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries. I agree with the author's opinion for the following reasons.

In economical field, international trades play a vital role to improve the welfare of all countries. As well known, great changes has taken place in China since 1978. Why has China developed in such amazing speed? Almost people contribute to the open ideas to other countries. And international trades is important to push economy of China develop further. Before opening policy, China want to develop depend on itself, however practice have proved it impossible. And situation changed after reform about opening policy, we accept advanced technology from other countries through international trade. Therefore we can get profits from the material progress and well-being of all other countries. We can learn the knowledge and experience that make other countries rich. And it is undoubted that the great progress that we have made is the contribution of international communicating.

In environmental field, all countries benefit from the improvement of environmental problems of all of world. All kinds of environmental pollutions have become important issues for all of world. And because the pollution can diffuse in different countries, then how to strength the cooperation in countries is an important issue. According to the record, sandstorm from west China can reach Korea, even Japan. The example tells us the countries are connected between neighbor countries. Another supporting example is about emission of polluted gas. Because gas can easily flow in biosphere, it is necessary to attract the attention of all other countries. If a countries generate a lots waste gas, these gas can do harm to other countries. Consequently, the material progress and well-being of all countries are connected each other in environmental field. If a country has nice environment, there are little air pollution, water pollution and sandstorm, the neighbor even all the world will benefit.  

Furthermore, in political field all countries are connected each other. Take Iraq war as an example, Iraq war has made many people lose life and a lots people homeless. And its neighbor countries, Asia countries, have suffered from the war. Many people homeless escape from Iraq, then it is obvious that neighbor countries have more burdens in security and finance than before. Moreover, the production of oil has generated huge influence. In addition, the share of Iraq is big in the world, and price and production of oil affect live of people of all countries. From the above, in political field all the world are connected.

In sum, whatever in economical field, environmental field and political field, the material progress and well-being of all countries are necessarily connected.

xianglinglingUID: 197422

一点小建议: 结构清晰,也有例子,但有少许语法错误(可放在WORD)里改改. 但是句式相对单调,结尾举的伊拉克的例子不知适当否.

MONEY IS NOT FOR MAKING A LIVING ,BUT FOR MAKING A LIFE.

chenxgUID: 183868

谢谢评价，还有10天就考了。