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Issue185 Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

In the contemporary society, the multitude of scandals about various aspects strongly affects people. Some people insist on that scandals in politics, academia, or other areas are useful, because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. In my opinion, I think that people should separate to see this issue according to the different functions of scandals. If scandals can bring positive effects on the public and society, they are useful. However, the left holding the opposite effects is not useful and even deleterious.

First of all, the clear definition of the scandal is necessary for us to start our full discussion. The first definition from dictionary is the loss of or damage to the reputation caused by actual or apparent violation of morality and propriety. The second definition is the malicious or defamatory gossip. According to two definitions, people can see that the first one is useful since like issue said, it reveals some hidden immoral behaviors unknown by the public, and the latter one is poison for people and the society. Next, I will interpret both respectively.

The beneficial scandals can induce people to put their emphasis on seldom understood social and political problems. The famous example is the Watergate scandal. In fact, no public speaker or reformer could have called the nation's attention to the problem of presidential misconduct unless the scandal had surfaced. Meanwhile, scandals about the corruption and bribery in politics, academia, business and other areas are more crucial. For example, in China, there are many scandals on the regional leaders' corruption. Originally, no one can openly complain such immoral behaviors because of these leaders' firm power in the areas. At this time, the scandal plays a vital role to attract the public and the central government attentions, and induce the blazing discussion on this scandal from the public. And then the government will be forced to investigate the events what the scandal said, finally, the immoral behaviors will be punished, meanwhile, affected and damaged persons by those violations can gain the fair, safe and just circumstance. Therefore, publicizing such scandal is useful for the stability of society and people’s happiness.

On the contrary, the scandals which just are the malicious and defamatory gossip can damage the stable society and destroy the innocent persons’ reputation. As we know, most details of baseless scandals are created by makers’ imaginations. Those makers actually meet one scene and one detail, and then only according to this scene and this detail, they begin to guess what will happen next and did happen in the past. Admittedly, many families are destroyed by such scandals making up the story of secret lovers, many talented actors or actresses commit suicide because they can not endure any malicious and defamatory stories about themselves, and even in the political field, many kind and amiable leaders have to leave their jobs since the political evil scandals. Therefore, such deleterious scandals should be avoided, because they can lead us to misunderstand and harm the beneficial and innocent ones but to mistakenly encourage the evil ones.

In addition, because there are two different scandals, which can cause different results, people should carefully identify every scandal and rationally receive these scandals, moreover, media are responsible for select and publicize the just and fair scandals to the public. Thus, people can correctly take advantage of the scandals for well-ordered society, positive moral system as well as brilliant lives.

In conclusion, people should rationally encourage useful scandals. Not every scandal is useful for the society and people. There are still some bad ones to bring the negative effects on the society and people.

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In the contemporary society, the multitude of scandals about various aspects strongly affects people. Some people insist on that scandals in politics, academia, or other areas are useful, because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. In my opinion, I think that （those） people should separate (separately) to see this issue according to the different functions of scandals. If scandals can bring positive effects on the public and society, they are useful. However, the left holding the opposite effects is not useful and even deleterious.

First of all, the clear definition of the scandal is necessary for us to start our full discussion. The first definition from dictionary is the loss of or damage to the reputation caused by actual or apparent violation of morality and propriety. The second definition is the malicious or defamatory gossip. According to two definitions, people can see that the first one is useful since like (the) issue said, it reveals some hidden immoral behaviors unknown by the public, and the latter one is poison for people and the society. Next, I will interpret both respectively. (这句话写上没什么意义吧？)

The beneficial scandals can induce people to put their emphasis on seldom understood social and political problems. The famous example is the Watergate scandal. In fact, no public speaker or reformer could have called the nation's attention to the problem of presidential misconduct unless the scandal had surfaced. Meanwhile, scandals about the corruption and bribery in politics, academia, business and other areas are more crucial. For example, in China, there are many scandals on the regional leaders' corruption. Originally, no one can openly complain such immoral behaviors because of these leaders' firm power in the areas. At this time, the scandal plays a vital role to attract the public and the central government attentions, and induce the blazing discussion on this scandal from the public. And then the government will be forced to investigate the events what the scandal said, finally, the immoral behaviors will be punished, meanwhile, affected and damaged persons by those violations can gain the fair, safe and just circumstance. Therefore, publicizing such scandal is useful for the stability of society and people’s happiness.

On the contrary, the scandals which just are the malicious and defamatory gossip can damage the stable society and destroy the innocent persons’ reputation. As we know, most details of baseless scandals are created by makers’ imaginations. Those makers actually meet one scene and one detail, and then only according to this scene and this detail, they begin to guess what will happen next and did happen in the past. Admittedly, many families are destroyed by such scandals making up the story of secret lovers, many talented actors or actresses commit suicide because they can not endure any malicious and defamatory stories about themselves, and even in the political field, many kind and amiable leaders have to leave their jobs since the political evil scandals. Therefore, such deleterious scandals should be avoided, because they can lead us to misunderstand and harm the beneficial and innocent ones but to mistakenly encourage the evil ones.

In addition, because there are two different scandals, which can cause different results, people should carefully identify every scandal and rationally receive these scandals, (这句话已经结束了吧)moreover（Moreover）, media are responsible for select （selecting） and publicize (publicizing) the just and fair scandals to the public. Thus, people can correctly take advantage of the scandals for well-ordered society, positive moral system as well as brilliant lives.

In conclusion, people should rationally encourage useful scandals. Not every scandal is useful for the society and people. There are still some bad ones to bring the negative effects on the society and people.
写得很好，条理很清楚，语言也不错，呵呵，值得我好好学习：）

nightsky2004UID: 155946

我接了，今天太累了，明天一定贴上来。

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谢谢，等着你的赐教！！

nightsky2004UID: 155946

In the contemporary society, the multitude of scandals about various aspects strongly affects people.首句说得不太好，丑闻affect了谁呢？说具体点呀 Some people insist on that scandals in politics, academia, or other areas are useful, because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. In my opinion, I think that people should separate to see this issue according to the different functions of scandals.这句话说得罗嗦了，see this issue in different perspectives If scandals can bring positive effects on the public and society, they are useful. However, the left holding the opposite effects is not useful and even deleterious.
首段说出了你的观点，分开讨论，但是写得显得罗嗦了一点，最好简明扼要
First of all, the clear definition of the scandal is necessary for us to start our full discussion. The first definition from dictionary is the loss of or damage to the reputation caused by actual or apparent violation of morality and propriety. The second definition is the malicious or defamatory gossip. According to two definitions, people can see that the first one is useful since like issue said, it reveals some hidden immoral behaviors unknown by the public, and the latter one is poison for people and the society. Next, I will interpret both respectively.
说明defination，然后再分开讨论，很多人都喜欢这么写了
The beneficial scandals can induce people to put their emphasis on seldom understood social and political problems.不如把seldom understood 换到后面，然后用定语从句The famous example is the Watergate scandal.这个也不是什么好的事，最好不用famous了，改为the Watergate issue is just case in point In fact, no public speaker or reformer could have called时态是不是错了？或者在could前添哥before the nation's attention to the problem of presidential misconduct unless the scandal had surfaced.不过似乎高层领导人的moral or economic问题就是丑闻，似乎不存在于别的事物的比较 Meanwhile, scandals about the corruption and这个and似乎没有太大的必要吧 bribery in politics, academia, business and other areas are more crucial. For example, in China, there are many scandals on the regional leaders' corruption. Originally, no one can openly complain such immoral behaviors because of these leaders' firm power in the areas.这点说得不清楚，什么叫firm power？the areas又是什么？ At this time, the scandal plays a vital role to attract the public and the central government attentions, and induce the blazing discussion on this scandal from the public. And then the government will be forced to investigate the events what the scandal said, finally, the immoral behaviors will be punished, meanwhile, affected and damaged persons by those violations can gain the fair, safe and just circumstance. Therefore, publicizing such scandal is useful for the stability of society and people’s happiness.
本段主要在说公布scandals的好处，就丑闻本身是好是坏并没有做过多的讨论
On the contrary, the scandals which just are the malicious and defamatory gossip can damage the stable society and destroy the innocent persons’ reputation.这可是本人自己的所作所为呀 As we know, most details of baseless scandals are created by makers’ imaginations.makers’ imaginations是什么意思？楼主的文章里这样的指代不清的词汇很多，个人感觉最好说清楚些 Those makers 添一个may actually meet one scene and one detail, and then only according to this scene and this detail, they begin to guess what will happen next and did happen in the past.and和后面的部分改为or what happened in the past Admittedly, many families are destroyed by such scandals making up the story of secret lovers,sercet lovers？感觉不好，我也不太会说，sigh.. many talented actors or actresses commit suicide很多吗？显得夸张了 because they can not endure any malicious and defamatory stories about themselves, and even in the political field, many kind and amiable leaders have to leave their jobs since the political evil scandals.这些是scandals的问题吗？是本人的问题呀，不公布出来的不代表不存在 Therefore, such deleterious scandals should be avoided, because they can lead us to misunderstand and harm the beneficial and innocent ones but to mistakenly encourage the evil ones.
本段说了scandals的害处，但是说得似乎不太明白，如果不公布出来scandals，那么就好了？还是应该好好想想scandals
In addition, because there are two different scandals, which can cause different results, people should carefully identify every scandal and rationally receive these scandals, moreover, media are responsible for select and publicize the just and fair scandals to the public. Thus, people can correctly take advantage of the scandals for well-ordered society, positive moral system as well as brilliant lives.
本段用In addition开头，我以为会接着论述scandals的不足，但是作者并没有这样干，而是做了一个类似总结的段落，不知何故
In conclusion, people should rationally encourage useful scandals. Not every scandal is useful for the society and people. There are still some bad ones to bring the negative effects on the society and people.
楼主的语言还可以，没有什么明显的错误，但是表达得似乎不够好，最重要的是，楼主没有把概念搞懂想透，致使文章缺乏说服力，再改改吧，加油呀

nightsky2004UID: 155946

一天的工夫这个帖子已经沉到第4页了，人气挺旺的。
我今天身体不好，由于是昨天说好的，所以勉强改完了，但是感觉改得不好，如果中间有什么错误我没挑出来，挑错了 or 改错了，请见谅。

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谢谢你的批评，还来我这篇文章有不少问题呀，加油吧！！