Issue64 第4篇拍我必回大砖头

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Many people know how to attain success, but few know how to make the best use of it.
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Many people hold the viewpoint that people know to attain success, but few know how to make the best use of it. Retrospect back to the development of human history, personally, I agree with this idea. It is common for everyone to attain all forms of success in his daily life, however, many of them do not know how to make the best use of it.

To begin with, in human society, with right mind and good way, people know how to attain success. With the advancement of science and technologies as well as the popularization of advanced education, people can receive basic education required for success. To a student, there is no doubt behaving perfectly in the class and winning the first place in the exam is his success in school and we believe that he has the ability to win it if he studies hard and thinks more than others. The teacher will also impart them some merits such as assiduity, erudition and persistence to the success of future. Scientist, he should both make some innovations in his research field and create new research theory, that is also the way of walking to success. We have to admit that many people know the means to success in their field, and by this means, they can achieve it to some extent.  

However, it is a pity that few of the people really know how to make the best use of the success. Someone who attains the success would easily be immersed into the joy and exciting. Facing with the smile and claps, he would lose himself and forget what he should do next, without motivation and stimulus, there is only failure following him. I can still remember one of my classmates in the middle school. He won the first place in one exam, gradually, he began to be proud of his grade and contempt with his students. We can imagine the final result he never win good grade in the exam. In contrast, few of them after the achievement can keep calm and accept the success in a well-balanced heart. Success and knowledge is endless in the world. Only treating with success with a normal attitude can he attain further achievement.

Therefore, people should not only know how to attain success but also know how to make the best use of it. People should bear a positive and modest attitude to their success. They can share it with his friends happily, what is more important, they should put his success into effect and do great contributions for human, moreover, with a positive mode, they should go on striving to work hard and achieve more success. That is the best use of success.

To sum up, though many people know the meanings of success, few of them get the true meanings how to make the best use of it, in my opinion, facing your success calmly and utilizing it to do contributions for the development of human is the best use.

郁闷，速度提高不了啊

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Many people hold the viewpoint that people know to attain success, but few know how to make the best use of it. Retrospect back to the development of human history, personally, I agree with this idea. It is common for everyone to attain all forms of success in his his /her 小心女权daily life, however, many of them do not know how to make the best use of it.
最后一句是否变一下词语或说法，否则与第一句相同了

To begin with, in human society, with right mind and good way, people know how to attain success. With the advancement of science and technologies as well as the popularization of advanced education, people can receive basic education required for success. To a student, there is no doubt behaving perfectly in the class and winning the first place in the exam is his success in school and we believe that he has the ability to win it if he studies hard and thinks more than others. The teacher will also impart them some merits such as assiduity, erudition and persistence to the success of future. Scientist, he should both make some innovations in his research field and create new research theory, that is also the way of walking to success. We have to admit that many people know the means to success in their field, and by this means, they can achieve it to some extent.
举了一些例子，不错

However, it is a pity that few of the people really know how to make the best use of the success. Someone who attains the success would easily be immersed into the joy and exciting. Facing with the smile and claps, he would lose himself and forget what he should do next, without motivation and stimulus, there is only failure following him. I can still remember one of my classmates in the middle school. He won the first place in one exam, gradually, he began to be proud of his grade and contempt with his students. We can imagine the final result he never win good grade in the exam. In contrast, few of them after the achievement can keep calm and accept the success in a well-balanced heart. Success and knowledge is endless in the world. Only treating with success with a normal attitude can he attain further achievement.

Therefore, people should not only know how to attain success but also know how to make the best use of it. People should bear a positive and modest attitude to their success. They can share it with his friends happily, what is more important, they should put his success into effect and do great contributions for human, moreover, with a positive mode, they should go on striving to work hard and achieve more success. That is the best use of success.
相比前两段，此段讲究竟什莫是最好的使用成功，似乎没有展开，可拓本来不正是本文重点吗？

To sum up, though many people know the meanings of success, few of them get the true meanings how to make the best use of it, in my opinion, facing your success calmly and utilizing it to do contributions for the development of human is the best use.
觉得很不错，真的不知该说什莫了。祝考出好成绩吧

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我也写了这个题目，帮忙看看吧。