Issue64 success 好不容易贴上来的，请大家帮忙看看，必回拍！！

alinazhUID: 187151

Issue64 Many people know how to attain success, but few know how to make the best use of it.

Every one hopes to be a successful person in his/her field. Admittedly, there are a lot of people know how to attain success, and they actually have been successful. However, in the contemporary society, like issue said, few know how to make the best use of success.

Nowadays, we can hear about many such phenomena. In the past, they are the famous persons. They take advantage of their wisdom, their spirit of never giving up on a "no", their excellent skills and their personalities to attain some successes in one period. However, after then, how about those persons are? An original successful business man is ended in the bankrupt since his traditional but outdated business strategies and management; a famous athlete, who had gained a gold medal in the Olympic Games, has to leave his/her career because of his/ her worse and worse physical ability caused by taking break for a long time. In fact, there are more and more such examples. The former well-known people at last have to regrettably become faded in their fields. The actual reason is that they do not know how to make the best use of their successes.

There is no doubt that it is much more difficult for successful people to make use of successes than carry out those successes, because successes can mislead people. We all know, the meaning of making best use of success is to take advantage of formal one to create the second and the third. In other words, as a real successful person, he/she must continuously succeed. However, most times, it is difficult to create continuous successes. The first reason is that people can addict themselves into the nice girls, cozy lives, luxury, and a multitude of excellent reputations as well as honors from the society and the public brought by the existing success. The second reason is that success can make people self-righteous, arrogant and peacockish, so they do not want to continuously study, strive for as well as improve. When people possess one of those traits, they will be not willing to completely dedicate themselves to take the adventures for achieving the latter successes rather then to enjoy those harvests. It is because their interests, their spirits and their courage are changed to being timidity, sloth and idiot by success greatly. Therefore, because most people are attracted by the success to go to its deleterious orientation, they will impossibly know how to correctly make use of success, and can not attain the final success.

In addition, using the success on the negative way is also the reason for why there are only a few considered real successful persons by the society and the public in the world. How will people do to gain the real success? I suggest setting up a long-term or lifetime goal. And then people can correctly and resolvedly give up the superficial aspects brought by temporary success and make the best use of it rather than to indulge this success constantly. At last, they will improve step by step, and the final successes will come true. Take the successful man Mandela as an example. Although he successfully received the Nobel Peace Prize, he still does not stop to try him best to advocate antiracism in his whole life, because antiracism is his lifetime goal. In fact, people should realize that a temporary success is just sign of the ending of one period, and it also the starting point of next period and next success. Therefore, people should rationally and modestly understand and use a success.

In conclusion, for every one, gaining success is much easier than the proper use of success, because for the formal one many people know how to attain it according to their own personalities, wisdoms and skills; for the latter one, most people can more easily lose their original personalities and bravery led by evil side of success. Therefore, if you want to attain the real success, you should always look forwardly on the way to the real success, and never be attracted by the seemed beautiful scenes beside the way.

sailing_yfUID: 150982

A topic sentence, defining what a success is to maintain a longtime rather than an instantaneous one, might be add to B2 for explicitly mentioning the function of B2.
my personal view.

sailing_yfUID: 150982

请帮我看看第二篇
谢谢

dot699699UID: 175798

总之觉得楼主东西写得很不错了，考试没有问题了。这个话题我看到这样的说法，说有2种理解，可以理解成：很多人知道成功的途径，却不会很好的利用这些途径，就是说做不到，就没有能成功；然后还有就是理解成，很多人成功了，但是不会利用成功果实。所以我不知道到底是怎么的。
然后我觉得楼主介词使用稍微注意点就行，考试主要还是看思路的。

alinazhUID: 187151

to dot699699：我觉得it指代的是success，所以我写的是你说得第二种。其实我也不知道第一个行不行，应为要从语法角度讲，还是第二个比较对。不过我觉得考试主要看逻辑，写得能自圆其说就行了！！