[分享]开头的写法

lunaticUID: 150745

谢谢分享

staralwaysUID: 193479

I think that it is a very good proposal to all.

I guess that restating the statement is rather undesirable, unless sometimes we cannot figure out a proper beginning, which is also a problem to me. Many books and teachers from the New Oriental School tell us that "Rewrite but not Restate" is an advisable way. This may correspond to the reply from G-cat's friend  from abroad, that analysis the topic to some extent and further represent her own positon. What's more, through the reply, I can see that the spirit of critical thinking is prevailing, whch may indicate that the very spirit is emphasized heavily in the education abroad and therefore the reason why ETS chooses this as a crucial requirements.

I also favor the template a little more. But I am thinking about whether there is a third approach, a creative beginning. This is what I want to do sometimes, though subjects to my English ability. I am just thinking that a creative beginning may result in a good first impression. Of course, the very logic and content of the
issue is superior.

Let's discuss!

G猫UID: 192988

nod，其实平时写issue的时候，我也尽量自己想一个比较好的开头。但是考试的时候如果没遇到写过的，在短时间内灵感突发的可能性是比较小的。所以要做稳妥一点的打算，毕竟，开头写的顺可以帮我们迅速进入状态，不然紧张起来会影响全局的。

staralwaysUID: 193479

最初由 G猫 发布
[B]nod，其实平时写issue的时候，我也尽量自己想一个比较好的开头。但是考试的时候如果没遇到写过的，在短时间内灵感突发的可能性是比较小的。所以要做稳妥一点的打算，毕竟，..

以下省略...... [/B]

是是，我也是这样觉得，想那样的开头也就是练习的时候不太有压力才可以。考试的时候除非一下子想到了，不然还是用稳妥的办法好。

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iverUID: 198348

顶

boyjimUID: 125249

猫猫不错~支持

deserteagleUID: 201968

不错
发现自己喜欢restate的开头,看来得改改了:)

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谢谢,G猫

symphony22UID: 203058

RESTATE-------我最擅长了！看北美例文上说这是一种很好的偷懒的办法，于是用得不亦乐乎 还自鸣得意呢！幸好看到这篇文章了！险！！！

谢谢分享！！不胜感激！！！