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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：45分2秒     441 words
从2005年2月8日16时32分到2005年2月8日17时45分
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Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
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It takes a long time for a culture to be generated and formed, and different countries have different cultures. In order to maintain the typical and unique character of a country, the government must ensure that the places where culture  are mainly embody should receive the financial support so that they can survival and thrive. And in my point of view, not only the major cities there should be receive the support but also the rural areas should be considered.

The culture can be embodied not only in the art, architecture, customs, rituals and ceremonies, and so these visional styles, but the invisible styles such as people's attitude, spirits. These various kinds of expression can be handed down from one generation to another, from primary times to modern times, from rural areas to metropolitan, but apparently the major cities can reflect the contemporary culture well. This can be illustrated from the city of Florence of Renaissance. In that time, many great artists and aesthetics flooded to the major city, completing for the fame and status, thus marvelous works were left to us, typical of that time people's attitudes and ideas. Therefore, it is vital or necessary for a government to impose great money to preserve the culture and better cater to its country's development.

Unlike some investment such as buying lottery can have an immediate and sometimes great profits, such financial support on the preservation of culture may not have obvious feedback. For instance, when government invest some money to protect an old building that can identity its country well, it won't see much benefits to its people except that some tourism may thrive. In some worse cases, when the old building is impeding the modern development, then some compromise must be made so as to preserve the culture.

Anyway, some rural areas must also take into account when the government makes budget, especially in today's globalization. More and more cities have gotten so homogeneous that has already threaten some culture to disappear, and these changes have no incline to cease along with the urbanization. Nevertheless, the culture in small cities and rural areas, though  the density is very small, their cultural traditions are as important as these in the larger cities ,and thus still need the government to lay some money to help their culture preservation. Compared to the large cities, the amount small cities needed is much fewer.

As what I discussed above, it is necessary and essential for a government to locate financial support to both the major cities and the small cities or rural areas to better preserve the cultural traditions that a country uniquely has.

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It takes a long time for a culture to be generated and formed, and different countries have different cultures. In order to maintain the typical and unique character of a country, the government must ensure that the places where culture are mainly embody should receive the financial support so that they can survivalsurvive and thrive. And in my point of view, not only the major cities there should beno be, I think receive the support but also the rural areas should be considered.

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Unlike some investment such as buying lottery can have an immediate and sometimes great profits, such financial support on the preservation of culture may not have obvious feedback. For instance, when government invest some money to protect an old building that can identityidentify its country well, it won't see much benefits to its people except that some tourism may thrive. In some worse cases, when the old building is impeding the modern development, then感觉没有then更顺一些 some compromise must be made so as to preserve the culture.

Anyway, some rural areas must also take intobe taken into account when the government makes budget, especially in today's globalization. More and more cities have gotten so homogeneous that has already threatened some culture to disappear, and these changes have no incline to cease along with the urbanization. Nevertheless, the culture in small cities and rural areas, though the density人口密度么? is very small, their cultural traditions are as important as thesethose in the larger cities ,and thus still need the government to lay some money to help their culture preservation. Compared to the large cities, the amountof money small cities neededneed is much fewer.

As what I discussed above, it is necessary and essential for a government to locate financial support to both the major cities and the small cities or rural areas to better preserve the cultural traditions that a country uniquely hasthat uniquely stands for a country.

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非常感谢，那天写的比较匆忙，竟然有这么多错！