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发表于 2005-3-18 16:37:32 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Although people always control machines, machines are not inferior to human beings in many ways. In other words, human cannot compare with many functions of machines.

To begin with, as far as accuracy and velocity are concerned, machines do better than human beings. As we know, before computer was invented, it usually took several months for scientists to finish a series of scientific computing so that they can gain a conclusion on their specific study. What is more, during their process of computing research, a slight flaw will cause a large loss to the conclusion and it is hard to find this mistake. On the contrary, performing the same task only cost several seconds or minutes by virtue of computer. Since it is projected carefully and have been tested many times before it is applied in scientific field, little flaw will be committed. In addition, because machines do not have emotion, their productivity will not be impacted by things happened around them, this effect which human beings find it hard to attain. For example, a girl is deserted by his boyfriend one day, when she went to work, requiring her pay attention on what she was doing would be impossible. If she is a worker of toy-made factory, the rate of products that are not eligible more often than not would be very high during those days. However, this condition will never happen when machines perform her tasks. Therefore, machines are much better than human beings in such sides.

On the other hand, machines can do things in abnormal environment where human beings cannot go nowadays. Take the exploration of outer space for example. Considering there are so many uncertain factors in outer space, people usually send advanced robots there to collect data. Firstly, temperature in outer space may be very high or very low that is not fit for people's surviving. Secondly, when people leave the earth, they will be bothered by the problem of less gravity than the earth. Last but not least, the distance of planes is so large that voyage in outer space may cost several decades, which almost no one can burden. Only when information machines collected is adequate, dare people send human beings to do further research there.

Admittedly, no matter how advanced machines are, they are only tools of human minds. Nowadays, when someone admires the powerful capacity of some machines, he/she should not neglect the fact that it is the more powerful human beings who invented them. Machines can only perform task following those prescribed programs. A good case in point is that the human- machine struggle which happened several years before. At first, deep-blue defeat the most famous cheer player of the world. But when the latter used an erratic means in the second bout, the chess player won. Because, deep-blue had program including those normal means of cheer player often used before and cannot take measures when it met new condition. In this sense, the cleverest ones are still human who remain dominating our world.

In conclusion, notwithstanding human beings cannot be controlled by machines, the latter indeed are superior to them in many sides
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发表于 2005-3-18 19:39:21 |只看该作者
The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
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Although people always control machines, machines are not inferior to human beings in many ways. In other words, human cannot compare with many functions of machines.

To begin with, as far as accuracy and velocity are concerned, machines do better than human beings. As we know, before computer was invented, it usually took several months for scientists to finish a series of scientific computing so that they can gain a conclusion on their specific study. What is more, during their process of computing(改research), a slight flaw will cause a large loss in the end(改to the conclusion) and it is hard to find this (mistaken) point. On the contrary, performing the same task only cost several seconds or minutes by virtue of computer. Since it is projected carefully and have been tested many times before it is applied in scientific field, little flaw will be committed. In addition, because machines do not have emotion, their productivity will not be impacted by things happened around them, this effect which human beings find it hard to attain. For example, a girl was deserted by his boyfriend one day, when she went to work, requiring her pay attention on what she was doing would be impossible(改it is impossible for her to pay attention to what she was doing). If she were a worker producing toys(改she is a worker of toys-made company), the rate of products that are not eligible more often than not would be very high during those days(这句没看懂). However, this condition will never happen when mentions(machines) perform her tasks.

On the other hand, mentions(machines) can do things in abnormal environment where human beings cannot go nowadays. Take the exploration of outer space for example. Considering there are so many uncertain factors in outer space, people usually send advanced robots there to collect data. Firstly, temperature in outer space may be very high or very low that is not fit for people's surviving(改temperature in outer space usually not fit for people's surviving, it is neither too hot or too cold). Secondly, when people leave the earth, they will be bothered by the problem of gravitational loss(改)less gravity than earth). Last but not least, the distance of planes(planets) is so large that voyage in outer space may cost several decades, which almost no one can burden. Only when information that machines collected is so much that people can ensure that sending human beings there is safe, can somebody be sent there to do further research(改only when information that machines collected is adequate could ensure the safey of sending human beings there and for more to do further research).

Admittedly, no matter how advanced machines are, they are only tools of human minds. Nowadays, when someone admires the powerful capacity of some machines, he/she should not neglect the fact that it is the more powerful human beings who invented them. Machines can only perform task following those prescribed programs. A good case in point is that the human- machine struggle which happened several years before. At first, deep-blue defeat the most famous cheer player of the world. But when the latter used an erratic means in the second bout, the chess player won. Because, deep-blue had program including those normal means of cheer player often used before and cannot take measures when it met new condition. In this sense, the cleverest ones are still human who remain dominating our world.

In conclusion, notwithstanding human beings cannot be controlled by machines, the latter indeed are superior to them in many sides.
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发表于 2005-3-18 20:37:23 |只看该作者
谢谢Smile_Irene,下午写完也没仔细检查,就发上去了出了这么多弱智的错误
真是辛苦你了 我结合你改的把原贴改了改

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发表于 2005-3-19 10:13:45 |只看该作者
maria,你写的好像有点偏。

Title:The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
我觉得这个题目的核心应该是human mind与machines,也就是说“人类的思想”和“人类思想的结晶”。或者说是人类创造的“科技”给我们带了好处和坏处,然而我们能不能控制“科技”带给我们的坏处的,还是如有的人说的,“人类”最后死在自己的创造的“科技”手中。

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发表于 2005-3-19 13:40:27 |只看该作者
谢谢PeterID
你不说我还没觉什么,确实没注意是human mind 与 machines 相比,而不是人类,整个跑题了
多谢提醒,我结合你提供的思路在考虑一下吧

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