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Issue94 　
Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study because acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
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Argument 67
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感谢分享！
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好的，一定．
刚才修改了一篇Argument 67（关于将两个地方的图书馆合并到一个地方的．）
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看到了上面的很多闪光点：
1 statistics of... , is far more convincing

2 Further, if the library was to be closed, then what about the curator, the librarians, and other employees in the library?
3 Does the village offer enough job vacancies for these laid off workers?
4 How will the library in Castorville deal with the increasing number of its users?
5 Does it have sufficient room and seats for everyone?
6 What if people complain about the crowdedness in the reading rooms and the long lines in front of the checkout counter?
7 How far are the two villages located from each other?
8 Is the library in Castorville convenient of access and transportation?
9 Is there enough parking space?
10 What about during harsh winter conditions, for instance, when the weather and the roads are less favorable for people to travel?
11 Given all these questions (perhaps even more than listed), the closing of the library in Polluxton will probably not benefit the citizens, but causes needless troubles.

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Argument 6  3.20
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我拼了,再写一篇反面教材,大家继续努力呀!

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issue 51 教育要满足每一个学生的需要和兴趣
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大家加油写,多多总结呀!
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修改作文一篇issue 130 https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=256527
发现一些问题,提醒一下g友和自己
1 关于冠词的用法: a,the,an;
2 还是要精心修炼语言和逻辑.思想.

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三月分考的次数次多的一篇阿狗:  143 https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=257406

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上午写了一个issue147
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该了别人的一个147,发现写的很好!连接:https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=257461

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现在将argu100的攻击点写写.
b1 No evidence shows that the PMC can meet the needs of theri major product in the future.

        (1)Firstly, although there are increased orders for their major product, the arguer did give any evidecne that the capacity to produce such product in PMC. Perhaps PMC has the ability to produce more schu porduct than the current need and last for a long period.

        (2)In addition, just a quarter is too insufficient to justify there is acturally increasing need for their major product in the forture. In addition, if the orders in the future decreases, that new plant will gain no profits, even worse, it will make a loss.

b2 Even if they have to build a new manufacturing plant, the evidence, which the arguer lends to support his point, is unconvincing. Firstly, the arguer does not mention the property taxes of other city. It also fails to lend any evidence that there are convinent transportation.

b3 Athough there are entensive blocks of land available for immediate purchase in Summit City, the arguer fails to justify these land can fit for builiding a manufacturing plant, The arguer should  take into accout whether the materials such as  water, coal, electricity if needed, are available or easily and cheaply to be attained.

b4 The arguer fails to investigate the specific qualify of residents in Summit City. Opening a new plant needs various kinds of workers, such as experts, and the ordinary. The arguer  should get further and specific information such as the education level, the proficiency of these residents.

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