issue140 同主题艺术家评论家.狠狠拍,必报仇!

枫丹UID: 166492

占位, 占位,呵呵

猫猫624UID: 171232

惭愧,同主题6都出来了,我才同主题4.总是慢!   要加油了

boyjimUID: 125249

猫猫~占位置阿~哈哈~

猫猫624UID: 171232

boyjim兄,你的砖头让我汗颜.逻辑思路清晰的让我钦佩.刚才看你的,好多一下子都没看懂.D......哎考回去好好研究一下.晚上只要不吐血身亡,明天答复你.

猫猫624UID: 171232

boyjim兄,你的砖头让我汗颜.逻辑思路清晰的让我钦佩.刚才看你的,好多一下子都没看懂.D......哎拷回去好好研究一下.晚上只要不吐血身亡,明天答复你.

猫猫624UID: 171232

看了大家的评论,感觉自己写这篇文章不成功.首先我的观点是艺术家创造永恒价值.其次对于评论家的作用,我将艺术分成了流行艺术和抽象艺术两大类分3,4 段论述
3 对于流行艺术,评论家的作用是帮助实现暂时经济价值,并不是永恒价值
4 对于抽象艺术,评论家的作用一方面有帮助解读的作用,但另一方面有误导作用.
可能我的专业应该是属于艺术类的,对艺术价值的意义理解不太一样吧.什么叫lasting value,体现在什么方面.艺术如果不能带来经济效益根本就不可能生存.所以我认为lasting value 的意义很广,并不单单只那些虚无飘渺的美学价值,(同时艺术还有社会价值,文化价值等等.这些文中我没有涉及)
可能是我的语言水平有限,大家都没有看出我想表达的意思.修改一下再来吧

boyjimUID: 125249

不用介意的~lasting value我看了这么多篇好像也没多少能够说出个所以然

猫猫624UID: 171232

枫丹说我的结尾散,在这里我稍微改动后,解释一下

In conclusion, the enduring value of art is created by artists, not by critics.结论 Criticism, as guidance, on the one hand helps popular artists to fulfill their objectives and result in better artistic works, on the other hand is counterproductive to creativity of artists engaging in abstract art. 总结评论家对于艺术家的双重作用 Average people can better comprehend profound thoughts of works of art under the assistance of critics but ironically are likely to be misled by subjective criticism.总结评论家对于普通人的双重作用  Therefore, criticism from outside can be regarded as reference materials to understand works of art, but not as rigid answers.最后总结评论家的作用

猫猫624UID: 171232

boyjim,谢谢你的鼓励,批你的文章有点太很了你不介意吧,只是那些基本点我认为比较重要,稍加重视就能给文章增分,期待你的进步,

枫丹UID: 166492

最初由 猫猫624 发布
[B]枫丹说我的结尾散,在这里我稍微改动后,解释一下

In conclusion, the enduring value of art is created by artists, not by critics.结论 Criticis..

以下省略...... [/B]

不错,不错,这样好多了.请教你一个问题,如何才能在不到一个月内让语言词汇达到你3/4的丰富,我很是郁闷

gehaifengUID: 189090

这下看懂了，嗯，这个思路很好，抓住art的分类，对具体的art work进行写作
Consider artistic forms such as poetry, prose, and other abstract artistic works, which involve profound and complicated meanings, the role of critic have to need further analysis from case to case.
On the one hand, critics provided with professional knowledge may have insights about artistic works that average people cannot perceive. Critics help people better understand and interpret art.
Meanwhile, artists might be motivated by criticism and result in better works of art. However, on the other hand, Because of subjective factors inevitably possessing in critics, true meanings of artists are likely to be misinterpreted. For example, Beethoven's music was was once dismissed by esteemed critics of his time, because he did not comply with established musical rules .这个后面还可以再写一句，but the future acknowledgement and recognition of his innovative spirit which breaking traditional routine certainly present its lasting value Besides, it is believed that "true" art is a manifestation of the artist's unique creative impulse. If artists merely cater to the feedback of critics, it would constrain artist's creativity, and then resulting in the cease of true advancement of art.
这里突出了一个 truly,如果能突出lasting value ,更好

In conclusion, the enduring value of art is created by artists, not by critics. Criticism, as guidance, on the one hand helps popular artists to fulfill their objectives and result in better artistic works, on the other hand is counterproductive to creativity of artists engaging in abstract art. Average people can better comprehend profound thoughts of works of art under the assistance of critics but ironically are likely to be misled by subjective criticism. Therefore, criticism from outside can be regarded as reference materials to understand works of art, but not as rigid answers.
我直接看的你的新的结论，这个结论不错，和主题相互照应。  呵呵，你对艺术的了解比较深入，把常见的艺术形式分成 大众艺术和晦涩的抽象艺术，这个观点很好