Issue43 第32篇 高频，一限时句子就特单薄

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To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
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Why, you may wonder, should a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? As far as I am concerned, I strongly support this viewpoint. Only owning highest ethical and moral standards can a public official behave effectively in his location, and the public would like to follow his guidance.

To begin with, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and patriotic standards. As a public official, he has the responsibility to sever for people and ensure the stability and safety of his nation, so he should be required to have a high ethical and patriotic standard. Only maintaining these personalities could people have confidence on the leader and believe him. The leader would contrive and even sacrifice to do more achievements for public and strengthen his country. Washington, one of greatest president in America history, led people to win the success of America liberation war. It is his great ethical and patriotic level that stimulates him to fight with England for his people’s freedoms. Meanwhile, it is this enthusiasm that attains people's confidence and support. Leader and public could cooperate well to win the triumph.

Moreover, high level of morality is also an indispensable personality. A public official is not only a leader but also a model that people advocate and learn from. Thus, the basic requirement for a leader should be a high level of morality.   Premier Zhou of China is a great leader with high morality. He behaved modestly and carefully, In the early eras of China’s establishment, with individual charm he successfully establish the relationship with a great of number of nations and win a certain status for China. We should attribute all of these achievements to his high morality standards. When he died, countless people came to Changan street to honour and recall him.


Admittedly, without ethical and moral standards, a public official would bring a negative effect to the public and threaten the stability of the nation. In history of the world, there are a great number of immoral leader who betray his country and do great harm to his nation. When you browse in a newspaper, you will usually see that some immoral public official corrupted huge number of money in this location, who brought great loss to a nation and threaten the stability; There are also some wicked public official who betrayed the top secret of nation to the enemy. This action might threaten the existence of the country and bring a horrible catastrophe to people. Therefore, when choosing a public official we should ensure that he has a high ethical and moral standard.

To sum up, as a public official, you should maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to ensure your stable location. Only by this way can people have confidence on you and support your leadership. Meanwhile, people can live a happy and harmonious society.

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Why, you may wonder, should a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? As far as I am concerned, I strongly support this viewpoint. Only owning highest ethical and moral standards can a public official behave effectively in his location, and the public would like to follow his guidance.

To begin with, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and patriotic standards. As a public official, he/she has the responsibility to sever?serve? for people and ensure the stability and safety of his nation, so he should be required to have a high ethical and patriotic standard. Only maintaining these personalities could people have confidence on the leader and believe him.这个句子容易造成阅读上的错误，maintaining these personalities有可能是people而不是leader The leader would contrive and even sacrifice to do more achievements for public and strengthen his country.这句话有什么联系 Washington, one of greatest president in America history, led people to win the success of America liberation war. It is his great ethical and patriotic level that stimulates him to fight with England for his people’s freedoms.没有具体说明是怎么样的great ethical and patriotic level，有点空洞了 Meanwhile, it is this enthusiasm that attains people's confidence and support. Leader and public could cooperate well to win the triumph.

Moreover, high level of morality is also an indispensable personality. A public official is not only a leader but also a model that people advocate and learn from. Thus, the basic requirement for a leader should be a high level of morality. Premier Zhou of China is a great leader with high morality. He behaved modestly and carefully, In the early eras of China’s establishment, with individual charm he successfully establish the relationship with a great of number of nations and win a certain status for China. We should attribute all of these achievements to his high morality standards. When he died, countless people came to Changan street to honour and recall him. 还有联合国降半旗，这个最应该说了，应为得到了世界的赞同


Admittedly, without ethical and moral standards, a public official would bring a negative effect to the public and threaten the stability of the nation. In history of the world, there are a great number of immoral leader who betray his country and do great harm to his nation.这个好象说不通。道德水平与背叛国家还是不一样的 When you browse in a newspaper, you will usually see that some immoral public official corrupted huge number of money in this location, who brought great loss to a nation and threaten the stability; There are also some wicked public official who betrayed the top secret of nation to the enemy. This action might threaten the existence of the country and bring a horrible catastrophe to people. Therefore, when choosing a public official we should ensure that he has a high ethical and moral standard.

To sum up, as a public official, youone，孙的那本书上说的，中国人习惯用“你”，老外就是用one了 should maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to ensure your stable location. Only by this way can people have confidence on you and support your leadership. Meanwhile, people can live a happy and harmonious society.
确实如你所说的，展开的不够充分，论述的也不深入，没关系了，继续练习，呵呵。其实很多人的ISSUE都是深入不下去，饶来饶去都是一个意思，可能上中学的干瘪的议论问给闹的，呵呵。唉我都是狂超时，要向你学习啊！

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