同主题写作第七期Issue138

枫丹UID：166492

占位,明天交,每次完成一个类的作文的时候就象是在吐丝!!不知道这个比喻是否恰当!!

boyjimUID：125249

也就最后一次同主题了~之前写过这篇~不怎么~改一下再放上来
鬼哥要帮我看啊~我的预感我会考这个~不知道为什么...
138"Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress."
1失败总是难免的
2犯错误可以~但是我们需要认真的研究错误~成功往往在失败中找到蛛丝马迹
3稍微让步~里面写了乱七八糟的一些其他东西
这个东西是22号写的~当时写之前一个晚上就在想了~写的时候没有超时~不过要计算上想的时间~......超的好严重中~而且好像还是有点跑了....555这样的状态.....

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthre ... 1327051#post1327051

优点是语言不错，问题是B1的作用不明显，B2的TS设计不是太好，开头观点中的反面问题没有在后面的文章中体现。
－by鬼谷子

寻梦UID：171591

刚回来，来晚了，偶占座

likeying27UID：195699

Issue 138 同主题写作,1,2,3大家一起拍呀

  outline:
B1 自己会犯错,但可以从中吸取教训
B2  我们可以站在别人的肩膀上,吸取别人的错误,获取经验
B3  other ways( 偶然/社会的重视) 也可以


LINK:
http://211.151.90.54/bbs/showthr ... 1328709#post1328709

goasupleaseUID：195799

提纲(文章发在外面了),限时

b1.错误是创新的源泉,(科学领域为例)
b2.错误带来经验,(商业领域为例)
b3.应避免不必要的错误

thx

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258665

viviansiUID：190413

好，明天写

naiba369UID：131655

up

hplrzdfUID：198907

Issue138: 511 words  45 minutes
Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.

"Failure is mother to success", the proverb has propagated by generations, and get the admit of people. In human history, we can find many important discoveries or progress are obtained through the endeavor and incessant failure of ancestors. But we should realize that there are many ways to attain success not only through mistakes.

Admittedly, mistakes play a vital role in the development of human civilization. Since we were in childhood, our parents and teachers told us that through committing mistakes, you can find the right way to success. And in the books, we find many important discoveries and progress are related with failure. The well-known scientist Edison had said that, he known a thousand of ways to be failed in producing the light bulb, at the same time he known the only way to successfully to invent light bulb. Also as a postgraduate in biology, I deeply appreciate the position of failure in research. After many experiments which are failed due to many inevitable accidents or reasons, we find the correct method to accomplish my first step which is only one part of the whole task. The failure can make us maintain practical serious attitude towards what we are doing now, after carefully analysis of failure, we can discriminate the only correct way from many illusions and immature minds or behaviors.

At the same time, we must emphasize that it does not encourage people to commit mistakes actively. If people take action under this mind, the progress of society would be nonsense, and many discoveries are only under the cover of dust of history. We should discriminate the passive mistakes and active mistakes, the former is inevitable but the latter can be avoid by our endeavor and effort.

However, though the failure can facilitate us to progress and discover, we must know that in the world there are many kinds of methods that can promise us to make discovery or progress successfully. According to our experiences and knowledge that are handed from our ancestors, we can avoid unnecessary failure to finish our goal. For instance, under the guidance of knowledge, we can discover the new rules and principles in physics, chemistry and other fields; making circumspect and detailed plans before action can permit our science and technology progress rapidly. In the history of human civilization, we also can find many successful discoveries that correctly avoid the unnecessary failures. Under the direction of former theory in biology and thorough consideration in mathematics and chemistry, Watson and Crick proposed the famous spiral theory about the structure of nuclear acid. Therefore, without committing the unnecessary failure, human also can make great discovery or progress.

To sum up, people do not feel frustrated when they meet failure, because after the well-rounded analysis, they can find the breakthrough of these problems. And what need us more attention is that through our thorough consideration and profound knowledge and rich experience, people also can progress greatly, at the same time avoid committing mistakes.

sblbaslerUID：175229

占个坐

comingsoonUID：175137

position:不同意
b1错误的确有助于发现
b2还有其他的方法可以发现
b3如果没有一些必要的技能,错误对发现将没有作用

连接:http://edu.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258727

说理还算清楚，不过具体的例子不够，影响了说服力。B1让步的内容太多了，削弱后文的力度了。B2B3可以调换位置。
－－by鬼谷子

annfayeUID：177398

失败是进步的主要途径，分领域
1 个人
2 社区
3 国家
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258744

zzh_skystarUID：153126

一　同意through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
二　反对only
是不是段落大少了？
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258802

sblbaslerUID：175229

交作业
TS：某种意义上说反错误可以有助于发现与进步，但当今社会没有人能通过大量犯错误而成功
B1：反错误可以有助于发现与进步。哥伦布，开普勒，爱迪生的例子。
B2：当今社会为了生存要避免过多的犯错误。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthre ... 1327572#post1327572

B1的例子是不错的，B2把论述偏离到了生活上面，不妥。论述的过程中某些地方不是很一致。
－by鬼谷子

boancquUID：165060

position:不同意
b1错误的确有助于发现
b2根据题目推出的问题
b3还有其他的方式

链接：
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258804

B1关于为什么mistake能够带来进步论述的不够清楚。B2支持和反对似乎有些矛盾。B3偏离到了避免mistake的论述上面。
－by鬼谷子

AutoseaUID：192045

提纲：同意
1，开发软件如此，编造的个人经历。
2，物理学如此，Galileo，Aristotle，Newton，Einstein，Bohr
3，哲学也如此，Marx，Feuerbach，Hegel

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=258839