[color=#1b00ff]Issue87 超高频 半小时搞定 期待砖头，留下链接定回拍！

boancquUID: 165060

Issue87  超高频 半小时搞定 期待转头，留下链接定回拍！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：30分16秒     462 words
从2005年2月24日17时2分到2005年2月24日17时32分
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In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.
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With the rapid development of modern society, there are many new discoveries everyday. Sometimes we are thinking about the problem that who is more likely to make important discoveries, the beginner or the expert? In my opinion, the beginner is more likely to make important discoveries as compared with the expert, although the expert has some advantages.

To begin with, when doing research or other activities in a new field, the beginner is always curious about the new area, which is very crucial for an important discovery. With such kind of curiosity, the beginner may pay more energy in making discoveries. There are some examples in history can be used in interpreting this. In last year's International Conference of Mathematics, some young scientists were given the opportunity to present a forty five minutes’ speech. When jounalists ask them what was the most important factor contributing to their success, they mostly replied with the curiosity.

Moreover, compared with the expert, the beginner is more open while doing research. The beginner has no prior experience in this field, he /she haven't hesitate to try what he/she want to do, no matter it will success at last. In these mature research fields, curiosity may help the beginner to find some way toward important discoveries.  In history, many great discoveries are based on such open mind, not subject to the experience of ancestors. Take the prominent astronomy scientist Copernicus for example. When he began to do research on astronomy, he kept an open mind, and didn't affect by the geocentric theory of Aristotle, after long periods of observation and experimentation. He published his new theory- the heliocentric theory. In contrast, the expert seems much more conservative. With many knowledge and research experience, the expert may think for a very long time before deciding to do research in a new research field. As the negative impact of experience, the expert lost the chance to make great discoveries.

However, compared with the beginner, the expert also has some advantages, of which the most important issue is the experience. It is well known that there are some principles and rules in every research area. With knowledge of such principles, the expert can avoid some things seem extra or are destined to fail. In such a way, the expert may save much time. Contrary, the beginner is more likely to suffer some fetal fallacies because of lacking of experience.

To sum up, both the expert and the beginner have some advantages respectively while doing research in a field. In order to make best use of the advantages of the two sides, the expert should be more open, and the beginner also should obey some basic principles. In such a way, they can work out more and more important discoveries.

katie-leeUID: 178135

有两个疑问
1 只有beginner has curiosity??  例子中的young scientist一定就是beginners?
2 Copernicus doubedt the geocentric theory and established heliocentric theory，但是没听说他以前不是学天文学的啊 算新手吗？

likeying27UID: 195699

With the rapid development of modern society, there are many new discoveries everyday. Sometimes we are thinking about the problem that who is more likely to make important discoveries, the beginner or the expert? In my opinion, the beginner is more likely to make important discoveries as compared with the expert, although the expert has some advantages.

To begin with, when doing research or other activities in a new field, the beginner is always curious about the new area, which is very crucial for an important discovery. With such kind of curiosity, the beginner may pay more energy in making discoveries. There are some examples in history can be used in interpreting this. In last year's International Conference of Mathematics, some young scientists were given the opportunity to present a forty five minutes’ speech. When jounalists ask them what was the most important factor contributing to their success, they mostly replied with the curiosity. [总结一下，或者加点什么，感觉好象没有写完啊]

Moreover, compared[comparing？] with the expert, the beginner is more open while doing research. The beginner has no prior experience in this field, he /she haven't hesitate to try what he/she want to do, no matter it will success at last. [In these mature research fields, curiosity may help the beginner to find some way toward important discoveries.上一段的别用来酬字数]   In history, many great discoveries are based on such open mind, not subject to the experience of ancestors. Take the prominent astronomy scientist Copernicus for example. When he began to do research on astronomy, he kept an open mind, and didn't affect by the geocentric theory of Aristotle, after long periods of observation and experimentation. He published his new theory- the heliocentric theory. In contrast, the expert seems much more conservative. With many knowledge and research experience, the expert may think for a very long time before deciding to do research in a new research field. As the negative impact of experience, the expert lost the chance to make great discoveries.

However, compared with the beginner, the expert also has some advantages, [of which解释一下语法吧] the most important issue is the experience. [It is well known that there are some principles and rules in every research area.和下一句不连贯啊] With knowledge of such principles, the expert can avoid some things seem extra or are destined to fail.][beginner难道就没有学过这些k&p吗?应该是运用上expert比较熟练吧] [/colorIn such a way, the expert may save much time. Contrary, the beginner is more likely to suffer some fetal fallacies because of lacking of experience.

To sum up, both the expert and the beginner have some advantages respectively while doing research in a field. In order to make best use of the advantages of the two sides, the expert should be more open, and the beginner also should obey some basic principles. In such a way, they can work out more and more important discoveries.

To:和我同一天考的
语言上,还要多下功夫,基本思想应该没有问题.
我也写了这一篇帮看看,呵呵,有点像小学生写的,勿见笑``````
PS:你已经练了好多了啊,汗``要加油了我```

boancquUID: 165060

谢谢楼上的两位哈，写得很快，都没有认真检查一下。一定回拍的。

katie-leeUID: 178135

我30号就考了 没机会等你拍了 觉得希望渺茫啊

boancquUID: 165060

希望渺茫 for what？

katie-leeUID: 178135

不好意思 是我自己希望渺茫 我是一个非常没有逻辑的人 而AWA就是考逻辑……
祝你好运

boancquUID: 165060

Bless you!

zhengandhong135UID: 164542

剩那么多时见为什么不把最后一段在多加写内容呢
结尾值得学习