Issue121 环境问题,求砖

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从2005年2月24日1时25分到2005年2月24日2时47分
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At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
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With only several thousands years history compared to the long and long history when the earth born, the human seem like to be some meaningless species of the universe. And just like what the statement assert that many species have become extinct as a result of natural process at various time in the geological past rather than human, but against the speaker I suggest that, the human, thinking that they are the leader on the earth, should try their best to save endangered species with extraordinary efforts.

  To start with the discussion, the human may feel lucky that they haven't live with the dinosaur and other already extinct species, which may destroy the human civilizations. And still there are thousands hundreds kinds of animals, insects, trees and other biology in the natural. All of they should live in a balance natural environment including the humans. Why do we think we are the only dominator in the world? Why do the human feel that they are superior to the other species?  The nature like a huge family, every member in it should be equality treated, we are just a part of the unite, every family members in the nature ought to be take care of no mater it is a fierce wolf or a tame sheep. And thinking about that one day when we know that some of our relatives are in danger, what shall we do, undoubtedly we must help them go out of the emergency incident but without any rewords.

    Next, if we really pay little attention to this problem and give no hand to save the endangered species, the result may finally punish the ignorant people. Complexity relationships construct the complete biologycircle. Depending on the food chains among all the world species, the whole nature normally operates. Compared the nature to a big machine that the various species may become the each important components of the machine and without anyone of it, the machine can't run correctly. For example, the tiger in the world is thimbleful and still decrease. If we do not cost some money or jobs to save the precious animal, they will disappear from the earth. When the food-chain highest species die out, the inferiors may crazy multiply with an unbelievable speed that can't control only by the human.

    However, some species in the nature such as the flies, mosquitoes and so on, if they really extinct that may seem good for the human, but they have the strongest living energy as we all know and what we can’t is that whether eradicating these species will make some efficient result for the human nature or not. So the first thing we should do is to find an effective way to not only save the endangers but also to take care of the sufficient species to prevent they becoming the endangers.  

Consequently, due to analysis and reasons mentioned above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than one of them, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that as a specie of the natural, the human society must make extraordinary efforts to save some species on the rim of the extinct no matter how much money will cost.

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With only several thousands years history compared to the long and long history when the earth born, the human seems like to be some meaningless species of the universe. And just like what the statement assert that many species have become extinct as a result of natural process at various time in the geological past rather than human, but against the speaker I suggest that, the human, thinking that they are the leader on the earth, should try their best to save endangered species with extraordinary efforts.

To start with the discussion, the human may feel lucky that they haven't lived with the dinosaur and other already extinct species, which may destroy the human civilizations. And still there are thousands hundreds kinds of animals, insects, trees and other biology in the natural. All of them should live in a balance natural environment including the humans. Why do we think we are the only dominator in the world? Why do the human feel that they are superior to the other species? The nature like a huge family, every member in it should be equality treated, we are just a part of the unite, every family members in the nature ought to be take care of no mater it is a fierce wolf or a tame sheep这似乎和上面的he human, thinking that they are the leader on the earth有点矛盾. And thinking about that one day when we know that some of our relatives are in danger, what shall we do, undoubtedly we must help them go out of the emergency incident but without any rewords.

Next, if we really pay little attention to this problem and give no hand to save the endangered species, the result may finally punish the ignorant people. Complexity relationships construct the complete biologycircle. Depending on the food chains among all the world species, the whole nature normally operates. Compared the nature to a big machine that the various species may become the each important components of the machine and without anyone of it, the machine can't run correctly. For example, the tiger in the world is thimbleful and still decrease. If we do not cost some money or jobs to save the precious animal, they will disappear from the earth. When the food-chain highest species die out, the inferiors may crazy multiply with an unbelievable speed that can't control only by the human.

However, some species in the nature such as the flies, mosquitoes and so on, if they really extinct that may seem good for the human, but they have the strongest living energy as we all know and what we can’t is that whether eradicating these species will make some efficient result for the human nature or not.前面的和最后一句有关吗？ So the first thing we should do is to find an effective way to not only save the endangers but also to take care of the sufficient species to prevent they becoming the endangers.

Consequently, due to analysis and reasons mentioned above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than one of them, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that as a specie of the natural, the human society must make extraordinary efforts to save some species on the rim of the extinct no matter how much money will cost.这段还不错
今天早上不知道怎么了，头异常懵，才写了那篇烂文，让你费心看了，我感觉是全跑题了，我再重写吧，看了你的，感觉也很乱，尤其是body1和body3,似乎和主题都无关，body2只写了一小方面，建议重写，当然，都是个人愚见，可能我现在还不是很清醒，看不懂你的高文，见谅