issue 185:scandals高频题互拍[新版]

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What is the usage of scandals? What attitude should we take towards them? In
my opinion, some kinds of scandals could really cast light on the shadow of o
ur society which curbs social development, while actually some scandals are n
ot that useful. Too much attention focusing on scandals would lead to some fr
eak society. Moreover, we have many other problems to concern except those sc
andals.

Admittedly some scandals in political, academic, or other fields could act as
a siren or an alarm to prevent the degeneration and demolition of social mor
ality. Indeed political or academic leaders pay much more attention on their
social images lest any kind of scandals, for they are sure that simply a scan
dal would act as a chick in the armor to perish their vocational life. As a r
esult, scandals would probably inhibit their vice ideas toward public or the
established social moral standard. Let us take Richard Nixon, former US presi
dent, for instance. The Water Gate scandal ended his life not only in the Whi
te House but also in public views as a honest man. From then on his successor
would be more circumspective about their words and deeds. Another example, W
ang Mingming, a renowned Chinese professor of psycology infamized himself by
plagiarizing, which would help other man of letters from putridity.

In addition, with disclosure effect of scandals, vivid impressions would stam
p on the deep mind of social members, which might leave certain problems on o
verheated discussion and settlement in the end. For example, the Abuse Scanda
l about detainees informs us certain tortures happening in the US army prison
s as a infringement of human rights, and we ought to ponder many problems suc
h cultrual conflicts, racial discri-mination, and rights protection of POW. A
nd a glance at the consequence of collapse of Enron Empire with scandals coul
d also illustrate the scandal's usage. After the bankrupt of the giant,the US
Public Company Accounting Oversight Board has been esta-blished by lawmakers
to prohibit similar affairs happening again.In that sense, scandals could fo
cus our attention on those specific areas that any speaker or reformer could
ever do.

However sometimes scandals could act as nightmares for public figures, as man
y people might be prone to attempt to get acquaintance with others privacy, e
specially those celebrities'. An glance at roadside newsstands decorated with
trashy magazines full of dirt information about some scandals of popular fig
ures may assure us the usage of scandals cannot be overestimated. In addition
, the press always pursuit eyeball-catching news to gain their own reput
e at the cost of others,so scandals become their best choice. Yet some scan
dals prove true but some might be rumors which could actually destroy the vic
tims. Imagine a society full of scandals must be a society full of chaos and
cynicism. Even more, besides scandals, we still have a plethora of social pro
blems to focus on, such as education, unemployment, philanthropy and etc. As
a result,mass media ought to strike a balance upon those social problems ins
tead of the only pursuits of scandals.  

In sum, scandals sometimes play a important role of moral guardiance for a pr
osperous and promising society in ways no speak or reformer could. Neverthele
ss not all the scandals act as a catalyst but, indeed some as a constraint. F
urthermore, there are many other issues deserving deliberations except the di
sclosure of scandals.

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What is the usage of scandals? What attitude should we take towards them? In
my opinion, some kinds of scandals could really cast light on the shadow of o
ur society which curbs social development, while actually some scandals are n
ot that useful. Too much attention focusing on scandals would lead to some fr
eak society. Moreover, we have many other problems to concern except those sc
andals.

Admittedly some scandals in political, academic, or other fields could act as
a siren or an alarm to prevent the degeneration and demolition of social mor
ality. Indeed political or academic leaders pay much more attention on their
social images lest any kind of scandals, for they are sure that simply a scan
dal would act as a chick in the armor to perish their vocational life. As a r
esult, scandals would probably inhibit their vice ideas toward public or the
established social moral standard. Let us take Richard Nixon, former US presi
dent, for instance. The Water Gate scandal ended his life not only in the Whi
te House but also in public views as a honest man.（这句的主语搭配有点问题 怎么是end life in public views 呢？） From then on his successor
would be more circumspective about their words and deeds. Another example, W
ang Mingming, a renowned Chinese professor of psycology infamized himself by
plagiarizing, which would help other man of letters from putridity.（惭愧ing～这句没看懂～）

In addition, with disclosure（这个是名词吧 修饰effect？） effect of scandals, vivid impressions would stam
p on the deep mind of social members, which might leave certain problems on      overheated discussion and settlement in the end. For example, the Abuse Scanda
l about detainees informs us certain tortures happening in the US army prison
s as a（an） infringement of human rights, and we ought to ponder many problems such（是不是少了个as） cultrual conflicts, racial discri-mination, and rights protection of POW. A
nd a glance at the consequence of collapse of Enron Empire with scandals coul
d also illustrate the scandal's usage. After the bankrupt of the giant,the US
Public Company Accounting Oversight Board has been esta-blished by lawmakers
to prohibit similar affairs happening again.In that sense, scandals could fo
cus our attention on those specific areas that any speaker or reformer could
ever do.

However sometimes scandals could act as nightmares for public figures, as（as作因为好像不是这么用的） man
y people might be prone to attempt to get acquaintance with others privacy, e
specially those celebrities'. An glance at roadside newsstands decorated with
trashy magazines full of dirt information about some scandals of popular fig
ures may assure us the usage of scandals cannot be overestimated. In addition
, the press always pursuit eyeball-catching news to gain their own reput
e at the cost of others,so scandals become their best choice. Yet some scan
dals prove true but some might be rumors which could actually destroy the vic
tims（破坏受害者？）. Imagine a society full of scandals must be a society full of chaos and
cynicism.（这句话两个谓语哦 imagine, must be） Even more, besides scandals, we still have a plethora of social pro
blems to focus on, such as education, unemployment, philanthropy and etc. As
a result,mass media ought to strike a balance upon those social problems ins
tead of the only pursuits of scandals.

In sum, scandals sometimes play a important role of moral guardiance for a pr
osperous and promising society in ways no speak or reformer could. Neverthele
ss not all the scandals act as a catalyst but,（怎么断在这里？） indeed some as a constraint. F
urthermore, there are many other issues deserving deliberations except the di
sclosure of scandals.
优点我就不说了哈～～
1.        我感觉你第一断主题句是对schandal大负小正 怎么写起来变成大正小负了？？另外 你用了很多新词 可给我的感觉就是直接用中文在金山里面查完以后直接就用了 读起来感觉不对，不合适吧 不知道是不是我自己的问题 讨论一下^_^
2.        文章论点不错 但如果开头是这样写的话 我觉得算是写反了 建议修改一下开头
3.        有些句子的逻辑…或者说语法吧 有点问题^_^ 断句也不太合适

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楼上说的很对，偶自己没发现第一段是主负评价，和后面各段比重安排失调，bow。。。