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发表于 2005-4-6 10:50:21 |显示全部楼层
T6: "The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth."
1. The author asserts it is most effective to understand contemporary culture by analyzing the trends of its youth .At the first glance, it seems to be reasonable. But with further and critical thought, it turns out to be defective. The author missed the influence of culture itself. As far as I am concerned, to understand contemporary culture, a study of old ways of actions and difficulties for the public to accept new manners of thoughts and behaviors.
2. Obviously, the youth are the most active and imaginative part of the culture; as a result, they have been always leading the trends of the society. It is the youth who ,quite easy to be found out, are fond of ,even a bit crazy, new born things. They listen to the latest pop music; they wear fashioned clothes, they have colorful hair styles, sometimes they also follow the action, which quite often are on the right track, of “the eminent persons” in their opinion. In addition, the youth, for there born with talents, create new methods of behavior, which would entertain their bored hearts and they express their unhappiness by all the time. Every second, great amounts of new “words or phrases” are produced by young people; maybe they are just for fun. Accordingly, to analyze the minds of the youth is the most effective way to understand trends of developing contemporary culture and to know on which direction the society would go.
3. However, contemporary culture is not effected only by the youth, as, to some extent, the youth don’t play the greatest role in the development of the culture sometimes. They bring about alterative creatures, which, however, affect not the fundamental parts of the culture but certain tiny aspects. For instance, what they could affect always turns out to be hair styles, latest clothes fashion, some strange words or idioms, or something alike, all these are often on the edge of the culture. Concerning diverse factors including widely and long spread ways of thinking, effects of the outside world, and so on, which have reference to culture trend; it is too insufficient of the youth to affect the essential part of culture. As a result, under the depression of widely established means of thinking, too “active” thoughts and actions would have got beaten, as they are probably against the traditions and customs. Only few of the public even few of the youth will accept the new thoughts and actions. A case in point, there is an increasing number of young individuals in recent years, which have got used to drug at an early age. Majority of the public are strongly against the trends, and take many effort to stop the trends, as the trends brings about not only damage to the youth themselves but also to the society, and it would cause a great amount of social problems.
4. Additionally, even though the new ways of thinking are compatible with the society, wide acceptance also needs a long period of time. The public, which is made up of mainly by adults who have built steady ways of doing things, are not likely to accept exceptionalnesses of the young people. Adults would oppose to young people and denounce them for “wrong actions” seriously. Only after a long period of ignorance of adults, which probably dues to grown-ups’ compromise, can the young show their new manners of actions without any denunciation. For instance, youth smoking is rare twenty or thirty years ago, but now, when walking alone the street, one can find scores of smoking youngsters. At the very beginning, parents criticized their children to smoke and punish them, but gradually, seeing the fact that their denunciation did not make sense, the parents accepted youth’s new ways of behaviors as long as the ways were not defying the common laws of actions. However, it has already taken a long period of time.
5. In summary, after fully studying alterative traditions and customs of a culture, analyzing the positive aspects of trends of the youth is a most effective method to gain appropriate knowledge of how the culture or the society would be like in the future. On the other hand ,the negative aspects of the trends of the youth do not make any sense.
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发表于 2005-4-6 23:09:55 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-4-8 10:23:11 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2005-4-9 23:09:20 |显示全部楼层
首先我觉得你的思路还可以,但是有些细节你要注意一下.我觉得你的第二段结尾我有电看不懂,是不是有点矛盾.第四段跟你支持的观点不太相关.语言挺不错的.

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RE: issue6 欢迎大家来提意见啊。我觉得自己的废话太多。大家来帮我的ISSUE减肥啊 [修改]

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