imong:逆风飞羊,albert_sun

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

Originally posted by imong at 2005-5-7 11:57

which?

就是在第九页125楼的那篇。
突然发现那还是4号写的，现在都7号了，好快啊
今天做了0401，受打击到了极点，听力比0308错的还多，而且阅读一下错了8个。突然很怀疑自己了，不知前一段时间的好状态是不是一种假象？
外面有个帖子不少人在抱怨说最近状态越来越差听力错的增多，里面有人说0308和0401太快没参考价值，他说的对吗？

[ Last edited by 逆风飞羊 on 2005-5-7 at 15:41 ]

SunnyOpenUID: 164650

Originally posted by imong at 2005-5-7 11:56
本来就没有叫做及格线的东西

听力还是错的偏多了些。总结一下
临场之前要调整自己状态的

好的 谢谢imong老大~~~ ^_^

imongUID: 140258

97．Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


When talk（talking） about teachers’ payment（？）, some people assert that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. I maintain that although how much the students learn can partially reflect their teachers’ level（？）, this method is not wise. I grasp this point after I consider two likely reasons which any（？） include how do the students concentrate on their studies and their understanding ability.（？）

问号的地方代表费解。

On one hand, many students are not interested in their studies. （isn't this too rash?）The attitudes toward study are different from individual to individual.（from one to another?? not sure） It is common that there are always a few ones（if "a few", then delete "ones"） in a class who do not study hard, in spite of their excellent teachers（?）. No matter how prominent and responsible the teacher is（后面这个no matter倒是用得没问题）, the information he/she taught（teach information不太搭配吧。） in the lecture may no be accepted by some of the students and reducing the teachers’ salary is inconsiderable.前后关联的...突然就转到reducing, 不是很顺。

On the other hand, granted that all of the students are assiduous to earn their degree（to earn degree这么写似乎不太好）, their brilliantness may work on how much they learn. It is no doubt that talents will learn quickly and more efficient although the amount of these fellows is low. However, in China, many universities and high schools aggregate a number of smart students or even talents to make up classes, which are called “Talent Class”. It is obviously unfair to pay higher salary to the teachers teaching these students than to pay other counterparts.

In manufacturing industry, workers may be paid according to how much works they make. This method encourages the workers to work hard. However, this success in manufacturing industry is not replicated in the field of education in that every student is different to others whereas the staff workers make are all the same. So, as a conclusion, I disagree with the statement to pay teachers by looking for how much their students learn.

觉得基本的语言表达需要多留心一些。

山坡羊UID: 169978

我觉得0310的阅读也好难，题出得简直云里雾里。不过好运的是大多能蒙对。

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

0310我刚做了,是挺晕的,觉得读的很吃力,错了7个

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

谢谢imong老大的指点,确实是有不少问题.我今天又写了一篇,麻烦再看看呐~~~

5．A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.


Recently, a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near my community. Some people assert that it will be good for our community while some others maintain opposite idea. In my opinion, although the advantages this project brings to us are by no means unimportant, the disadvantages of this new influence have priority.

Firstly, it will devastate our lovely environment in many different ways. Not only during the constructing period but also after the factory start to run, will it bring noise, pollutant, remnant to our community. No doubt that these staff will make our community uncomfortable to live in. In the early morning, the noise will wake people up abruptly leading to a terrible sleep and a whole day’s unanimated life. Even more, the powder and waste water may pollute our air and water, which will probably cause dangerous illness to loom to us. These results are absolutely not acceptable.

Secondly, it will frustrate our present fluent traffic system. Heavy tracks will seriously damage the high ways and roads that are designed for cars and passengers instead of trucks. Besides trucks belongs to the factory carrying raw materials and industry remainders will increase the proportion of traffic jams. The big trucks may also influence other car drivers, especially make new drivers nervous leading to latent traffic accidents.

It is sure that the factory also has advantages to some extent increasing the opportunity of employment, the tax income. It is also beneficial for the dwellers to purchase the products the factory put out, if the factory manufactures commodities.

But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages can not be more important than the loss of good environment and traffic system. From what has been discussed above, I finally draw the conclusion that the factory should not be built.

imongUID: 140258

Recently, a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near my community. Some people assert that it will be good for our community while some others maintain (少了个the?) opposite idea. In my opinion, although the advantages this project brings to us are by no means unimportant, the disadvantages of this new influence have priority.（这句话写的完全费解。have priority那个表达尤其古怪）

Firstly, it will devastate our lovely environment in many different ways. Not only during the constructing period(during construction?) but also after the factory （怪）start to run, will it bring noise, pollutant, remnant（？？） to our community. No doubt that these staff（stuff?） will （will是否前置？）make our community uncomfortable to live in. In the early morning, the noise will wake people up abruptly leading to a terrible sleep（leading to? 不都已经醒了么） and a whole day’s unanimated life. Even more, the powder and waste water may pollute our air and water, which will probably cause dangerous illness to loom to us. These results are absolutely not acceptable.

整体的表达效果太Chinglish了些。学习体会一下原版文章里面遣词造句的感觉。

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

Originally posted by imong at 2005-5-9 18:36
Recently, a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near my community. Some people assert that it will be good for our community while some others maintain (少了个the?) opposi ...

although the advantages this project brings to us are by no means unimportant, the disadvantages of this new influence have priority. 这个句子是我在新东方上学的啊，而且还挺喜欢的，经常用呢．上次１１Ｔ还用来着．

山坡羊UID: 169978

今天一套托福。
考前5天打算只做一套新题了，做新题花时间挺多。


想想现在能提高的只有听力和作文了。语法和阅读关键看细致。哦，今天的0410的阅读觉得好难，晕！不过大多也能蒙对。

听力只有把老题多听听了。

作文还有些发愁呢。惭愧自己准备3月G作文还考过的，明天重点写作文。
大概总想把语言弄好，反而束手束脚。


大家加油！

[ Last edited by 山坡羊 on 2005-5-9 at 23:31 ]

imongUID: 140258

Originally posted by 逆风飞羊 at 2005-5-9 20:59


although the advantages this project brings to us are by no means unimportant, the disadvantages of this new influence have priority. 这个句子是我在新东方上学的啊，而且还挺喜欢的，经常用呢．上次 ...

Personally, I don't appreciate this.

山坡羊UID: 169978

今天看了看g作文，打算把托福作文当作g来写了，不知结果会如何。

几天前看看莫考成绩就做好准备8月份再考一次，所以现在心态，实在很好。：）

不过也希望中个大奖，这次就考高分。

[ Last edited by 山坡羊 on 2005-5-10 at 23:16 ]

imongUID: 140258

我记得我有个帖子谈过一点关于T作文的。
不知道现在放在哪里了。也许在精华区。搜索一下 标题里面有 胡言乱语 4个字

山坡羊UID: 169978

没有搜索到，不过还是谢谢imong了

imongUID: 140258

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=189150

敢情是关键词记错了 FT

山坡羊UID: 169978

谢谢imong,虽然后天就要考了，现在看还有很有警醒作用，对于我来说就是例子更细化和绝对不要有语法错误（我打算花5-8分钟来检查了）

这几天比较郁闷的复习着说，因为正常情况下是得不到想要的分数了，但还要考，这种感觉就有点怪怪的。8月份的托福时希望自己有足够的底气了。