05年5月14日IELTS作文走题体验!!

dabin2010UID: 2101822

Reminiscing about my IELTS Writing Task 2 on May 14th, 2005

First I glance at the topic (rephrase according to the same meaning): some people think school leavers should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university.

Then I begin to write my essay.
(Recalling what I have written 3 hours ago)

Weather school leavers should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university? It is difficult to reach a unanimous viewpoint on this controversial issue. In my opinion I support that school leavers should continue their education without any interruption.

First of all, the education system is unremitting system. From primary school to middle school, then to tertiary education, there are some intrinsic links, hence we should not interrupt this process. If school leavers enter universities directly, they can keep their study habits that spend a great amount of time being formed. If they travel or work for a period of time, they perhaps forget the previous knowledge. Therefore, people should continue their education, especially for adolescents.

Furthermore, universities are big families for adolescents. We know that people who share a same age, a similar interest, a resemblant personality can become good friends quickly. Therefore, school leavers should go to universities immediately to expand their society ties which are essential to their future career. Besides, people can receive systematic education in all aspects in universities, involving practical education. Another important benefit must be mentioned, that is the various facilities on campus; for example, laboratory, gymnasium, library, sports field and the like. With these facilities adolescents can be more intelligent, healthier.

Maybe someone would argue that travel or work for a period time can increase school leavers ‘practical experience contributing to their future career. But I insist my position. How can they achieve practical experience? If they know nothing about basic principles of modern society which is full of sophisticated technologies.

In conclusion, I believe school leavers should go to universities directly and receive systematic education which will have them attain more beneficial knowledge, have them shape and perfect their personalities, have them be more adaptable to technically modern society.

After I finished the task2, I went back to check the topic, at that moment my heart hurt because the last sentence stated that “please discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the opinion” Then I recognized that I had digressed due to the habits of writing GRE-AW(arguing the topic). But it was too late for to correct this fatal error. Another reason is that I didn’t take any IELTS training courses and only did one mock test by myself before I took the real one.

3:45 PM
14/5/2005

check this report online:http://starfuture.nease.net/ieltstask2.htm  (upload at 4:00PM on May 14th,2005)

------may this mistake will ruin my whole effots, but life is a process to be savoured each of the way. I will never give up and continue to persue my dream!!!!

author: Da Bin   
        Electronic Information
        Hohai university of Nanjing

check this report online:http://starfuture.nease.net/ieltstask2.htm  (upload at 4:00PM on May 14th,2005)

蜻蜓切UID: 201589

可能刚开始都有这种毛病吧。
ielts最重要的就是看题，每道题目都一定要看。
ielts是任务指向性的考试。

可惜，遗憾

lucy_zq2002UID: 177408

此链接似乎是某人的blog<,是楼主的嘛?
初看楼主文章,总体感觉挺好的,果然是考过gre的,有些功底,鼓励一下:hug:

刚特意查了,今天的考题是问高中生毕业后不直接升大学,去旅游或工作一段时间,对他们的学习有何利弊?注意:考点中心是对他们的学习的影响.

这篇文章总体不错的,层次也还好.楼主请勿多挂念,可能考官不那么严格就过了.我相信不会太差的,偶多是正面鼓励,任何人,大家都要往好的结果想,加油!!!

ps:南京?hohai?河海大学?好像又不是:)

asdfsadfUID: 159574

没什么问题啊，有让步了就是把adv和disadv都讲了
我差不多也是这么写的，和楼主一样，我３月底考的gre　aw
学习可以理解为广义的学习，应该没问题的
我把答题卷写完了居然格子不够，超出三行．．．习惯了喝喝
他要不给我７分以上我去把british　council给砸了，哈

ttwwooblueyesUID: 186435

总体感觉不错，不一定拘泥于固定的形式（比如说ad & disad就一定要分四段），请楼主振作起来！